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Only the tough survive

One day when Blazestar is named leader of ShadeClan all goes wrong...

Mean while Riverclaw is fighing for the right decison. Will he try to kill Blazestar or will he let his clan build up into a super clan with killing and violence?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - PROLOGUE
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 175 • Size: <1k • Comments: 44 • views: 756

Chapter 1 - STEALING
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 352 • Size: 2k • Comments: 11 • views: 365

Chapter 2 - NEW CLAN MATES
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
Word count: 259 • Size: 1k • Comments: 11 • views: 345

Chapter 3 - The gathering
Submitted: August 2, 2008 • Updated: August 2, 2008
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 379

Chapter 4 - THE PLAN
Submitted: August 2, 2008 • Updated: August 2, 2008
Word count: 339 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 324

Chapter 5 - THE NEW TERRITORY
Submitted: August 3, 2008 • Updated: August 3, 2008
Word count: 621 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 341

Chapter 6 - A NEW FRIEND AND MORE
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 411 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 311

Chapter 7 - MORE FRIENDS
Submitted: August 4, 2008 • Updated: August 4, 2008
Word count: 525 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 324

Chapter 8 - DANGER
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 5, 2008
Word count: 483 • Size: 2k • Comments: 9 • views: 335

Chapter 9 - REMEMBER THE PLAN AND THE PROMISE
Submitted: August 6, 2008 • Updated: August 6, 2008
Word count: 359 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 335

Chapter 10 - MORE DREAMS AND NEW CAMP!
Submitted: August 7, 2008 • Updated: August 7, 2008
Word count: 590 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 561

Chapter 11 - BUILDING CAMP
Submitted: August 8, 2008 • Updated: August 8, 2008
Word count: 414 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 348

Chapter 12 - THE STORY
Submitted: August 9, 2008 • Updated: August 9, 2008
Word count: 397 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 363

Chapter 13 - THE STORY part 2
Submitted: August 9, 2008 • Updated: August 9, 2008
Word count: 362 • Size: 2k • Comments: 8 • views: 613

Chapter 14 - THE STORY part 3
Submitted: August 10, 2008 • Updated: August 10, 2008
Word count: 320 • Size: 1k • Comments: 7 • views: 348

Chapter 15 - THE STORY part 4
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 13, 2008
Word count: 487 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 301

Chapter 16 - THE STORY part 5
Submitted: August 14, 2008 • Updated: August 14, 2008
Word count: 521 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 319

Chapter 17 - NEW WARRIORS
Submitted: September 23, 2008 • Updated: September 23, 2008
Word count: 239 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 579

Chapter 18 - Begging the journey
Submitted: June 28, 2009 • Updated: June 28, 2009
Word count: 296 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 251

Chapter 19 - Squad 1 Patrol
Submitted: June 28, 2009 • Updated: June 28, 2009
Word count: 320 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 566

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stealthpaw on July 20, 2009, 1:28:43 AM

stealthpaw on (Chapter: 19)
stealthpaweep must read more!!!!!!

stealthpaw on July 20, 2009, 1:25:08 AM

stealthpaw on (Chapter: 18)
stealthpawoh no!!!! who's yelling at them!!!

stealthpaw on July 20, 2009, 1:03:48 AM

stealthpaw on (Chapter: 10)
stealthpawmore!!!! must read more of this awesomeness!!!

platypusluver on March 27, 2009, 11:42:29 PM

platypusluver on (Chapter: index)
platypusluverThat's sad!

DancingWithFire on January 25, 2009, 5:27:18 AM

DancingWithFire on (Chapter: index)
DancingWithFirei love it :]

darkyoshi555 on September 24, 2008, 11:15:36 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 17)
darkyoshi555oooo I like Rip's new name, Bleedingsoul
he's gonna find Clawpelt? AWESOME! can't wait 4 more

Falconlobo on September 23, 2008, 10:00:42 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 17)
Falconlobocool

redtail on September 14, 2008, 8:25:51 AM

redtail on (Chapter: 7)
redtailnice story

darkyoshi555 on August 14, 2008, 8:15:15 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 16)
darkyoshi555thats sad...a relationship with a father and son being torn apart
great story :D it's getting very awesome!

icestorm on August 14, 2008, 9:55:39 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
icestormya. =(

Thanks!

Falconlobo on August 14, 2008, 1:56:07 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 16)
Falconloboawesome^^

icestorm on August 14, 2008, 3:14:10 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
icestormTank you!

Falconlobo on August 14, 2008, 6:57:38 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobonp^^

miknart on August 14, 2008, 2:15:57 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 16)
miknartAww poor Shadestar his son is with the enemy :(
Shadestar's son must be a good kitty to let her go XD

icestorm on August 14, 2008, 3:01:00 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 16)
icestormya! poor Shadestar! his is a good kittie!

miknart on August 13, 2008, 1:22:01 PM

miknart on (Chapter: 15)
miknartXDD Awesome.

>.< Darkstar is also evil like blazestar and tigerstar >.<

icestorm on August 13, 2008, 3:16:47 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
icestormya! THankies! =D

darkyoshi555 on August 13, 2008, 12:59:37 PM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 15)
darkyoshi555sweetness!

icestorm on August 13, 2008, 3:16:28 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
icestormThanks! ^^

Falconlobo on August 13, 2008, 7:16:47 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 14)
Falconlobocool

icestorm on August 13, 2008, 8:39:00 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
icestormThanks! ^_*

Falconlobo on August 13, 2008, 8:51:11 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobonp

Falconlobo on August 13, 2008, 7:18:41 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 15)
Falconloboawesome^^

icestorm on August 13, 2008, 8:37:41 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 15)
icestormThank you! =D

Falconlobo on August 13, 2008, 8:51:23 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobonp^

darkyoshi555 on August 12, 2008, 2:13:16 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 14)
darkyoshi555oh no! i have a feeling that this is going to end by one of them being killed!
eep...

icestorm on August 12, 2008, 2:21:15 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
icestormlol! I'll tell you this, you already now that one of thems going to die, but none of them will die at the gathering! but at the gathering there will be trouble!

darkyoshi555 on August 12, 2008, 2:31:28 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 14)
darkyoshi555ok

BlackSnowFire on August 10, 2008, 2:33:21 PM

BlackSnowFire on (Chapter: index)
BlackSnowFireThis Story Is THE BEST lmao XP

icestorm on August 11, 2008, 12:10:26 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestorm^///^ Why thank you! =D

miknart on August 10, 2008, 3:07:02 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 14)
miknartYAY NAMES X3 OMG O___O THEY'RE GOING TO DIE O___O

icestorm on August 10, 2008, 4:19:55 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 14)
icestormLol! One of them MIGHT die. >=D

shadowpiplup on August 10, 2008, 8:01:03 AM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
shadowpiplupum...Icestorm?

icestorm on August 10, 2008, 8:42:36 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormya?

shadowpiplup on August 12, 2008, 2:38:51 AM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
shadowpiplupnever mind^^

shadowpiplup on August 9, 2008, 12:24:06 PM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: 2)
shadowpiplupOMG OMG! i cant wait for more i luv this story!

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:27:42 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
icestormGlad you like it! ^///^

shadowpiplup on August 9, 2008, 12:28:35 PM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
shadowpiplupglad you like my story's ^/////^

Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 11:55:36 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobocool story part one

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:26:48 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormThanks! ^^

Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 12:33:56 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboyou're welcome^^

Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 11:57:39 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 13)
Falconloboneat

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:26:23 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
icestormThank you!!

Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 12:33:33 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 13)
Falconlobonp^^

miknart on August 9, 2008, 11:31:08 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 13)
miknartcool *___*
our OCs rocks lol =3

i like my oc's mindreading powers xD
i wonder whos evil o___o.....
and who's going to die o____o......

XDD THIS STORY IS MAKING ME ALL JUMPY XDD

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 11:34:45 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
icestormyup!! ^^


You'll see who is evil and who dies SOON!!!

lol! XD

miknart on August 9, 2008, 11:37:07 AM

miknart on (Chapter: index)
miknartthe tension is peaking o___o..... i don't even know what that means but most people say it when stuff like this happen lol xD

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 11:42:44 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormLOL!! XD

darkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 10:33:16 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 13)
darkyoshi555wuh-oh...there gonna have to face something bad!

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 10:40:42 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 13)
icestormyup!! >=D

darkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 10:42:02 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 13)
darkyoshi555wuh-oh

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 11:10:14 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormlol!

darkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 3:14:57 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 12)
darkyoshi555cool, one of them will be swallowed in darkness!
is it mine? (oh wait, being swallowed in darkness is a bad thing...i think)
XD lol very good way to put our OC's right into the story like that!

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 3:16:12 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
icestormlol, thanks! Well swallowed in darkness like turn evil!

darkyoshi555 on August 9, 2008, 3:17:24 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 12)
darkyoshi555hehehehe in that case...i hope its mine! >=] i like evil things!

miknart on August 9, 2008, 2:36:38 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 12)
miknartAWW SO CUTE =3 I MEAN RIVERCLAW AND FLOWER THAT IS XD

OMG one of our OC's o___o........ NOOO o____o.......i wonder which one o___o......

o right COOOOLLLL XD OUR OC's ARE SISTERS XDD

can't wait until the next chapter =3

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 3:10:26 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
icestormI have already decied who will become EVIL. >=D MWHAHAHAHAHA!!

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 1:49:29 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 12)
icestormThe three cats are based off of my OC, Miknarts OC, and Darkyoshi555's OC.

shadowpiplup on August 9, 2008, 12:44:08 AM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: 1)
shadowpiplupAWESOME!

icestorm on August 9, 2008, 1:12:27 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
icestormThanks! ^^

darkyoshi555 on August 8, 2008, 4:32:57 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 11)
darkyoshi555getting better and better and BETTER!!!
SO can't wait for more!

icestorm on August 8, 2008, 6:37:51 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
icestormLOL! Thanks! =DD

darkyoshi555 on August 8, 2008, 7:50:18 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
darkyoshi555you're welcome! XD

Falconlobo on August 8, 2008, 4:13:10 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 11)
Falconloboawww

icestorm on August 8, 2008, 6:37:36 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
icestormThankies! ^^

Falconlobo on August 8, 2008, 6:56:05 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboyou're welcome

miknart on August 8, 2008, 2:32:58 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 11)
miknartXDDD AWESOME =] Rose and Rip are so cute =] o o maybe they'll be in love =DDD

Riverclaw and Flower are so cute in the beginning espcally Flower XDD

o___o is riverclaw seening things

icestorm on August 8, 2008, 4:00:33 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 11)
icestormlol, mabey

ya ^^


ya, oooooo

miknart on August 8, 2008, 4:01:44 AM

miknart on (Chapter: index)
miknartXDDD

miknart on August 8, 2008, 2:33:08 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 11)
miknartseeing*

darkyoshi555 on August 7, 2008, 8:09:03 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 10)
darkyoshi555oh my...Blazestar really is PURE evil! even as a child!

aaawwwwww.....love

icestorm on August 7, 2008, 8:33:17 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
icestormlol! yup!

miknart on August 7, 2008, 2:26:29 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 10)
miknartAWWWWWWWWW SOOOO CUTE THEY'RE IN LOVE XD Maybe that's why Blazestar is so Angry all the time, hehe cause he's go no love 0___o

Poor Blazepaw and Riverpaw when they were younger ;____; >3< stupid bullies..... i wonder which warriors they were o___o..... unless they already killed them o___o.....

icestorm on August 7, 2008, 2:28:08 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
icestormThe cats that bullied them are long gone. They either were killed or they ran away.

Falconlobo on August 7, 2008, 2:21:03 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 10)
Falconloboawww

icestorm on August 7, 2008, 2:22:00 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 10)
icestormThanks! ^^

Falconlobo on August 7, 2008, 2:30:20 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboyou're welcome^^

miknart on August 6, 2008, 12:57:49 PM

miknart on (Chapter: 9)
miknartOMG BLAZESTAR'S PURE EVIL EVIL I TELL YOU O______o I can't believe they did that >.< I CAN'T BELIEVE RIVERCLAW IS FOLLOWING BLAZESTAR JUST BECAUSE OF A PROMISE O_____o

though that pretty much means he's really really REALLY LOYAL O____O He must really love his brother then XD

icestorm on August 7, 2008, 12:38:22 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
icestormyes Blazestar is really EVIL! Yes Riverclaw does love his brother but he can't bring up the courage to no. Riverclaw hopes one day that Blazestar will see what he's doing but that is hopeing.-___- Blazestar is blinded by his ANGER. I'm gonna mention this in the next book, as apprentices some cats picked on them (they were smaller than most) so they decided to take out there anger on everyone and get power so no one could bully them.

miknart on August 7, 2008, 2:15:28 AM

miknart on (Chapter: index)
miknartOMG o____o

Falconlobo on August 6, 2008, 7:50:06 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 9)
Falconlobowhoa he's very evil

icestorm on August 6, 2008, 11:10:49 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
icestormYa!!

Falconlobo on August 6, 2008, 11:24:55 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboyup

darkyoshi555 on August 6, 2008, 2:46:16 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 9)
darkyoshi555omg!
that was a horrible plan!
so thats how Blazeclaw became Blazestar?
can't wait for more!

icestorm on August 6, 2008, 2:47:30 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 9)
icestormya! ANd ya thats how Blazestar became leader with his brother as deputy.

darkyoshi555 on August 6, 2008, 2:48:32 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
darkyoshi555yep...i can't believe Riverclaw promised to do such an awful thing with his evil brother!

icestorm on August 6, 2008, 4:01:40 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormya, he didn't relize th HUGE mistake he made.

Falconlobo on August 5, 2008, 7:05:47 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 8)
Falconlobocool

icestorm on August 5, 2008, 7:35:14 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
icestormThankies! =DDD

Falconlobo on August 5, 2008, 7:38:37 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 8)
Falconloboyou're welcome^

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 6:35:04 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 8)
darkyoshi555sweetness!
o poor little Furyeyes...uh oh, what's Blazestar gonna do to Riverclaw? i hope not anything bad!

icestorm on August 5, 2008, 6:40:22 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
icestormWell Blazestar see's Riverclaw as a loyal cat to him and him alone. He knows(thinks) he can trust him. So he won't kill him.

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 6:41:58 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 8)
darkyoshi555that's true, but he might get mad...

icestorm on August 5, 2008, 11:57:54 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormWell no theres a huge secret that has somthing to do with both of them that no other cat knows but them. It will be mentioned later in the story!

miknart on August 5, 2008, 6:07:19 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 8)
miknartaww poor Furyeyes ;__; he's all beaten up, i wonder what blazestar is going to do next o___o Riverclaw should've been leader >__<!!!

icestorm on August 5, 2008, 6:11:20 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 8)
icestormya! Blazestar is MEAN!! Riverclaw is the deputy so he will be leader....

miknart on August 5, 2008, 6:12:46 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 8)
miknarti say they should kill blazestar o___o......

icestorm on August 5, 2008, 6:19:24 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormWEll there afraid of him so they obey, if they don't obey they are killed. If Blazestar thinks some one is plotting aagainst him there dead. Thats why Riverclaw said in the first chapter that they needed more cats.

miknart on August 5, 2008, 6:20:48 AM

miknart on (Chapter: index)
miknartoo o___o..... XDD

darkyoshi555 on August 5, 2008, 12:47:51 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 7)
darkyoshi555wow, i can't believe that all these cats just keep on joining without hesitation!
well Rip did kind of...but whatever
this is getting really good!

icestorm on August 5, 2008, 3:41:18 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
icestormThats cuz they are loyal friends of Flower and Dust! thank you! ^^

miknart on August 4, 2008, 11:25:42 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 7)
miknartXDD yay new kitties too bad that's a bad thing o_____o..... XDDD but yay more kitties XDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 11:32:02 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
icestormlol!

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 10:31:54 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 7)
Falconlobocool

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 10:34:11 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 7)
icestormThanks! =DD

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 10:35:20 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 7)
Falconlobonp^^

kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:21:37 AM

kaitlin_mckitrick on (Chapter: index)
kaitlin_mckitrickWow! Really good story! FAVS!

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 10:32:13 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormThank you!! =DD

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:34:02 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
Falconlobocool

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 3:48:40 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
icestormThanks! =D

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 3:49:08 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
Falconlobonp

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:32:03 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 5)
Falconlobopoor flower doesn't know what she's in for

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 3:47:54 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
icestormya! Dun Dun DUN!

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 3:48:50 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 5)
Falconloboyeh

darkyoshi555 on August 4, 2008, 2:25:40 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 6)
darkyoshi555hooray! Clawpelt's okay!

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 2:30:03 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
icestormyup! ^^

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:29:45 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 4)
Falconloboevillllllll

miknart on August 4, 2008, 2:02:42 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 6)
miknartO____o Riverclaw gets to see his old buddy XDDD Yay!!!!

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 2:29:43 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 6)
icestormlol! Mabey! DON'T TELL ANYONE!

miknart on August 4, 2008, 2:30:44 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 6)
miknartlol xD

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:27:57 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
Falconlobodang

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 2:28:25 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
icestormlol!

Falconlobo on August 4, 2008, 2:34:22 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
Falconloboheh

miknart on August 4, 2008, 1:54:05 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 5)
miknartXDD AWESOME o____o the evil plan is planning along great, too bad that's a bad thing XDD

XD OMG Thunderclaw XDD lol that's the name of my OC XDD

icestorm on August 4, 2008, 1:56:29 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
icestormyup! Lol! Thats funny!

darkyoshi555 on August 3, 2008, 5:39:22 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 5)
darkyoshi555cool, a new member!

can't wait 4 more!

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 5:43:48 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 5)
icestormyup! There will be more soon!

darkyoshi555 on August 3, 2008, 5:45:06 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 5)
darkyoshi555yus!

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:55:19 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 4)
miknarto____o...... EVIL PLAN!!!!! BlazeCLAW TigerCLAW XDD both claws X3 and now both stars o____o XD

Can't wait till the next chapter o_______________o

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:58:39 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 4)
icestormoh yeah!!! I didn't notice that!! XD

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:49:53 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 3)
miknart>.< Blazestar i hate you XDD lol

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:52:54 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
icestormlol! I hate blazestar too!

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:46:16 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 2)
miknart>__< Riverclaw is being too Obeident >__< Riverclaw should've just yelled back like he did to Bloodclaw >.<

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:49:00 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
icestormlol! He's afraid! But somtime he will yell back! Opps! I said to much well you got a hint about what he'll do. kinda.

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:50:39 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 2)
miknartXDD hehe..... =P

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:40:33 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 1)
miknart;___; poor Mountainclan Kitties, they should take out Blazestar >__<

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:41:46 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
icestormlol! They are MoonClan kits!

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:44:03 AM

miknart on (Chapter: 1)
miknartoops XD sry XD i had bad memory XP

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:42:08 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
icestormand apprentices!

miknart on August 3, 2008, 3:37:44 AM

miknart on (Chapter: index)
miknart;___; poor Clawpelt o____o >_< BAD BLAZECLAW err BLAZESTAR XD

icestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:38:51 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormya! Blazestar is MEAN!!!

darkyoshi555 on August 2, 2008, 9:40:10 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 4)
darkyoshi555o no...this is going to end in violence...i have a feeling

wow this is really getting good!

icestorm on August 2, 2008, 2:15:09 PM

icestorm on (Chapter: 4)
icestormIt might! Thank you!

darkyoshi555 on August 2, 2008, 1:57:27 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 3)
darkyoshi555okay good, Blazestar didn't tell...neither did Riverclaw...

hey this is getting really good!

icestorm on August 2, 2008, 2:02:11 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 3)
icestormThank you!I'm gonna put more up somtime today!

darkyoshi555 on August 2, 2008, 2:04:14 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 3)
darkyoshi555YAY!!! i will for surely read it!

Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:37:56 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
Falconlobowhat's a vole and a magpie

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:17:38 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
icestormA vole is knda like a mouse and a magpie is a bird

Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:35:39 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
Falconlobooh okay^^

Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:36:24 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconlobothat's so wrong

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:16:58 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
icestormWhat? That they stole cats. yes it is wrong!

Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:35:54 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconloboyes that^^

Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:34:40 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboblazwclaw blazestar?^^

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:16:03 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormBlazeclaw becomes Blazestar

Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:36:06 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobooh^^

darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 9:00:22 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 2)
darkyoshi555REALLY COOL!!!
can't wait for more! *faves*

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 9:01:57 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 2)
icestormlol! There will be more somtime tommorow! Thanks! ^///^

darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 9:02:38 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 2)
darkyoshi555YAY!!!

darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 8:47:14 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: 1)
darkyoshi555o u were right there is one cuss word
o well, cool!

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 8:48:14 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: 1)
icestormyea. Sorry bout that. Thank you! =DD

darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 8:43:04 AM

darkyoshi555 on (Chapter: index)
darkyoshi555o noes! he's leaving!
cool story

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 8:47:40 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormyup! Thanks! =DD

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 7:19:50 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormThe Characters are on my BLOG on my profile. So if you want go read them.

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 3:16:26 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
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shadowpiplup on August 1, 2008, 7:00:40 AM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
shadowpiplupcan you read my story? it's named "The big fantasey war"

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 7:17:51 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormsure

shadowpiplup on August 1, 2008, 6:59:40 AM

shadowpiplup on (Chapter: index)
shadowpiplupcool!...luv it!

icestorm on August 1, 2008, 6:57:19 AM

icestorm on (Chapter: index)
icestormOkay its working now!!!