Chapter 3 - Rain
Submitted May 6, 2007 Updated June 23, 2008 Status Incomplete | here are some poems that I've been writing over the months, hope you like
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Chapter 3 - Rain
Chapter 3 - Rain
I lay there in the rain
Staying in my pain
My blood covered body
The pain it's too much
My heart slows donw,
Taking my with it
as my breath is decreasing
My eyesight is blurry,
it's so hard to see
I am no longer breathing
the life, taken out of me
I say there in mmy pain
Underneath, the falling rain...
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Another poem about death, there will be more about death, it's what you call ... a habit of writing about death, some what of a... fasination
Staying in my pain
My blood covered body
The pain it's too much
My heart slows donw,
Taking my with it
as my breath is decreasing
My eyesight is blurry,
it's so hard to see
I am no longer breathing
the life, taken out of me
I say there in mmy pain
Underneath, the falling rain...
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Another poem about death, there will be more about death, it's what you call ... a habit of writing about death, some what of a... fasination
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JSLOVE on May 14, 2007, 12:02:58 PM
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muahahahahahahahahahahahahahirataitokyo on May 14, 2007, 1:02:14 PM
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....... intresting... -.-;;;JSLOVE on May 8, 2007, 8:41:55 AM
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why deathBE ALIVE
BE FREEEEEE
LEARN HOW TO SPELL
hirataitokyo on May 8, 2007, 11:00:00 AM
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what do you mean learn how to spell? but it's easy to talk about death, it's hard to write happy things, well at least for meSpiderMuffin on May 6, 2007, 11:33:17 PM
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That could be a song ^___^ So pretty =Dhirataitokyo on May 8, 2007, 12:35:29 AM
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REally you think so? awesome