Chapter 1 - help me/ poem
Submitted October 23, 2008 Updated December 27, 2008 Status Incomplete | some times ting we think r behind us r really on our minds constantly!
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Chapter 1 - help me/ poem
Chapter 1 - help me/ poem
tied to darkness my souls shakels are bolted beneth me
i need to get free but my feelings weigh me down
and memories are pulling me away
i am gunna tare apart ....
i need u take my hand and help me
the waves of paine are roleing in
at this time ur the only one that can help
lost at sea i feel the cold creeping up behinde me
i am crying crying
help me plz
i need u
i need to get free but my feelings weigh me down
and memories are pulling me away
i am gunna tare apart ....
i need u take my hand and help me
the waves of paine are roleing in
at this time ur the only one that can help
lost at sea i feel the cold creeping up behinde me
i am crying crying
help me plz
i need u
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lemony_chan on December 28, 2008, 1:56:09 AM
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For some odd reason, my favorite part was the first line. Your poem is very good, but maybe you should edit a bit before posting ?kairigrlkdhf on December 28, 2008, 10:55:47 PM
kairigrlkdhf on
I KNOW THE MISS SPELLING AND STUFF ITS JUST SORTS A HABBIT LOL THANK Ulemony_chan on December 28, 2008, 11:26:32 PM
lemony_chan on
It really is a good poem though :D