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Chapter 1 - my immortal song fic

a fan fiction of Jeremie and Aelita i made in my spare time... just to let you know they were the only ones that fit

Chapter 1 - my immortal song fic

Chapter 1 - my immortal song fic
This is a little song fan fic i made about when Jeremie had to put Aelita back into Lyoko with the virus X.A.N.A. put into her. the song is My Immortal.

Jeremie sat at his computer, talking to Aelita and she told him she couldn't come back cause she still had the virus in her. He cried and asked her many times to come back but she told him the same thing over and over. He told her he had to go, he logged off and sat on the edge of his bed, digging to plams of his hands into his eyes, with tears running down his face and hands.

I'm so tierd of being here,
supperesd by all of my childish fears,
and if you have to leave,
i wish that you would just leave,
your precencs still lingers here,
and it wont leave me alone.

These wounds won't seem to heal,
this pain is just to real,
there is just to much that time cannot erase,
when i cried i'd whipe away all of your tears,
when you'd scream i'd fight away all of your fears,
and i'v held you had through all of these years,
and you still have,
all of me.


Jeremie laid on his bed, with his face in his pillow crying. Aelita opened the window on his computer, seeing him crying. She sat there quitly watching him and felt bad.She began to feel sorta guilty.

You used to captivate me by you resignateing light,
now im bound by the life you left behind,
your face it haunts,
my once plesant dreams,
your face has chased away all the sanity in me.

These wounds won't seem to heal,
this pain is just to real,
there is just to much that time cannot erase,
when i cried i'd whipe away all of your tears,
when you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears,
and I held you had through all of these years,
and you still have,
all of me.

I've tried so hard to tell myself that your gone,
but thought your still with me,
i've been alone all along.


Aelita wanted to say "Im sorry Jeremie, I wish I could stay with you. Its not you fault." but she couldn't say the words, she was speechless and just watched Jeremie crying on his bed and finnaly, quietly, closed out the window an went out of the tower. she went onto the top of the tallest glacier in Lyoko and looked up. Then she wispered the words, and said them over and over until her voice was completely faded away.

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roxy on March 25, 2005, 1:00:11 PM

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roxypretty cool story i have the cd and i like to compare the songs too teentitans and some songs mach up very well.

becca_the_fox_demon on September 5, 2004, 4:41:47 AM

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becca_the_fox_demonthat is awsome! i luv it!

odd on August 27, 2004, 9:22:42 AM

odd on
oddnp... dont you mean Evanescance?
sure i will! ill look for a depressing song to use

RogueRider on August 26, 2004, 10:33:49 AM

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RogueRiderWow. I like the story. Isn't that Even Essence's song 'My Immortal'?
Please write more. I like depressing stories and songs.