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Chapter 2 - ch2(song)

Maddie and Jack finly catch Danny Phantom... Its from Maddies point of vew and second ch is the same just with a song....

Chapter 2 - ch2(song)

Chapter 2 - ch2(song)


authors notes: this story is from Maddie Fenton's point of view, please read and review.... thank you! The song sung by SugarLand It's Titled I will stand back up Written by: Kristan Bush, Kristen Hall, and Jennifer Nettles It's kinda portraying Danny.

It may help when reading the story to ignor the song... I just wanted to put it in....



We finally caught him, Inviso-Bill

by: gohstann/Cheetahs_ speret



disclaimer: I own nothing, look it up...



Go ahead and take your shot

Let'er rip, give it all you've got

I'm laid out on the floor, but I've been here before



The day we'd caught him, Inviso-Bill, it was suppose to be... happy. The town was suppose to rejoice... and they did... for a second. We'd finally done it, hit him with one of our inventions. We cheered as he fell. “Wont Danny be proud!” Jack said.

“I'm sure!” I agreed. He landed... feet away from us, then the thing that made the day that was suppose to be grand horribly wrong happened...



I may stumble, yeah I might fall

Only human but aren't we all?

I might lose my way, but hear me when I say...

I will stand back up

You will know just the moment when I've had enough

Sometimes I'm afraid, and I don't feel that tough

But I'll stand back up



We'd finally caught him, Inviso-Bill, and it was suppose to be great. It was suppose to mean the end of the confusion, panic, and pain.... but it wasn't. More or less it was the cause...

I've been beaten up and bruised

I've been kicked right off my shoes

Been down on my Knees more times than you'd believe

When the darkness tries to get me

There's a light that just wont let me

it might take my pride , and tears may fill my eyes

But I'll stand back up



I cried when in the place of the infamous Danny Phantoms place lay our son. Our baby boy of 14. I cried when our daughter cursed us and held him tight in her arms. I cried when the Goth girl Sam could barley breath, and Tucker fell to his knees...



I will stand back up

You will know just the moment when I've had enough

Sometimes I'm afraid, and I don't feel that tough

But I'll stand back up









We'd finally caught him, Inviso-Bill, and I could not stand it. I fell to my own knees by my sons side and cried for forgiveness for I did not know. For a moment though I wanted to blame Phantom... say it was his fault, that he'd some how switched... switched places with my son, switched places with his fait... but, no, it was clear to every one, Danny my son was the one... the one we hunted... and the one we'd finally caught.



I've tethered all these storms

But I just turn them into wind, so I can fly

What don't kill you makes you stronger

When I take my last breath

That's when I'll just give up

I will stand back up

You will know just the moment when I've had enough

Sometimes I'm afraid, and I don't feel that tough

But I'll stand back up

So go ahead to take your best shot

Let'er rip, give it all you've got

You might win this round, but you can't keep me down



We'd finally caught him, Inviso-Bill, and that... that was only the beginning of our nightmares....



I will stand back up

You will know just the moment when I've had enough

Sometimes I'm afraid, and I don't feel that tough

But I'll stand back up

You'll know the moment when I've had enough

Sometimes I'm afraid, and I don't feel that tough

But I'll stand back up



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AN: Okay... Please, please just review. I wont holed it against you if its a flame. Tare this peace to shreds and leave nothing unburned! I want to know... what I did wrong. I want to know what I can improve on and what I should get rid of and what I should add. What did you hate? What did you like? (If any thing) What do you think of it or... feel of it?

Thank you for reading.



Ann^-^


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jane210 on November 23, 2009, 9:20:15 AM

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jane210wow makes me wanna cry...GREAT JOB!! faves :)

Coolstra on March 10, 2006, 11:53:41 PM

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CoolstraMORE!

4catdog407 on February 5, 2006, 12:03:51 PM

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4catdog407Is he dead or alive? Pls write more.

darkXchild on January 26, 2006, 12:36:07 AM

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darkXchildwow.thats deep.that was really good and i liked the song.faves