Chapter 14 - the real chapter 13
Submitted February 19, 2007 Updated August 15, 2007 Status Incomplete | starts sometime in Fire and Ice i can't write summarys i don't own warriors
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Chapter 14 - the real chapter 13
Chapter 14 - the real chapter 13
-Chapter 14: the REAL trip to the moonstone-
-One week later-ThunderClan camp-
“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!”
Fireheart, “Huh?? What did Fernpaw do?”
Fernpaw, “I didn’t do anything!”
Fireheart, “Riiiiiiiiight.”
Swiftpaw, “Emberpaw is moping.”
Treepaw, “What? Why?”
Longtail, “Her firestick broke.”
Tigerclaw, “Finally!”
Treepaw, “Poor sissy….. I’ll go comfort her”
-wherever Emberpaw is-
Treepaw, “Sissy!!! Need a hug?”
Emberpaw, “LEAVE ME ALONE! I’M EMOING!!!”
-Highrock-
Bluestar, “I’m going to the moonstone and the following cats will come with me; all the apprentice except for Thornpaw.”
Thornpaw, “What why??”
Bluestar, “Because you already went!”
Thornpaw, “So did Brightpaw and Swiftpaw!”
Bluestar, “They’re going because of Frostpaw and Emberpaw! (And you’re a minor character.)” Thornpaw hissed but said no more. Bluestar, “Moving on, the warriors that I will take with me are Whitestorm, Fireheart, and Longtail. We’re leaving now.” Several cats cheered at this.
So, Whitestorm picked-up Nippaw and left.
-few fox-lengths outside of camp-
Coffeepaw, “I’m board!!!!”
Sugarpaw, “Race you to fourtrees!”
Rockpaw, “I’ll go too but, first I’ll stop by ShadowClan camp and pick up some music so we can have a dance off there!!!”
Coffeepaw, “Then let’s race there and back until Rockpaw gets his music!!!”
Sugarpaw, “Okay! Treepaw count down!”
Treepaw, “Right 3……2…..1….. GO!!!!!”
At that the three apprentices ran off. Longtail had a look on his face saying ‘what should we do now?’
Frostpaw, “OMG!!! WHAT IF THEY GET ATTACKED BY A BEAR!?!?”
Brightpaw, “What’s a bear?”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “No.”
-Halfway to fourtrees-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!”
Fireheart, “So Emberpaw, How are you?”
Emberpaw, “Stop calling me Emberpaw…. My new name is Emopaw…..”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!”
-fourtrees-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!”
Longtail, “Come on Coffeepaw, Sugarpaw, and Rockpaw. You have to stay close to us in WindClan territory.”
Coffeepaw, “Groooaaaan….”
Sugarpaw, “But you walk soo slow!!!!”
Longtail, “Deal with it.”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!!!!”
-WindClan territory-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!!!!!”
Fireheart, “Did you know that the moonstone gives you superpowers!”
Longtail, “WHERE DID YOU HEAR SOME THING AS MOUSE-BRAINED AS THAT?!?”
Fireheart, “Tigerclaw! That’s how I figure out about my ability to fly!”
-Flashback-
-end of chapter 8, after then battle in WindClan’s territory-
Tigerclaw, “Hey Fireheart, why don’t you fly home?”
Fireheart, “How could I fly home? Cats don’t fly.”
Tigerclaw, “Well……. Um ……. The moonstone!!!”
Fireheart, “Huh?”
Tigerclaw, “When you spend the night at the moonstone you might gain superpowers! Where else did Princess get her strength or me and my claws?”
Fireheart, “Okay that makes perfect sense! I’ll fly home!!”
-End flashback-
Longtail, “Are you serious?”
Fireheart, “Yep!!!”
Emberpaw, “Well I hope I get the power to control fire!”
Swiftpaw, “If you do I better be able to control water.”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
-Barley’s farm-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “Whimper….”
-Highstones-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “Finally! All of you stay out here! While I go and share tongues with StarClan!”
-Bluestar’s dream-
Spottedleaf, “Fireheart is a complete idiot!! I tell to beware of a WARRIOR he can’t trust then he thinks of TWO kittypets and a harmless kit! How mouse-brained can you get?? What did I ever see in him?!?”
Bluestar, “Ummm…. Spottedleaf? Can you just chill? Do you have any messages for me?”
Spottedleaf, “Quiet! I’m ranting here!!!
-The following morning-
Bluestar, “Time to head back.”
-Barley’s farm-
Barley, “Bluestar!!!”
Bluestar, “Barley!!!” then they gave each other a cat hug.
Then the cats wondered around to give Barley and Bluestar some time to catch up.
-With Fireheart-
Ravenpaw, “Fireheart!!!”
Fireheart, “EEEEEKS!!! DEAD CAT!!!!! DEAD CAT!!!”
Ravenpaw, “Fireheart you know I’m not dead you sent me here and you visited me when you brought WindClan home.”
Fireheart, “EEEEEE!!!!!! THE ZOMBIE CAT WANTS TO EAT MY BRAIN!!!!!”
Longtail yowled, from the other side of the barn, “YOU HAVE NO BRAIN!!!!!!!”
Ravenpaw, “When did you become such an idiot? You sent me here because Tigerclaw wanted to kill me for knowing how Redtail really died!!!”
Fireheart, “AHHHH!!!!! NOOOO THE ZOMBIE WILL KILL US ALLL!!!!” then he fainted and Ravenpaw just had a really confused expression on his face. Then Frostpaw and Treepaw walked around the corner.
Frostpaw, “NOOO AUNTIE IS DEAD!!!!!” then she left to freak out to every one else.
Treepaw, “You’re cute! What’s your name?”
Ravenpaw, “Whaa?”
Treepaw, “That’s a funny name!”
Ravenpaw, “I gotta go bye….” Then he ran away. treepaw looked around for a minute then ran off. A little bit later Frostpaw came back, dragging Whitestorm, and Brightpaw just fallowed them.
Whitestorm, “I assure you Fireheart is not dead…………….. Ummmm. He’s not moving and it doesn’t look like he’s sleeping so maybe he is dead…..”
Frostpaw, “NOOO!!!!!”
Brightpaw, “Fireheart I’ll avenge your death!! MEW MEW MOUSE METAMORPHO-SIS!!!”
Then Brightpaw was surrounded by light. When the light cleared, she was a twoleg with her ears and tail, had long white hair, and ginger eyes. Also she was wearing a skimpy white dress, white boots, white gloves, a white collar, white arm poofies, and a white garder each trimed with fluffy ginger stuff. (What? I like Tokyo Mew Mew…………if you’re confused she turned into a magic girl like ‘Sailor Moon’)
Whitestorm, “WHAAAT?!?!?”
Mew Mouse(Brightpaw), “For the future of the planet, I will be of service!!! Nya!!” Then she ran off.
Fireheart, “Oh hi, Whitestorm and Frostpaw!”
Frostpaw, “Auntie! You’re alive!!!!”
Fireheart, “Sorry I fainted from seeing a zombie you haven’t seen him around have you?”
Whitestorm, “There are no zombies here.”
Frostpaw, “AHHHH!!!!!!!!! ZOMBIES!!!!!!” Then she ran off screaming, again.
-With Emberpaw and Swiftpaw-inside the barn-
Emberpaw, “This is so awesome!!” Then she lights some hay on fire.
Swiftpaw, “No, it’s not!” He summons some water to put out the flame.
Emberpaw, “You’re no fun….” Then she lights more hay on fire and Swiftpaw puts it out. This goes on for a while or at least until Frostpaw runs in.
Frostpaw, “ZOMBIESSSS!!!!!” As she runs past she freezes the wet hay.
Emberpaw, “Zombies are flammable…” Then she left to set the zombie on fire Swiftpaw scowled then followed her.
-With Longtail-
Longtail, “Where is everyone?”
Then Mew Mouse ran by screaming something about saving the world.
Longtail, “Stupid twolegs although she did look a lot like……. No way it couldn’t be…..”
Then Frostpaw ran by. Frostpaw, “AHHHH!!!! ZOMBIESS!!!!”
Then it was Fireheart, “AHHH!!!!! ZOMBIE!!!
After that, Emberpaw ran by. Emberpaw, “Zombiess!!!!”
Then Swiftpaw ran by and after seeing his mentor’s confused expression he explained, “Zombies are flammable.” And continued running after Emberpaw.
Longtail, “Zombies? What are they smoking?”
Then Treepaw wandered by. Treepaw, “Whaa? Where are you Whaa? Longywongytail have you seen Whaa?”
Longtail, “Whose Whaa?”
Then Sugarpaw and Coffeepaw raced by. Rockpaw holding an i-pod ran past being chase by a twoleg. Then a sleeping Nippaw floated by.
Longtail, “Great all the crazy ones find me…….”
-Few hours later-halfway to fourtrees-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “Twitch twitch.”
-Back at ThunderClan camp-
Bluestar, “All StarClan said was that Fireheart is an idiot.”
Tigerclaw, “But, we already knew that!”
Swiftpaw, “We also gained superpowers just like you said Tigerclaw!”
Bluestar and Tigerclaw, “WHAT!?!?”
Then the apprentice den catches on fire. Swiftpaw, “That would be Emberpaw! I have to put it out now.”
Bluestar, “TIGERCLAW I AM GONNA KILL YOU!!!!”
Then Tigerclaw was mauled by Bluestar.
-RiverClan camp-
Mudfur, “Whoa, Tigerclaw is getting mauled this time?”
-WindClan camp-
Onewhisker, “Hey Barkface what does that mean?”
Barkface, “………………………….”
Onewhisker, “Barkface?”
Whitetail, “He went in to shock…”
Onewhisker, “That explains the funny expression and that he’s not moving.”
-ShadowClan camp-
Nightstar, “PILLOW FIGHT!!!!”
-ThunderClan camp-
Willowpelt, “Wait. If you guys gained superpowers what ones did you get?”
Swiftpaw, “I can control water.”
Whitestorm, “Brightpaw can turn into a magic girl.”
Swiftpaw, “Frostpaw can freeze stuff.”
Longtail, “Nippaw can float……”
Swiftpaw, “And Emberpaw controls fire.”
Treepaw, “Tigywigyclaw guess what! I met this really cute cat at the farm!”
Tigerclaw, “Barley?”
Treepaw, “No, his name is Whaa!”
-End chapter-
-One week later-ThunderClan camp-
“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!”
Fireheart, “Huh?? What did Fernpaw do?”
Fernpaw, “I didn’t do anything!”
Fireheart, “Riiiiiiiiight.”
Swiftpaw, “Emberpaw is moping.”
Treepaw, “What? Why?”
Longtail, “Her firestick broke.”
Tigerclaw, “Finally!”
Treepaw, “Poor sissy….. I’ll go comfort her”
-wherever Emberpaw is-
Treepaw, “Sissy!!! Need a hug?”
Emberpaw, “LEAVE ME ALONE! I’M EMOING!!!”
-Highrock-
Bluestar, “I’m going to the moonstone and the following cats will come with me; all the apprentice except for Thornpaw.”
Thornpaw, “What why??”
Bluestar, “Because you already went!”
Thornpaw, “So did Brightpaw and Swiftpaw!”
Bluestar, “They’re going because of Frostpaw and Emberpaw! (And you’re a minor character.)” Thornpaw hissed but said no more. Bluestar, “Moving on, the warriors that I will take with me are Whitestorm, Fireheart, and Longtail. We’re leaving now.” Several cats cheered at this.
So, Whitestorm picked-up Nippaw and left.
-few fox-lengths outside of camp-
Coffeepaw, “I’m board!!!!”
Sugarpaw, “Race you to fourtrees!”
Rockpaw, “I’ll go too but, first I’ll stop by ShadowClan camp and pick up some music so we can have a dance off there!!!”
Coffeepaw, “Then let’s race there and back until Rockpaw gets his music!!!”
Sugarpaw, “Okay! Treepaw count down!”
Treepaw, “Right 3……2…..1….. GO!!!!!”
At that the three apprentices ran off. Longtail had a look on his face saying ‘what should we do now?’
Frostpaw, “OMG!!! WHAT IF THEY GET ATTACKED BY A BEAR!?!?”
Brightpaw, “What’s a bear?”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “No.”
-Halfway to fourtrees-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!”
Fireheart, “So Emberpaw, How are you?”
Emberpaw, “Stop calling me Emberpaw…. My new name is Emopaw…..”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!”
-fourtrees-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!”
Longtail, “Come on Coffeepaw, Sugarpaw, and Rockpaw. You have to stay close to us in WindClan territory.”
Coffeepaw, “Groooaaaan….”
Sugarpaw, “But you walk soo slow!!!!”
Longtail, “Deal with it.”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!!!!”
-WindClan territory-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!!!!!”
Fireheart, “Did you know that the moonstone gives you superpowers!”
Longtail, “WHERE DID YOU HEAR SOME THING AS MOUSE-BRAINED AS THAT?!?”
Fireheart, “Tigerclaw! That’s how I figure out about my ability to fly!”
-Flashback-
-end of chapter 8, after then battle in WindClan’s territory-
Tigerclaw, “Hey Fireheart, why don’t you fly home?”
Fireheart, “How could I fly home? Cats don’t fly.”
Tigerclaw, “Well……. Um ……. The moonstone!!!”
Fireheart, “Huh?”
Tigerclaw, “When you spend the night at the moonstone you might gain superpowers! Where else did Princess get her strength or me and my claws?”
Fireheart, “Okay that makes perfect sense! I’ll fly home!!”
-End flashback-
Longtail, “Are you serious?”
Fireheart, “Yep!!!”
Emberpaw, “Well I hope I get the power to control fire!”
Swiftpaw, “If you do I better be able to control water.”
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
-Barley’s farm-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “Whimper….”
-Highstones-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “Finally! All of you stay out here! While I go and share tongues with StarClan!”
-Bluestar’s dream-
Spottedleaf, “Fireheart is a complete idiot!! I tell to beware of a WARRIOR he can’t trust then he thinks of TWO kittypets and a harmless kit! How mouse-brained can you get?? What did I ever see in him?!?”
Bluestar, “Ummm…. Spottedleaf? Can you just chill? Do you have any messages for me?”
Spottedleaf, “Quiet! I’m ranting here!!!
-The following morning-
Bluestar, “Time to head back.”
-Barley’s farm-
Barley, “Bluestar!!!”
Bluestar, “Barley!!!” then they gave each other a cat hug.
Then the cats wondered around to give Barley and Bluestar some time to catch up.
-With Fireheart-
Ravenpaw, “Fireheart!!!”
Fireheart, “EEEEEKS!!! DEAD CAT!!!!! DEAD CAT!!!”
Ravenpaw, “Fireheart you know I’m not dead you sent me here and you visited me when you brought WindClan home.”
Fireheart, “EEEEEE!!!!!! THE ZOMBIE CAT WANTS TO EAT MY BRAIN!!!!!”
Longtail yowled, from the other side of the barn, “YOU HAVE NO BRAIN!!!!!!!”
Ravenpaw, “When did you become such an idiot? You sent me here because Tigerclaw wanted to kill me for knowing how Redtail really died!!!”
Fireheart, “AHHHH!!!!! NOOOO THE ZOMBIE WILL KILL US ALLL!!!!” then he fainted and Ravenpaw just had a really confused expression on his face. Then Frostpaw and Treepaw walked around the corner.
Frostpaw, “NOOO AUNTIE IS DEAD!!!!!” then she left to freak out to every one else.
Treepaw, “You’re cute! What’s your name?”
Ravenpaw, “Whaa?”
Treepaw, “That’s a funny name!”
Ravenpaw, “I gotta go bye….” Then he ran away. treepaw looked around for a minute then ran off. A little bit later Frostpaw came back, dragging Whitestorm, and Brightpaw just fallowed them.
Whitestorm, “I assure you Fireheart is not dead…………….. Ummmm. He’s not moving and it doesn’t look like he’s sleeping so maybe he is dead…..”
Frostpaw, “NOOO!!!!!”
Brightpaw, “Fireheart I’ll avenge your death!! MEW MEW MOUSE METAMORPHO-SIS!!!”
Then Brightpaw was surrounded by light. When the light cleared, she was a twoleg with her ears and tail, had long white hair, and ginger eyes. Also she was wearing a skimpy white dress, white boots, white gloves, a white collar, white arm poofies, and a white garder each trimed with fluffy ginger stuff. (What? I like Tokyo Mew Mew…………if you’re confused she turned into a magic girl like ‘Sailor Moon’)
Whitestorm, “WHAAAT?!?!?”
Mew Mouse(Brightpaw), “For the future of the planet, I will be of service!!! Nya!!” Then she ran off.
Fireheart, “Oh hi, Whitestorm and Frostpaw!”
Frostpaw, “Auntie! You’re alive!!!!”
Fireheart, “Sorry I fainted from seeing a zombie you haven’t seen him around have you?”
Whitestorm, “There are no zombies here.”
Frostpaw, “AHHHH!!!!!!!!! ZOMBIES!!!!!!” Then she ran off screaming, again.
-With Emberpaw and Swiftpaw-inside the barn-
Emberpaw, “This is so awesome!!” Then she lights some hay on fire.
Swiftpaw, “No, it’s not!” He summons some water to put out the flame.
Emberpaw, “You’re no fun….” Then she lights more hay on fire and Swiftpaw puts it out. This goes on for a while or at least until Frostpaw runs in.
Frostpaw, “ZOMBIESSSS!!!!!” As she runs past she freezes the wet hay.
Emberpaw, “Zombies are flammable…” Then she left to set the zombie on fire Swiftpaw scowled then followed her.
-With Longtail-
Longtail, “Where is everyone?”
Then Mew Mouse ran by screaming something about saving the world.
Longtail, “Stupid twolegs although she did look a lot like……. No way it couldn’t be…..”
Then Frostpaw ran by. Frostpaw, “AHHHH!!!! ZOMBIESS!!!!”
Then it was Fireheart, “AHHH!!!!! ZOMBIE!!!
After that, Emberpaw ran by. Emberpaw, “Zombiess!!!!”
Then Swiftpaw ran by and after seeing his mentor’s confused expression he explained, “Zombies are flammable.” And continued running after Emberpaw.
Longtail, “Zombies? What are they smoking?”
Then Treepaw wandered by. Treepaw, “Whaa? Where are you Whaa? Longywongytail have you seen Whaa?”
Longtail, “Whose Whaa?”
Then Sugarpaw and Coffeepaw raced by. Rockpaw holding an i-pod ran past being chase by a twoleg. Then a sleeping Nippaw floated by.
Longtail, “Great all the crazy ones find me…….”
-Few hours later-halfway to fourtrees-
Treepaw, “Are we there yet?”
Bluestar, “Twitch twitch.”
-Back at ThunderClan camp-
Bluestar, “All StarClan said was that Fireheart is an idiot.”
Tigerclaw, “But, we already knew that!”
Swiftpaw, “We also gained superpowers just like you said Tigerclaw!”
Bluestar and Tigerclaw, “WHAT!?!?”
Then the apprentice den catches on fire. Swiftpaw, “That would be Emberpaw! I have to put it out now.”
Bluestar, “TIGERCLAW I AM GONNA KILL YOU!!!!”
Then Tigerclaw was mauled by Bluestar.
-RiverClan camp-
Mudfur, “Whoa, Tigerclaw is getting mauled this time?”
-WindClan camp-
Onewhisker, “Hey Barkface what does that mean?”
Barkface, “………………………….”
Onewhisker, “Barkface?”
Whitetail, “He went in to shock…”
Onewhisker, “That explains the funny expression and that he’s not moving.”
-ShadowClan camp-
Nightstar, “PILLOW FIGHT!!!!”
-ThunderClan camp-
Willowpelt, “Wait. If you guys gained superpowers what ones did you get?”
Swiftpaw, “I can control water.”
Whitestorm, “Brightpaw can turn into a magic girl.”
Swiftpaw, “Frostpaw can freeze stuff.”
Longtail, “Nippaw can float……”
Swiftpaw, “And Emberpaw controls fire.”
Treepaw, “Tigywigyclaw guess what! I met this really cute cat at the farm!”
Tigerclaw, “Barley?”
Treepaw, “No, his name is Whaa!”
-End chapter-
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