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Chapter 1 - the story lol

something i did for GCSE course work so enjoy ^_^

Chapter 1 - the story lol

Chapter 1 - the story lol
High school horror Youll never believe what I just found out! Gemma rushed as she sat down in her seat, she and her best friends where in their form room because it was break time. What! her three best friends said in unison. Their names were Cara, Carl and Daniel.I just found out that Emma and Thomas just broke up, again! she laughed The four friends are all fifteen years old, Gemma has long brown almost black hair, her eyes were a deep brown and she had a act before you think thing that the others had to hold her back to keep her out of trouble.Carl had short brown hair with the tips dyed blonde; his eyes were a light brown. He was the little monkey of the group.Cara had shoulder length blonde hair, her eyes a hazel brown with dark brown around the edges. She was the timid, shy one of the group.Daniel had short dirty blonde hair; his eyes were a light sea blue with a little grey around the pupil. He was the smart one.Again, how many times is it now? Cara asked Daniel handed Carl some money You win this time Carl. I thought they would last longer this time Daniel sighed oh well Carl just smiled at him and put the money away in his bag.Hey guys what lesson do we have next? Carl asked as the bell wentHistory," Gemma sighed, I hate history its so boring. They made their way to their history room and lined up. Their teacher arrived and they went into the class room and sat down.Alright class today we will learn a little about the great fire of this very school. He stopped and listened to the groans of the class. Alright settle down, anyway the fire happened about forty years ago and is believed to have started in this very room. The cause of the fire is still unknown, some people believe it was some of the pupils playing with fire others believe that it was a faulty gas pipe and a teacher had tried to smoke. But no one knows. Some people these days believe that the school is haunted by the ghosts of the ones who didnt make it out of the fire. There have even been sightings. But thats all make believe there is no such thing as ghosts He stopped and picked up work sheets now I want you to work though this sheet then get into groups of four. He looked at Gemma, Cara, Carl and Daniel but you four go with other people u never work when you are together. He turned his back on them Sir, thats not fair! Gemma moaned The class got on with the work and just about finished by lunch time. Cara and the others walked out to the field, Gemma started to run last one to the tree buys the ice cream after school. She laughed and ran off. Cara and Daniel ran after her and Carl just laughed at them, and then ran after them. When they got to the tree Daniel was first, Cara second, Carl third and Gemma last No . Fair she said between gaspsCara laughed looks like your buying the ice cream Gemma Gemma laughed with her I wish I never said that now they all laughed and started to eat their lunch I have just had a fun idea. Carl said suddenly Whats that? Daniel said with a mouth full of food Daniel swallow before u speak. Cara said with a look of disgust on her face we dont want to see what your eating Daniel swallowed his food and gave Cara a sheepish grin Sorry mother. Cara playfully slapped him and laughedAnyway why dont we stay the night in the school and see if its haunted. Carl smiledThat sounds like fun Gemma smiled as well she had always wanted to see a ghost Cool! so we dont get found out, Gemma you say your sleeping round Caras and Cara u do the same but with Gemma, me and Carl will do the same but with each other. Everyone nods Its a plan. Cara smiled and held up her water bottle. The others held up theirs as well and they smiled. After school they all agreed to meet there and they went off home to get every thing ready.It was about six oclock in the evening when four shadows slowly made there way up to one of the school windows.The four shadows pushed open a window looked to see if anyone was watching then disappeared into the window. Gemma slowly crept over to the door and opened it a little but. Every thing was silent, she popped her head out the door and saw that the cost was clear. She signalled to the others to say it was safe.When they had walked up to the school they had noticed how much more uninviting it looked in the darkness. It was bathed in shadows, the windows like eyes staring at all who pass. Sending a wave of tension into every one who walked past making them feel cold and uneasy. As you walked up to the school the uneasy feeling would be joined by one of dead and of being watched, most people at that point turn and leave but the four had continued to the window.The halls were just as uninviting, the shadows reaching across the halls seeming to devour every thing in their path the lockers looming above them.The only light in the hall was that from Daniels torch and that of the moon light shining though the windows. Gemma tried to peer into the shadows but they were so dark she could not see if anything lurked there. The four stayed close together listening out for any sounds as they walked down the halls looking for a open class room to set up for the night.They walked up the stairs which cricked from there weight sounding very load in the silence of the night, Gemma stayed close to Cara as Daniel and Carl stayed in front checking the doors as they went. Going slowly just in case they heard a noise.is it me or is this really creepy Cara said in a soft whisper it sends chills down my spine just thinking about it Carl muttered. They spoke only in whispers. Daniel and Gemma nodded their agreement. They continued to creep though the halls when they came to the one with their history room on it. Strangely this one had a strange glow to it. Daniel and Carl continued to check the doors, to their surprise their history room was open. They entered the room and set up their sleeping bags Gemma and Cara on one side Carl and Daniel on the other, they all got changed into their P.Js .Gemma wore a pair of shorts and a short sleeved top, both were red with blue around the legs and arms.Cara wore a pair of track suit trousers and a no sleeve top, they were pick with a horse on the top.Both Carl and Daniel wore shorts and tops, Daniels were black and grey, Carls were green and navy blue.Cara stood up I need the loo. Ill come with you just in case. Daniel said also standing up, Daniel and Cara went to the girls loos and Daniel stood out side the door, Cara did what she needed to do and went to the sinks.A sudden chill came over the room and Cara was filled with the feeling of dead she looked up at the mirror and saw nothing she looked behind her and nothing was there hummmmm she thought she looked back at the mirror and screamed in the mirror were the ghosts of girls who had died in the fire.Daniel heard her scream and went a pale white he ran off to get Gemma and Carl.Gemma and Carl were playing cards when Daniel burst in to the room,guys come quick Cara screamed I think she needs help. he looked scared Gemma and Carl jumped up and ran to the girls loos to find Cara. They arrived at the door.you two stay here Gemma told the boys and slowly opened the door looking inside. The chill still lingered but the ghosts were gone. Gemma walked in slowly keeping her eyes and ears open, she heard crying from the corner and went towards the sound. Every thing was silent apart from the crying.Gemma saw it was Cara crying Cara ! Cara are you ok. she knelt in front of her.Cara looked at Gemma with fear filled eyes. She suddenly flung her arms around Gemmas neck and cried onto her shoulder.sshhhh its ok Im here for you Gemma picked Cara up and took her out of the loos and to the others. Daniel and Carl looked really worried, Gemma took Cara up to the room they were staying in and sat her down on her sleeping bag Cara, what happened back there? Cara just whimpered in reply she still had that scared look on her face. Gemma decided not to push it any farther and went to the others and told them to not ask her about what happened, the boys nodded.After a while they got into their sleeping bags and tried to get some sleep.It was about mid night when Gemma felt a chill creep down her spine she opened her eyes and looked around the room. The windows had misted up and the shadows seemed darker. She felt like some one was watching her, she then noticed that Cara wasnt next to her anymore. She looked around and saw her in the corner asleep Gemma sighed with relief but she still felt like some one was watching her. She tried to get back to sleep after about a hour she dropped off to sleep. Next it was Daniel who woke up with the chill down his spine and Carl also jerked awake did you feel that. they both said then they laughed I guess u did. Daniel smiled yeah it felt like some one put a ice cube down my spine. Carl smiled lets get back to sleep and not worry about it to much. Carl nodded and the two went back to sleep.Suddenly all four jerked awake, Gemma went over to Cara because she had started to whimper.that was freezing. Daniel said yeah like having cold water poured over you. Gemma nodded her agreement.Every one fell silent and all was quite for a while, Gemma holding Cara gently. Suddenly a scream could be heard in the halls, Carl and Daniel shot up and ran over to the girls they all huddled together in the corner. Every thing was silent once again . The only sound was the heavy breathing of the four.Gemma saw something over by the door and peered into the gloom to see what it was, she court a white light and went over to see what it was. She looked out the door and saw nothening, she turned round to the others. Cara screamed pointing at the door. Gemma turned round and standing in the door way was a ghost. She screamed and ran back to the others holding onto Cara.The ghost walked into the room and others followed, coming though the walls and the floor they were all screaming now, all scared. The ghosts surrounded them, one stepped forward.you planned to spend one night here. he said in a emotion less tone but now u will stay forever. he smiled.The four screamed again and ran right though the ghosts, Cara and Gemma one way , Carl and Daniel the other.Gemma and Cara were cut off as they tried to get to the window , Daniel and Carl as they tried to find the girls.tut tut thats not nice. the ghost appeared now DIE!! the halls erupted in to flames fire burning their skin. They all ran again this time together. They were cornered in the head masters office. The smoke entering their lungs making them choke. Gemma was the first down shortly followed by Carl and Daniel. Cara when seeing her friends fall ran out the door though the ghosts again and ran to the class room with the open window. She fell just as she reached the door. The flames engulfed their bodies burning them to a crisp.When Gemma, Carl and Daniel opened their eyed thy shot up and ran to the class room with the open window , Cara was already up and in the room. They shot out of the window and down the road to Caras house.They burst though the door and slammed it closed. Caras dad walked out to see who it was who had walked in.dad! Dad its me. Cara said her dad acted like he hadnt heard her. He went into the living room when the phone rang, Caras mum picked up the phone. After five maybe ten minutes she broke down crying. Caras dad went to her and held her to him.whats wrong hunny? he asked her holding her its Cara. she sobbed but mum and dad Im right here. cara looked scared whets wrong with Cara? he dad asked calmlyshe. Shes dead her mum cried they found her body and those of her friends in the school building. They looked like they had been burnt alive. she cried into her husbands arms, he had tears rolling down his cheeks.Cara turned to her friends a look of horror on her face.that Cant be! Gemma said masking the same look as Cara. They all looked at each other in horror.  

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fuzzy_the_bear on June 29, 2006, 3:22:06 AM

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fuzzy_the_bearsorry people just saw something which i think is gay but when i wrote this story it had all the "" in the right places now it seems that they have been replaced by ?? this is really gay but please try to ignore it and tell me what u think i did this for course work so its not very good anyway enjoy ^^

Lash27 on June 28, 2006, 7:42:02 AM

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Lash27Huh... It's pretty good, I guess.. Except for the fact that on my comp(I dunno about yours) that quotation marks are question marks... It does that on my stories too. Oh yeah, I also got a story called High School Horror.