The Legend of Blaze: Arise of the Fire Warrior
Submitted June 1, 2008 Updated October 7, 2008 Status Incomplete | In a world where animals speak and act like humans, a cat named Blaze is the heir to the leader of his home. However, a dark threat is lurking, and Blaze will have to master the ways of his father's mysterous sword if they are to survive.
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Two Lords
Submitted: June 1, 2008 • Updated: July 29, 2008
Word count: 1984 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 458
Chapter 2 - Blaze, the young warrior
Submitted: June 1, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 2133 • Size: 11k • Comments: 4 • views: 450
Chapter 3 - Russetfur's Preminition
Submitted: June 4, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 3111 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 460
Chapter 4 - The Great Spring Feast
Submitted: June 14, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 2614 • Size: 13k • Comments: 6 • views: 655
Chapter 5 - Battle Plans
Submitted: June 14, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 4056 • Size: 21k • Comments: 2 • views: 435
Chapter 6 - The Unexpected Fight
Submitted: June 25, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 2932 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 423
Chapter 7 - The demon within
Submitted: October 7, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 3726 • Size: 20k • Comments: 2 • views: 409
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darkwolf333 on November 26, 2008, 5:35:52 AM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 7)
I love this. U description is good. Tell me when u have more updarkwolf333 on November 21, 2008, 3:26:46 PM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 6)
Cool. Nicely written. Sorry haven't read in awhile I've been so distractedwagz20 on October 22, 2008, 4:35:59 AM
wagz20 on (Chapter: 4)
damn, that feast sounded delishous! my mouth was watering, lmao. just another way of me saying great description. i felt like Smokey, he's like the loveable little gluton XDooo Blaze and admirer >_O. i do like romance, weather the story is all romance or just has a love story within it makes it more interesting. and of course, typical, the guy doesn't get it, lol. but Blaze is a good guy though and likeable :)
great work, really liked this chapter! good ending, makes me want to read more.
darkwolf333 on October 21, 2008, 11:13:55 AM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 5)
Wow this is really good .wagz20 on October 20, 2008, 7:29:16 AM
wagz20 on (Chapter: 3)
ok, now it's getting started, the plot thikens. once again you're very good with description and detail, really paints and picture. and once again you have a character (Dinn) with their own style with their speech like Rusty. you may want to look over this again, real little stuff, just some names not capitalized in the begining.
great forshadowing at the end, that preminition was ominous, it was those dogs/wolves in the first chapter right? yeah, really want to read on when i get the chance, great work
wagz20 on October 20, 2008, 7:20:47 AM
wagz20 on (Chapter: 2)
man, i really need to catch up with this. i guess it's just a pretty calm start, it's just introducing some characters and their personalties such as Blaze and his family (his dad sounds cool)as well as the setting. that little Rusty is a trip! ^_^ i like what ya did with her speech.
So very good intro, hope more happens next chapter, but the important thing is they caught da huge fishy! XD
darkwolf333 on October 16, 2008, 5:49:44 PM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 4)
I love ur story .darkwolf333 on October 11, 2008, 9:24:57 AM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 3)
nice I like Rusty and Blazedarkwolf333 on October 9, 2008, 11:25:50 AM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 2)
Nicley written. If It was a real book, I'd read it. You should publish i was thinking this when I read first chapterdarkwolf333 on October 9, 2008, 11:20:55 AM
darkwolf333 on (Chapter: 1)
Awsome this sounds good. I like itAtomicMoat on October 7, 2008, 10:52:26 PM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 7)
Oo; I love it!! keep up the good work can't wait till your next chapterAtomicMoat on July 30, 2008, 9:56:38 AM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 6)
o.O .. MORE I want more .. you can't just leave it there .. please hurry up with the next chapterAtomicMoat on July 30, 2008, 9:33:51 AM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 5)
wow I like how the story is moving along nowAtomicMoat on July 29, 2008, 11:00:16 PM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 4)
oo cool love how the story is going^^ you are great at this
AtomicMoat on July 29, 2008, 3:32:12 AM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 3)
oh cool ness ^^ can't wait to read more .. think I will just go do that now XDAtomicMoat on July 27, 2008, 10:42:14 PM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 2)
really well written looking forward to teh rest of itAtomicMoat on July 23, 2008, 11:08:35 PM
AtomicMoat on (Chapter: 1)
oo good start,eagerly going to read your other chapters now
ShadowHeart17 on June 24, 2008, 9:32:03 PM
ShadowHeart17 on (Chapter: index)
hmm that is lyk FRIGGIN AWESUM!!!!I WANT MORE PLZ PUT MORE UP I WILL LUV U 4EVA!!
FizzyG on June 14, 2008, 3:54:41 AM
FizzyG on (Chapter: 4)
OMG! smokey is SO funny!its sweet, blaze and snowpelt
i wonder whats her secret...
FizzyG on June 6, 2008, 9:24:01 PM
FizzyG on (Chapter: 3)
amazing!your great with detail
i cant wait for the next chapter
i wonder wha will happen next.....
FizzyG on June 6, 2008, 8:57:43 PM
FizzyG on (Chapter: 2)
awwww!i think its so sweet Rosie and Russetfur
its nice the way the story started out and then turned into a calm moments piece
its so good!honestly
it should be a published book its so good! awesome job!
wagz20 on June 6, 2008, 2:13:03 PM
wagz20 on (Chapter: 1)
wow, I don't know too much about writing, but what I do know is this was awesome! great job! very descriptive, really painted I picture in my head as i was reading it :). which is what I like when I read. yeah, a very good begining like the whole animal/antro thing, sounds like a story I'd enjoy. hay, you should draw the characters in your story, just an idea. but anyway awesome job and I hope to get around to reading the rest soon.Maradara on June 5, 2008, 8:20:07 AM
Maradara on (Chapter: 1)
Awsome, i like it =)mew101 on June 4, 2008, 1:32:35 AM
mew101 on (Chapter: 3)
wow! so detailifer stuff!FizzyG on May 31, 2008, 9:19:24 PM
FizzyG on (Chapter: 1)
lol! about the last comment deleted!anyways like i said i loved it!
i loved the way you fitted animals into it
it made it more interesing!
good luck with the next chapter!^_^