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Next Guardian: the Reincarnation

A dark version of the freedom fighter days. contains mild language and mildly risque scenes

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Round Two
Submitted: September 26, 2006 • Updated: September 26, 2006
Word count: 1663 • Size: 8k • Comments: 6 • views: 407

Chapter 2 - The Alliance
Submitted: September 27, 2006 • Updated: September 27, 2006
Word count: 859 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 433

Chapter 3 - Building the Legacy
Submitted: September 27, 2006 • Updated: September 27, 2006
Word count: 1020 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 507

Chapter 4 - Just When You thought it was Safe...
Submitted: September 27, 2006 • Updated: September 27, 2006
Word count: 609 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 356

Chapter 5 - Opposite Day
Submitted: October 2, 2006 • Updated: October 2, 2006
Word count: 655 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 370

Chapter 6 - Future Shock: Part 1 of ?
Submitted: October 2, 2006 • Updated: October 2, 2006
Word count: 633 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 326

Chapter 7 - Future Shock- Part 2 of ?
Submitted: October 3, 2006 • Updated: October 3, 2006
Word count: 1077 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 459

Chapter 8 - Things Explained
Submitted: October 18, 2006 • Updated: October 18, 2006
Word count: 838 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 434

Chapter 9 - Things're Heatin' Up!
Submitted: October 22, 2006 • Updated: October 22, 2006
Word count: 720 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 342

Chapter 10 - The First Real Loss
Submitted: October 24, 2006 • Updated: October 24, 2006
Word count: 503 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 324

Chapter 11 - Lost
Submitted: October 25, 2006 • Updated: October 25, 2006
Word count: 841 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 341

Chapter 12 - From Beyond the Grave
Submitted: November 14, 2006 • Updated: November 14, 2006
Word count: 678 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 506

Chapter 13 - Are they for Real?
Submitted: November 20, 2006 • Updated: November 20, 2006
Word count: 892 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 327

Chapter 14 - A Risk Worth Taking (?)
Submitted: December 2, 2006 • Updated: December 2, 2006
Word count: 630 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 328

Chapter 15 - Mourning a Loss...
Submitted: December 23, 2006 • Updated: December 23, 2006
Word count: 593 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 251

Chapter 16 - All That Glitters...
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
Word count: 608 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 328

Chapter 17 - Desperate...
Submitted: January 3, 2007 • Updated: January 3, 2007
Word count: 770 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 300

Chapter 18 - KO'ed
Submitted: January 17, 2007 • Updated: January 17, 2007
Word count: 970 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 477

Chapter 19 - Ready fir Issue 20???
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
Word count: 665 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 281

Chapter 20 - Supreme Sacrifice
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 848 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 319

Chapter 21 - Multiple Choice
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 888 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 310

Chapter 22 - Reble WITH a Cause
Submitted: February 15, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
Word count: 923 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 483

Chapter 23 - Doing the Right Thing
Submitted: March 4, 2007 • Updated: March 4, 2007
Word count: 752 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 314

Chapter 24 - Welcome Back
Submitted: March 21, 2007 • Updated: March 21, 2007
Word count: 546 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 247

Chapter 25 - The Winner is...
Submitted: March 22, 2007 • Updated: March 22, 2007
Word count: 656 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 331

Chapter 26 - Breaking Point
Submitted: March 25, 2007 • Updated: March 25, 2007
Word count: 509 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 261

Chapter 27 - A hard Question...
Submitted: March 30, 2007 • Updated: March 30, 2007
Word count: 789 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 233

Chapter 28 - Thinking (can be dangerous)
Submitted: May 5, 2007 • Updated: May 5, 2007
Word count: 966 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 316

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ThePowerOfNoof on September 13, 2007, 11:09:04 AM

ThePowerOfNoof on (Chapter: 9)
ThePowerOfNoofI need pointers on fight scenes. I don't think mine are very good...

ThePowerOfNoof on July 6, 2007, 1:02:33 AM

ThePowerOfNoof on (Chapter: index)
ThePowerOfNoofYou need quotation marks and apostraphies.

Flashthehedgehog on May 7, 2007, 12:06:42 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 28)
Flashthehedgehoglol, tactics of both the male and female. A very good and detailed chapter.

nextguardian on May 7, 2007, 2:04:16 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 28)
nextguardianLol, yup.

Male: What am I doing? No, seriously, I'm clueless!
Female: (rolls eyes)

Shadowthe_hedgehog on May 6, 2007, 3:29:31 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 28)
Shadowthe_hedgehogOo' ok... a bit different, but cute ^-^
Kawaii chapter NG

nextguardian on May 6, 2007, 11:43:06 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 28)
nextguardianYeah, it was supposed to be one of those emotional "OMG, what's gonna happen!" chapters. It didn't come out they way, though. It came out almost...perverted, which is DEFINETLY not what I had in mind, lol!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on May 7, 2007, 7:23:14 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: index)
Shadowthe_hedgehogLOL, it's cool, as long as nothing actually happens, it's not perverted

Shadowthe_hedgehog on April 1, 2007, 1:39:16 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 27)
Shadowthe_hedgehogLOL, man Ekyt is soooo shy, ^-^ nice chapter NG

Flashthehedgehog on March 31, 2007, 3:27:51 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 27)
Flashthehedgehoglol. As a true quote from the Kaiser Chiefs...

"I just remember that I'm you! And there's nothing nothing nothing I can't do!"

Nice job, in other words. Yeah it was DEFINATLY the power ring that made Eykt faint.

nextguardian on March 31, 2007, 12:26:32 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 27)
nextguardianHey, what can I say? The kid's shy. This is the classic "Girl meets boy, boy has no clue."

Flashthehedgehog on March 27, 2007, 6:00:21 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 26)
FlashthehedgehogWhat risk is this? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 26, 2007, 9:29:38 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 26)
Shadowthe_hedgehogomg, I hope Ekyt get's through with this!

Flashthehedgehog on March 23, 2007, 10:59:33 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
FlashthehedgehogIt's very strange these trials. I can remember one though where Sonic had to claim his innocence by fighting metal-knuckles. Very odd way of deciding things but then again the left-handed witches pretty much suffered the same fate.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 23, 2007, 3:37:45 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
Shadowthe_hedgehogGRR, you just can't stop with the darn cliffhangers, can you! Sheesh ^^
Nice work

Flashthehedgehog on March 22, 2007, 3:40:05 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 24)
FlashthehedgehogGood enigma

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 21, 2007, 3:03:42 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 24)
Shadowthe_hedgehogOOH, Gosh cut it out with the cliffhangers, sheesh ^^
nice job NG

Shadowthe_hedgehog on March 5, 2007, 6:44:11 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 23)
Shadowthe_hedgehogSweet, awesome job!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 15, 2007, 3:30:56 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 22)
Shadowthe_hedgehogSweet ^^ dang, that's a high position O_O'
Nice chapter NG

nextguardian on February 15, 2007, 4:06:58 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 22)
nextguardianIt's nothing Tiff can't handle.

Although I should have made sure it was cool with you first.

So, is it okay with you? ;)

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 15, 2007, 11:02:26 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: index)
Shadowthe_hedgehogYeah, it's cool ^^ Tiffany can handle stuff like that ^_~

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 15, 2007, 9:59:00 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 21)
Shadowthe_hedgehogaww, sheesh, Tails is always mistaken for as "too yound" and "little". Poor guy

nice chapter ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 15, 2007, 9:48:44 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 20)
Shadowthe_hedgehogOOh, poor Ekyt
nice job NG

Shadowthe_hedgehog on February 12, 2007, 12:03:21 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 19)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAwww, it's so kawaii ^^
nice chapter NG!

nextguardian on February 13, 2007, 9:03:50 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 19)
nextguardianThanks ^^

Orelin on February 12, 2007, 7:48:11 AM

Orelin on (Chapter: 19)
OrelinAwwww....What a sweet chapter, awesome job!!!!

nextguardian on February 12, 2007, 8:03:52 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 19)
nextguardianthank you ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on January 18, 2007, 9:38:27 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next ^-^

Flashthehedgehog on January 10, 2007, 11:55:25 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 17)
FlashthehedgehogGreat Chapter NG. It's an amazing chapter

Shadowthe_hedgehog on January 3, 2007, 9:52:00 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 17)
Shadowthe_hedgehogO_O Oh exciting!! Next chapter please ^^

Awesome work ^_~

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 27, 2006, 2:41:09 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 16)
Shadowthe_hedgehogSweet Chapter,

Tiffany: Great, first Sonic, now Ekyt, who's next? ME? Oops, better not jinx it ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 23, 2006, 1:37:43 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 15)
Shadowthe_hedgehogSWEET ^^ Poor Knux, I feel srry for him

Shadowthe_hedgehog on December 3, 2006, 12:19:58 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 14)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^ Great chapter!

I've gotta see the next chapter!

Flashthehedgehog on December 2, 2006, 6:53:16 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 14)
FlashthehedgehogHoozah! Great chapter. Thank you for putting Flash in

Flashthehedgehog on November 29, 2006, 2:36:20 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
Flashthehedgehog^^ Hooray! Well presented

Shadowthe_hedgehog on November 20, 2006, 9:38:17 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 13)
Shadowthe_hedgehogWoah, Violet left FAC?! Aw man

Nice Chapter

nextguardian on November 20, 2006, 12:26:15 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 11)
nextguardianViolet_Rose
MitchellP
Segathehedgehog

Shadowthe_hedgehog on November 15, 2006, 12:22:55 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 12)
Shadowthe_hedgehogO_O OH I HOPE EKYT IS OKAY!

Great chapter NG

Flashthehedgehog on October 28, 2006, 7:45:38 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
FlashthehedgehogWow I totally feel Eykt's depression.

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 26, 2006, 9:41:20 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
Shadowthe_hedgehogGreat work ^^

let's see, oh I've got one!
My best friend, Yotsuba, she's not alloud on FAC anymore

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 25, 2006, 1:33:11 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
Shadowthe_hedgehog*GASP* OH poor Ekyt!!!

I hope he's okay!

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 23, 2006, 9:02:09 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
Shadowthe_hedgehogOOh, I hope they get away O_O

Awesome work NG ^^

Flashthehedgehog on October 22, 2006, 7:37:35 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
FlashthehedgehogAwesome chapter. You're fighting scenes are awesome. I'm no good at them

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 21, 2006, 12:54:00 AM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWW, that's cute ^^
I'm glad Ekyt survived

Jo_Pen on October 11, 2006, 1:00:09 AM

Jo_Pen on (Chapter: 7)
Jo_PenI'm trying to imagine a 'sexless' computer voice....@_o
Lol. Nice twists and turns, NG! There is real substance to your story! You definetly are a qualified writer, and I'm not saying that lightly...^_^

Jo_Pen on October 4, 2006, 4:55:25 PM

Jo_Pen on (Chapter: 5)
Jo_PenTyke (pronounced TIE-KEY) But then everyone is gonna pronounce it the way its spelled, lol. Like TIKE. So please don't go with my humble suggestion, lol!

What's wrong with King Acorn that he is sick?

I'm also gonna work on coming up with a pic of Ekyt, just for fun, alrighty?!

And aren't humans like that in real life? Too bad.... : (

Jo_Pen on October 4, 2006, 4:38:16 PM

Jo_Pen on (Chapter: 4)
Jo_PenNice touch between Ekyt and Linda Su. I get to see where the whole thing began. ^_^

Jo_Pen on October 4, 2006, 3:59:03 PM

Jo_Pen on (Chapter: 1)
Jo_PenDude!! Nice start! I think I'm hooked, lol. Very descriptive and easy to visualize!

Thanks for everything, okaydie??
*Thumbs Up!*

Violet_Rose on October 4, 2006, 5:16:19 AM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 7)
Violet_RoseCool chapter! ^_^

Flashthehedgehog on October 4, 2006, 2:08:03 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
FlashthehedgehogOOh the bedroom! I'm sorry, lol

Nice sentiment with the kids ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 3, 2006, 10:18:01 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME CHAPTER ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 3, 2006, 10:06:41 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 6)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on October 3, 2006, 9:59:40 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
Shadowthe_hedgehogGreat Chapter NG ^-^

Violet_Rose on October 3, 2006, 5:25:03 AM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 6)
Violet_RoseYay! Nice! ^_^

Violet_Rose on October 3, 2006, 5:23:23 AM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 5)
Violet_RoseWow, nice chapter!

Flashthehedgehog on October 3, 2006, 2:07:24 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 6)
Flashthehedgehog^^ wow go Eykt!

Flashthehedgehog on October 3, 2006, 2:01:27 AM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
Flashthehedgehogwoah great story. And I totally respect Eykt for leaving the humans. If I got that chance I'd do that...well if I was with my parents

Pabbit_da_Rabbit on October 2, 2006, 2:28:21 PM

Pabbit_da_Rabbit on (Chapter: 1)
Pabbit_da_RabbitI usually don't read a lot of fanfiction, but I just started reading yours and it's really good so far, but if only the way it was uploaded wasn't so funky. Anyhoo, nice writing. I'll have to come back to this some other time and finish reading the rest of your chapters.

Flashthehedgehog on October 1, 2006, 11:40:47 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
Flashthehedgehogyay! Nice chapter. I used to love Nack the Weasel

Flashthehedgehog on October 1, 2006, 11:37:37 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
Flashthehedgehogoh wow. Robotnik sounded really cool at the beginning, well done.

Any in case you're thinking 0_o, I have tendency to like the bad guys, but I don't really like Robotnik...but anyway moving on ^^

Flashthehedgehog on October 1, 2006, 11:26:41 PM

Flashthehedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
Flashthehedgehogwow what a great chapter. I think I read a Sonic Comic where Knuckles had an evil twin. But then I found out there were LOADS of different Sonic Comic. Ah well at least I have some idea ^^

As for Flash, just in case you're wondering, he's on holiday after finished LoH. In....er...Australia..yeah. ^^

There actually is a Dorito factory there!

Well done

Shadowthe_hedgehog on September 27, 2006, 3:19:34 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
Shadowthe_hedgehogGREAT CHAPTER ^-^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on September 27, 2006, 3:13:29 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^_^

Shadowthe_hedgehog on September 27, 2006, 3:02:58 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
Shadowthe_hedgehogCool chapter ^^

Orelin on September 27, 2006, 1:36:28 PM

Orelin on (Chapter: 2)
OrelinGreat start to a great story *runs off to read more* !!!!

Violet_Rose on September 27, 2006, 1:04:18 PM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 4)
Violet_RoseWoah! Loved it! Awesome job NG! ^.~

Violet_Rose on September 27, 2006, 1:03:18 PM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 3)
Violet_RoseI'm lovin' How it's goin'! ^_^

Violet_Rose on September 27, 2006, 1:02:41 PM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 2)
Violet_RoseAwesome start! ^_^

Orelin on September 27, 2006, 7:38:47 AM

Orelin on (Chapter: 1)
OrelinThis is really good. I hope you add more soon, I'll be sure to take a good look at it! I't great so far!!!!

Violet_Rose on September 27, 2006, 5:34:02 AM

Violet_Rose on (Chapter: 1)
Violet_RoseThis is great to have :3

Shadowthe_hedgehog on September 26, 2006, 10:31:06 PM

Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
Shadowthe_hedgehogAWESOME ^^ I really like this story ^^