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Chapter 1 - Chapter one

Braveheart's story

Chapter 1 - Chapter one

Chapter 1 - Chapter one
Thunder! Rain! Fierce winds that blew the trees to a bending point! Angry yowls! Fear! Agonizing yowls as two cats were brutally murdered! A voice! “Braveheart! Wake up!” Braveheart opened his eyes and blinked, he was in the warrior’s den, staring into the worried eyes of his friend, Rainfur, “Are you okay? You were yowling as if you were being murdered!” she said. “ I’m fine.” came his reply. “Yeah? Well you were thrashing about like a fish out of water!” came the sarcastic reply of the clan deputy, Graystripe. “Come on, you are on hunting duty this morning.” he added as he left the den. Braveheart got to his feet and shook the moss out of his fur, yawned, stretched, and followed Graystripe out of the den. “C’mon, best fill up before the hunt.” Graystripe said kindly. Braveheart nodded and grabbed a vole from the pile of fresh kill, and settled down to eat it. Aren’t you gonna eat more than that little vole?” asked Rainfur, “No, a full belly will slow me down.” Braveheart replied coolly as he finished the vole quickly. “Well, I’m off.” he said as he headed of towards the woods

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Sunfur on March 7, 2006, 9:57:43 AM

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SunfurOh My Gosh. That has to be one of the best things that I have ever read! Please add more!

NilraTheHedgehog on December 28, 2005, 11:36:09 AM

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NilraTheHedgehog*yawns* Hmmm... Braveheart Chronicles, huh? *reads Braveheart* Omg!! I'm instintly hooked!!! Will you please write more??

Aspen on October 7, 2005, 11:15:24 AM

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AspenOh! I like this very much!
Sorry I didn't check before... you even notified me *Sniff* I feel so guilty.
But you HAVE to add more, and quickly!
I command it!
Chop chop!
Written in the true Warriors style, something very hard to achieve.
I'm sure this will turn out as a great story!

Riley on September 27, 2005, 8:22:47 AM

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Riley*applauds* *likes the dream-thing* Omigosh, updtae sooon.