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Chapter 1 - my poems

just a couple of lil poems i made up hope u all like them

Chapter 1 - my poems

Chapter 1 - my poems




my poems





the dark clouds not a pretty sight I want to see the sun so bright but no its clouds and gloomy weather why cant the sun come back and give me my tan back I want to be sitting outside with my mini fan so sun please please come back cause the clouds are not amusing me








the sea it's a wonderful place to be by the sparkly blue sea were the dolphins play so peaceful and happily so delightful to see the lovely blue sea



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jesslovesbilly82 on March 3, 2006, 6:38:02 PM

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jesslovesbilly82omfg i love your poems . i can write them the would suck.

mystic_girl on February 26, 2006, 7:26:10 PM

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mystic_girlThe one about the sea is AWESOME!!

youre talented ^-^

dfelon on February 20, 2006, 3:29:34 AM

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dfelonI liked the sea one, it has a happy feel to it ^^

blazingales on February 13, 2006, 5:56:58 PM

blazingales on
blazingalesthis comment is by Vic. Not Eyre(the one that did Soren) Your poems are really good! please write more! plzplzplzplzplz

lildevil06 on February 13, 2006, 3:24:51 AM

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lildevil06thx every1 ill b doin sum more soon so keep lookin byes oh my first pic will be up soon nothin speical jus a lil thin done on paint

michy609 on February 13, 2006, 1:12:10 AM

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michy609this is so cool and we can be freind's i like your poem it get's my attention if u want to conntact me it's michy667 ok see yah

blazingales on February 12, 2006, 4:16:22 PM

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blazingalesso beautiful... please write more =D

weasleygirl on February 12, 2006, 6:42:53 AM

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weasleygirlnice job! ^_~

lildragonboy on February 12, 2006, 6:37:59 AM

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lildragonboyaww, me luvs! your a good poet =^.^=

yamiserenity on February 11, 2006, 9:30:55 PM

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yamiserenityWOW THEY ARE SO GOOD PLZ DO MORE LUVS YA XXXX

Vampire_Prince on February 11, 2006, 9:08:09 PM

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Vampire_Princecool ^_^ *favs*

woot! 1st comment!! ^_^

and sure, we can b fwends ^_^ *gives u specialful, new frend cookies