Broken
Submitted December 10, 2006 Updated June 19, 2007 Status Incomplete | This is a Torn and Ashelin story. Ashelin tells Torn she is cheating on him and dumps him the meanest way possible. Can he ever win back the love of the person he truly cares about?
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Breakup
Submitted: December 10, 2006 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 959 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 310
Chapter 2 - Life Isn't the Same Anymore
Submitted: December 11, 2006 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1041 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 285
Chapter 3 - Razer's Secret
Submitted: January 14, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 888 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 252
Chapter 4 - Disbelief
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 16, 2007
Word count: 941 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 263
Chapter 5 - Torn Saves Ashelin
Submitted: January 16, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1110 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 317
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DarkJakAngel01 on July 29, 2008, 6:14:37 PM
Very nice!! You should do a sequelDarkJakAngel01 on July 29, 2008, 6:06:17 PM
Wow....A lot of censors....were they always there?TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 5:12:04 AM
Yay Im crying still!TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 5:02:44 AM
This is gonna be good!TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 4:58:22 AM
TT^TT WRITE MORE I'm crying here!TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 4:51:49 AM
Jak was righht *Crying*Torn(still crying): Y are u crying?
Me: Cuz I like u Torn and I'd hate to see u hurt.
firefaerie1222 on January 19, 2007, 1:54:28 AM
WOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!that wuz pretTY AWESOME!!
DarkJakAngel01 on January 17, 2007, 9:02:12 AM
This Story is so *beep*in AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Cookies 4 u!!!1firefaerie1222 on January 2, 2007, 4:23:45 AM
add more. now. grrrrrrDarkJakAngel01 on December 13, 2006, 3:16:04 AM
;,; That's so sad.Jak's HILARIOUS!!!!He's clumsy,yes?DarkJakAngel01 on December 11, 2006, 3:18:30 AM
OMG im gonna cry...:(-Katie
Um...Yea,Katie's here too.That so sad!!Ashelin's a beatch.And Jak don't Lie!!All the time....