Chapter 1 - Untitled

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Your Lies

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love_bunny

Submitted
August 30, 2005
Updated
August 30, 2005
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Incomplete

Chapters: 1
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Words: 45
Comments: 5
Views: 901
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Written 09-20-03.

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Your Lies

I loved you,
Trusted you
Believed all you said
You Tricked me
Decieved me
Told me all those lies
Don't think I can
Just forgive you
After all these years
I believed all you said
And now you lie again

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hp_dork316 on March 5, 2006, 10:57:11 PM

that's good

This_expression on December 6, 2005, 12:47:38 PM

Your writing is beautiful.

Broken_Wings_and_Black_Roses on November 14, 2005, 7:34:05 AM

very good! its really emotional and lovely. great job!

~"nice work...bone daddy"~

theGhostofInuYasha on September 2, 2005, 6:43:52 AM

Perfection! ^_^ *Favez*

JamesMarsters on August 30, 2005, 10:33:23 AM

cool. I likeie