Chapter 1 - Falling from the sky

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Girl from the sky

Author
japan_girl_168

Submitted
August 24, 2004
Updated
August 24, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 131
Comments: 19
Views: 2,022
Faves...: 6
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Poem I wrote based on a crossover fic I'm currently writing

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Category: Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series

Chapter 1 - Falling from the sky

Girl falling down the sky
With little hope she can’t fly
Sleeping inside her winged shell
So evil wont cast a wicked spell

Fate guiding her fall
So her destiny may stand proud and tall
Not knowing of what shall come
But still hoping she can find her home

Worried about her one true love
Hoping he is not in the heavens above
Missing that warm feeling
Of a kiss and the sound of him breathing

Heading towards a new world
To learn of her destiny word by word
In the care of a king
And carrying a special ring

With now a special gift
For the hope of the people will lift
Searching now for the one with the key
Now it is not the time for her to flee

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pookiebear on July 20, 2006, 8:09:11 AM

i loved it and kimmi90 shut ur @$$ up it was great

mikita_inugirl on December 18, 2005, 1:52:29 AM

I like it. It's good.

fariydust on November 11, 2005, 12:30:30 AM

That is sooooooooooooo cool and brilliant!! favs

Gatsu on September 25, 2005, 1:37:04 AM

If u wrote this poem, you must be a very smart girl, U did alot of thinking. U should have add some kind of song in the background so when other fanart
reads it would make them cry. I know it sounds crazy. I love your poem and your art work

TidusLuver on January 4, 2005, 7:18:49 AM

Wow that's deep ... I LOVE IT!!!

japan_girl_168 on October 17, 2004, 8:48:56 PM

i didnt evenTHINK that i would get some fans...i have no confidence

japan_girl_168 on October 8, 2004, 7:43:44 AM

haha..im amazed what this poem brought to me^^im not confident of my fanfic and fanart talent. but i shall try my best ^^

maybe ill submit another chapter

Kaybo_Sasuke on October 7, 2004, 7:04:53 AM

I imagined it was a song and it sounded pretty kool ^_^

Sephir0th666777 on September 30, 2004, 10:30:55 AM

wow!
this is really good!

Yin-Yang15 on August 30, 2004, 2:15:56 AM

Wow, that's really cool!

Kimmi90 on August 27, 2004, 5:53:21 AM

Mandark....get a life just cause she has japan in her username doesn't make her special, so just shut up and go to your mommy she is the only one who cares what you say!

Shantaru on August 27, 2004, 5:53:15 AM

and i do know her...she's my friend

Shantaru on August 27, 2004, 5:50:55 AM

mandark, these comments aren't because she has "japan" in her username...it's because SHE IS good at what she does...and if you don't like it, then don't say anything at all

japan_girl_168 on August 27, 2004, 5:45:15 AM

even actually the first two people who comment know im from canada and i dont have ANY japanese roots in my family.

japan_girl_168 on August 27, 2004, 5:40:24 AM

actually Mandark, im not even japanese. i dont even have any japanese in my family. check my profile. i am from canada! im a french canadien

mandark on August 27, 2004, 3:39:28 AM

probably half of the comments you get here is because you have the word "japan" in your name. You know japanese love themselves a little too much. i didnt read your story but I am sure it is nice. good job.

sheyla on August 26, 2004, 3:16:09 AM

i love it (add it to favs!)keep it up!

Kimmi90 on August 25, 2004, 11:10:55 AM

Good job Julie! it is cool me likes it! ^.^

Shantaru on August 24, 2004, 1:32:07 AM

o_0 this is...good! very good! you should do more poems jpg168 ^__^