Chapter 1 - I know omeone
Submitted July 25, 2005 Updated July 25, 2005 Status Incomplete | Just a little thing i thought up. Better read it now befor i lose my nerve of having it stay (if you like hopeless lovey thingys then read)
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Chapter 1 - I know omeone
Chapter 1 - I know omeone
I know someone.
We talk almost everyday
We'll meet eachother in the same place
Just like we've been doing for almost a year
I know someone
We talk for hours on end
Until the once fallen sun rises
Then comes the words "goodnight"
I know someone
They're unpredictable
Once I think i figured them out
They turn around and fool me again
I know someone
I don't judge them by looks
or by talent
for I am blind to truely see them
I know someone
We part ways at the end of the night
They know I'll be back
but sometimes I question them
I sit alone
Just after my blind incounter
I wonder if they ever think
about what I've said
or what I've done
do they truely mean what they say?
do they truely care?
But As soon as I see my someone
all those thoughts fade
I can truely tell
They mean every last word
I've been called fool
hopeless
lust strucken
heart sick
and worthless
but I know someone who makes all those words go away
I know someone i feel safe around
that i can tell anything too
I know someone i'm in love with
the one who stole my heart
I know someone
my someone...
We talk almost everyday
We'll meet eachother in the same place
Just like we've been doing for almost a year
I know someone
We talk for hours on end
Until the once fallen sun rises
Then comes the words "goodnight"
I know someone
They're unpredictable
Once I think i figured them out
They turn around and fool me again
I know someone
I don't judge them by looks
or by talent
for I am blind to truely see them
I know someone
We part ways at the end of the night
They know I'll be back
but sometimes I question them
I sit alone
Just after my blind incounter
I wonder if they ever think
about what I've said
or what I've done
do they truely mean what they say?
do they truely care?
But As soon as I see my someone
all those thoughts fade
I can truely tell
They mean every last word
I've been called fool
hopeless
lust strucken
heart sick
and worthless
but I know someone who makes all those words go away
I know someone i feel safe around
that i can tell anything too
I know someone i'm in love with
the one who stole my heart
I know someone
my someone...
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YukinaObbsessionist on July 26, 2005, 3:19:11 PM
Not bad, not bad at all, you spelled encounter wrong, but otherwise nice job indeed. I like it, keep it up mister, this is pretty cool. I have some guesses as to this someone, anyway write more, sorry for lack of enthusiasim, which I usually have, but I'm a bit wiped and stuff, no big, anyway nice work, do more, *tacklez/hugglez* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~LUVZ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (P.S. It's in my favez) (~_^)MysteriousMindReader on July 26, 2005, 8:57:31 AM
o_o its so beautiful. T_T *sniff* your a genius! >_< the greatest mastermind of all!! keep it up or there WILL be hell to pay. -_-. And im the first to comment (really XD)grave_keeper on July 25, 2005, 10:53:15 AM
grave_keeper on
I have no comment **hides under rock** (this doesn't count as a comment >_>)