Chapter 8 - The Dead
Submitted May 6, 2007 Updated June 23, 2008 Status Incomplete | here are some poems that I've been writing over the months, hope you like
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Chapter 8 - The Dead
Chapter 8 - The Dead
The Dead
I saw a dead person today
They were following me today
They asked me where heaven was
They looked like they had just died
I couldn't answer
It was confusing
Heaven?
Ha, heaven is whatever you want it to be
But that person went away before I could say anything
Dead spirits are intresting
You know?
they want to find that happy place
Where they can rest
Rest from life
Rest from their tiring life
Finally able to sleep peacefully
But there was one spirit that said
when they got to heaven
it wasn't like they expected
I'm not trying to depress anyone
I know that
I'm just saying I saw a dead person today
that's all
You know?
Someone:
Then tell them they'll be in hell anyway
Not one person can resist from doing one sin
Just because you commit sins
doesn't mean that you can't still
find happiness
We all do sins
Don't we?
Someone:
And life is a happy road, hm?
But just living thought life
Yeah dont we deserve something nice,
when we leave?
Life itself is a sin, so we go to hell
But no one deserves that do they?
Going to hell.
Not even the worst of people
Maybe.
Life itself is hell
We've all been through it
Whether now, later, or in the past?
So shouldn't we have
a happy place to be after we leave?
We'll leave thishell and end up in hell again?
That's not fair is it?
Yes, it's not.
Nevermind me
I'm just losing my sanity over here
It's all good.
Ain't it?
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This is actually more of a conversation than a poem. Actually this is a conversation I had with a friend a long while back, oh maybe around Julyish. So i was halicinating, and she got kind of mad at me.. as you can some what tell. Maybe not, but anyways. Hope you like my weird conversation/poem
I saw a dead person today
They were following me today
They asked me where heaven was
They looked like they had just died
I couldn't answer
It was confusing
Heaven?
Ha, heaven is whatever you want it to be
But that person went away before I could say anything
Dead spirits are intresting
You know?
they want to find that happy place
Where they can rest
Rest from life
Rest from their tiring life
Finally able to sleep peacefully
But there was one spirit that said
when they got to heaven
it wasn't like they expected
I'm not trying to depress anyone
I know that
I'm just saying I saw a dead person today
that's all
You know?
Someone:
Then tell them they'll be in hell anyway
Not one person can resist from doing one sin
Just because you commit sins
doesn't mean that you can't still
find happiness
We all do sins
Don't we?
Someone:
And life is a happy road, hm?
But just living thought life
Yeah dont we deserve something nice,
when we leave?
Life itself is a sin, so we go to hell
But no one deserves that do they?
Going to hell.
Not even the worst of people
Maybe.
Life itself is hell
We've all been through it
Whether now, later, or in the past?
So shouldn't we have
a happy place to be after we leave?
We'll leave thishell and end up in hell again?
That's not fair is it?
Yes, it's not.
Nevermind me
I'm just losing my sanity over here
It's all good.
Ain't it?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
This is actually more of a conversation than a poem. Actually this is a conversation I had with a friend a long while back, oh maybe around Julyish. So i was halicinating, and she got kind of mad at me.. as you can some what tell. Maybe not, but anyways. Hope you like my weird conversation/poem
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SpiderMuffin on January 4, 2008, 11:00:05 PM
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Hehe...awesomeness ^__^
hirataitokyo on January 5, 2008, 3:13:25 AM
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