Chapter 1 - Good Deeds
Submitted December 2, 2006 Updated December 2, 2006 Status Complete | This is my first shot at a peom. its about giving, duh, it says so on the title. as i said before, this is my first poem ever so, go easy on me, ok?
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Chapter 1 - Good Deeds
Chapter 1 - Good Deeds
Everyday on the news
All these different times
we hear stories of a kid's abuse
and all these different crimes
They tell you about
murder, death, and war
and people having doubts
about living anymore
But when someone chooses to help
and their blood they chose to share
and someones life was saved
because they chose to care
About them we never hear
they're never one the news
they won't even get a cheer
of the good deeds that they chose
But to have a little heart
could mean all the world
to someone who is dieing
who won't be around anymore
But if u choose to give,
even if you did yesterday,
a little kid might live
to see his next birthday
So go ahead and donate
that extra body part
when no awards await
have a little heart
All these different times
we hear stories of a kid's abuse
and all these different crimes
They tell you about
murder, death, and war
and people having doubts
about living anymore
But when someone chooses to help
and their blood they chose to share
and someones life was saved
because they chose to care
About them we never hear
they're never one the news
they won't even get a cheer
of the good deeds that they chose
But to have a little heart
could mean all the world
to someone who is dieing
who won't be around anymore
But if u choose to give,
even if you did yesterday,
a little kid might live
to see his next birthday
So go ahead and donate
that extra body part
when no awards await
have a little heart
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Pabbit_da_Rabbit on December 2, 2006, 6:56:10 AM
That's sweet. It has a good cause and you wrote it very nicely. Props! *faves*