Chapter 1 - Vampire

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January 7, 2006
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January 7, 2006
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More nightly work of mine...a pome but I don't know if anyone'll like it...it's kinda dark...oh welll plz tell me what you think...

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Chapter 1 - Vampire

I am not what you are looking for, I have not the beeting heart, this relm is filled with death and no more life that can be sought.
I am not what you are looking for, for I have no running blood, my life is done and gone to waist for I am what you have sought.
I am not what you are looking for, my life means nothing now, I've left this relm of light and life and am never to return.
I am not what you are looking for, I have not the beeting heart, this relm is filled with death and no more life that can be sought.

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orianajones on April 4, 2007, 4:08:11 PM

i like this

kazuma_kitten on March 22, 2006, 5:14:35 AM

Thank you, not many people seem to like or comment on my stuff...eather that or no one knows about me yet so thank you for the comment and please spread the word.

sis on February 25, 2006, 4:40:03 AM

DUDE thats great I love it it RULES!XD FAVES!XD
http://www.fanartcentral.net/user_thumb.php?aid=sis

kazuma_kitten on January 12, 2006, 9:14:15 AM

thanks guy! uhhhh.....abers? how is it deep?

sesshylover on January 9, 2006, 8:22:02 AM

wow alex that is deep! but still i like it! ROCK ON!

zelda41 on January 8, 2006, 10:51:30 AM

AWSOME ROCK ON!! THIS POEM IS GREAT..umm continue the poems yeah

kazuma_kitten on January 7, 2006, 6:35:52 AM

yeah I kinda got off my rythem thingy there so ummm....yeah sorry about that.....