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Chapter 2 - never ending sadness- poem

This is a mix of stuff. a poem, a song, and some other things. It's supposed to be like what happens after Rin sacrifices herself for Sesshomaru sess/rin kind of

Chapter 2 - never ending sadness- poem

Chapter 2 - never ending sadness- poem
this is the poem. It''s how Rin died. i know it''s short and some of it doesn''t ryhme, but still hope you like it

A fearsome battle with a demon

A great lord battling and hears

from within

a girl cries out for the good demon

she jumps out in front of her lord

the evil demon strikes her in the heart, sending her forward

the girl''s eyes widen then go blank

the great lord freezes

for his heart has sank

the evil demon gives a terrible, cruel laugh

he comments on how weak the demon is

the demon tells him not to let off guard

the evil demon stops to laugh- as he was slain hard

the evil demon''s head rolls of his neck

as the good demons walks off, the girl''s death stuck in his head

suddenly a green ribbon passes by

the lord reaches up ahead

he grabs it and sees that it''s the girls ribbon

tears fall out of the demons eyes as he walks on

not knowing what layed ahead

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inuyasha_naruto_lover on May 25, 2006, 12:16:38 AM

inuyasha_naruto_lover on
inuyasha_naruto_loverA fearsome battle with a demon

A great lord battling and hears

from within

a girl cries out for the good demon

she jumps out in front of her lord

the evil demon strikes her in the heart, sending her forward

the girl''s eyes widen then go blank

the great lord freezes

for his heart has sank

the evil demon gives a terrible, cruel laugh

he comments on how weak the demon is

the demon tells him not to let off guard

the evil demon stops to laugh- as he was slain hard

the evil demon''s head rolls of his neck

as the good demons walks off, the girl''s death stuck in his head

suddenly a green ribbon passes by

the lord reaches up ahead

he grabs it and sees that it''s the girls ribbon

tears fall out of the demons eyes as he walks on

not knowing what layed ahead

this is what it says if you can't read it

inuyasha_naruto_lover on May 24, 2006, 10:27:03 AM

inuyasha_naruto_lover on
inuyasha_naruto_loveri know it's small right now, but i can't fix it yet. My stupid computer won't let me >.