Chapter 5 - Why won't you just tell her Max how you feel?
Submitted March 10, 2006 Updated January 11, 2007 Status Incomplete | What the title says!
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Chapter 5 - Why won't you just tell her Max how you feel?
Chapter 5 - Why won't you just tell her Max how you feel?
(Chapter 5)
"Hey Max I found one!!"Jaide said."Cool!!Lets go inside!"Max said.They made a fire got some leaves to make beds Jaide got some fish from the river by them and cooked them."Dang this is pretty good!"Said Max."Thanks"said Jaide.Max crawled and sat next to Jaide.Should I kiss her?Should I wait?What the heck Ill just kiss her on the cheek!Then before warning he kissed her on the cheek!"Oh sure Max thats the best kiss you got?!?!"Jaide said blushing."No way!"He pined her to the ground and kissed her on the lips this time!THey kissed for 17 seconds then Jaide pulled away...!"No this isent right she thought.She pushed Max off of her and went outside were it was raining.Max fallowed.When he found her he asked "What's wrong?"."Us is wrong...I'm afraid of how were turning out!"She said."Jaide I dident let you die cause...I like you from the first minute I saw you Jaide."Max said to her.Jaide looked down."Sigh"she did.Thanks Max you sure made my feel better"She said walking away."Really?"Asked Max."NO!"Yelled jaide.
"Hey Max I found one!!"Jaide said."Cool!!Lets go inside!"Max said.They made a fire got some leaves to make beds Jaide got some fish from the river by them and cooked them."Dang this is pretty good!"Said Max."Thanks"said Jaide.Max crawled and sat next to Jaide.Should I kiss her?Should I wait?What the heck Ill just kiss her on the cheek!Then before warning he kissed her on the cheek!"Oh sure Max thats the best kiss you got?!?!"Jaide said blushing."No way!"He pined her to the ground and kissed her on the lips this time!THey kissed for 17 seconds then Jaide pulled away...!"No this isent right she thought.She pushed Max off of her and went outside were it was raining.Max fallowed.When he found her he asked "What's wrong?"."Us is wrong...I'm afraid of how were turning out!"She said."Jaide I dident let you die cause...I like you from the first minute I saw you Jaide."Max said to her.Jaide looked down."Sigh"she did.Thanks Max you sure made my feel better"She said walking away."Really?"Asked Max."NO!"Yelled jaide.
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Tails2085 on March 11, 2006, 3:11:28 PM
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woah...nice chapter! ^^ Thay's great, can't wait to read the rest!!! *goes to read the rest*
Neopetgirl on March 11, 2006, 12:26:31 PM
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