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Goth and Shades little adventure

This is a story about shade and goth going on a little trip.

will they get along or will they beat each other up?

The story will have long pages,also include your fav chracters from silverwing.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Morning
Submitted: July 29, 2007 • Updated: July 30, 2007
Word count: 503 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 467

Chapter 2 - Friendship
Submitted: July 29, 2007 • Updated: July 29, 2007
Word count: 263 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 245

Chapter 3 - The Planning
Submitted: August 2, 2007 • Updated: August 2, 2007
Word count: 380 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 235

Chapter 4 - The Bug
Submitted: August 9, 2007 • Updated: August 9, 2007
Word count: 317 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 251

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FawnORion on May 18, 2010, 12:28:54 PM

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FawnORionHi awesome story by the way

Fawn: Has anyone seen my colony?
Me: *groans* I told you for the hundredth time and I'll say it again...YOU DON'T HAVE A COLONY!!!
Fawn: O.O; Sorry I'll just fly around. *flies off and bumps into someone*

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 12:28:11 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Laying by myself shivering alitlle)

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 12:01:45 PM

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tallestpurple101In burrow
Me:Iys alot warmer in here(Curls up and goes to sleep)

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 11:52:18 AM

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tallestpurple101Me:uh huh thats w......why w.......we need to g........get in the b.........burrow q.......quick

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 11:27:27 AM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Starts to shake and can see my brethe)not at night it drops b.......below z.........zero

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 11:18:31 AM

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tallestpurple101its okay i dont remember only my mom does

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 11:12:43 AM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101that was what song was playing when I was taken away from my mom

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 11:08:48 AM

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tallestpurple101yes its very cool

tallestpurple101 on August 8, 2007, 10:56:39 AM

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tallestpurple101apparently they havnt fixed it completely and okay

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 11:10:44 AM

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tallestpurple101yeah i know it sucks

tallestpurple101 on August 7, 2007, 10:36:17 AM

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tallestpurple101well were stuck AGAIN when you get this comment back on my story KITTEN

Eriks_Girl on August 7, 2007, 9:20:02 AM

Eriks_Girl on (Chapter: 3)
Eriks_GirlAWESOME!!

Eriks_Girl on August 7, 2007, 9:18:47 AM

Eriks_Girl on (Chapter: 2)
Eriks_GirlAwesome!! I was surprised he didn't eat Luna too! haha

Eriks_Girl on August 7, 2007, 9:17:12 AM

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Eriks_GirlCute chapter! I like how it has all the characters!!

tallestpurple101 on August 5, 2007, 3:24:34 AM

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tallestpurple101Me:Unfortunatly yes there are many more they fight us for territory and food adn they are many more than just that one

tallestpurple101 on August 5, 2007, 3:16:30 AM

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tallestpurple101Cheetah:Oh well dont worry we will find some way to help(Talking very fast)

tallestpurple101 on August 5, 2007, 3:07:44 AM

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tallestpurple101(the cheetahs talk really fast)
Cheetah:As we can tell your all beat up and she has a slit throat

tallestpurple101 on August 5, 2007, 2:47:35 AM

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tallestpurple101Cha=eetah:We came as soon as we saw this yllow dot appear and we new it was our leader.

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 3:34:57 PM

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tallestpurple101ummm okay if I can

Me:(Lies down and turns to cheetah and al the cheetahs rush up to us EXTREMLY fast)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 3:18:37 PM

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tallestpurple101Well you went K.O and an owl carried you off Goth couldnt follow caus his winge were ripped so I killed the owl holding my neck like I was choking myself most of the time and know were here

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 3:12:13 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(sighs in relif because the pain stops and manages to wake you up)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 2:55:01 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:it stings my throat its alittle hard to breathe

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 2:22:39 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Coughs up alittle blood)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 2:16:49 PM

tallestpurple101 on (Chapter: index)
tallestpurple101Me:Use it on her first

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 2:04:02 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(follows owl and vaporizs it and takes you back to the burrow on three legs)
Me:I feel like Im choking myself

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 1:58:10 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Pokes you with hind leg not taking the risk of taking my paw off my throat)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 1:53:04 PM

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tallestpurple101uses 3 legs to walk over
Me:Yes for now they shouldnt come back anytime soon

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 1:43:43 PM

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tallestpurple101Enemy Mob:THEY ARE TO STRONG RETREAT!
Me:(still holding hand over neck to breathe)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 1:31:54 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Puts paw over throat so I can breathe)That was unatural meerkat behoviour

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 12:31:19 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Still alive bt dying again attacks second leader for you and kiils him)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 11:38:10 AM

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tallestpurple101Leader#1:(gets up and cuts my throat with her claw)Your friend will pay th price(Attacks)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 11:30:34 AM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Whispers)Just attack
Leader#1:SHUT UP YOU!(Hits me on the head with a big stick)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 11:23:34 AM

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tallestpurple101Leader#2:Yes but your beloved friend and leader shall still die (Puts his claw up to my throat) SHe will die and we will have victory even if you kill us if you kill us she goin with us

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 11:03:22 AM

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tallestpurple101Second leader:(Swatts him off)You cant get her back by fighting (Two meerkat pull me up with their teeth sunk into my arms)
leader#1:Careful or we may just kill her

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 10:56:07 AM

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tallestpurple101second leader:We just came to see if you oh i dunno noticed anything missing
enemy mod:(Evily laugh)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 10:48:41 AM

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tallestpurple101Mob leader comes up with the rest of the enemy mob
Leder:Hello annoyances

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 10:41:32 AM

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tallestpurple101Meerkat:Ummmm okay
later after the foriage everyone head towards the burrow that Im no longer in

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 10:32:19 AM

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tallestpurple101Oh yes I know I cant wait MUST SEE
My meerkat mob:YAY MEERKAT SHOW!

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 10:23:04 AM

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tallestpurple101thanks you(Nibbles on it like a meerkat)

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 10:16:47 AM

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tallestpurple101Happy almost B-Day my friend

tallestpurple101 on August 4, 2007, 3:17:23 AM

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tallestpurple101hi again

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 2:04:26 PM

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tallestpurple101Meerkat:Then you may have to hutn for it we hunt for things liike scorpions and other bugs

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 1:51:41 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:(Falls asleep and the same enemy meerkat mob storms the burrow and takes me with them)
Meerkat Learder:Thought I was gona huh?Lets go
(Meerkats leave with me)

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 1:52:55 PM

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tallestpurple101Meerkat:what do you guys drink or eat besides blood?

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 1:10:01 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:Good (Lays head down unsuspecting of the danger around me)

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 12:56:40 PM

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tallestpurple101Me;Shouldnt you guiys fraige with them Im fine just need alittle rest

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 12:45:19 PM

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tallestpurple101Me:I think i will just lay here

tallestpurple101 on August 3, 2007, 2:35:05 AM

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tallestpurple101Emily Im sure you know by now the comment boxes arnt working they still work in stories for some reason oh and good story

goth4ever on August 3, 2007, 12:25:32 PM

goth4ever on (Chapter: index)
goth4everi know!!!isnt it awful.i hope they fix it soon.

thank you.

KionaKina on July 30, 2007, 11:27:06 AM

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KionaKinaThat was another aweosme chappie. ^^ Goth is kewl

goth4ever on July 31, 2007, 12:56:52 PM

goth4ever on (Chapter: 2)
goth4everYes,goth is very cool but handsome^^

KionaKina on July 30, 2007, 11:26:07 AM

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KionaKinaheh, cute first chappie

goth4ever on July 31, 2007, 12:55:52 PM

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goth4everthanks^^