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Chapter 1 - Untitled

i don't really know how to describe this poem really... i was thinking of turning it into a fanfiction in one way or the other, what do you guys think..?

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
I lift her face slightly,
her eyes fix on mine.
The tears well and shine,
I shall take my fill.

They call me the devil,
He calls me a brat prince,
I'm not.
I can't be.

'I want to be good! I would die for that!'


But please, i need one last time.
only one.
To feel the burn of last blood
from the person i love.

She understands.
She knows who i am.
She knows more than me.

I lean in to kiss her for the last time,
her soft, mortal lips on mine,
our tears mingle,
mine blood, her's salt.

She sobs, i smile
and tilt her head slightly,
bearing my fangs
I move in

For the kill.

i sadden as i feel her pulse
her gasps of pain
as she sinks slowly to the floor,
i sigh, soon to be no more.

Her heart slows,
the deadly pulse luring me,
I pull away, becoming dizzy,
"I cant let you claim me," I say.

I watch her lifeless body
her eyes, like glass
staring through me,
killing me.

I can't take it.
I close my eyes tight,
slashing my wrist,
the pain feeling slight.

I guide my bloodied wrist
over her bluing lips
squeezing slightly,
my tears the same texture, colour, taste.

"drink." I whisper.

"drink."







well, what dya think..? i kind of like it, mainly because i'm sad and i love lestat too much... please comment!

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HuranoSakura on November 27, 2006, 1:32:46 AM

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HuranoSakura*shakes of scarriness*uuuh....so scary,but so beautiful!

Morrigan_Vampiress on January 11, 2005, 6:17:46 PM

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Morrigan_Vampiress*is weeping* That is so beautiful!!!!! You actually feel that it's happening to yourself *wipes away the tears and adds to faves*

ShadowOfDarkness on August 29, 2004, 6:02:24 AM

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ShadowOfDarknesswhat can i say about this? beautiful cannot even sum up the passionate feeling in this poem. i wish i could tell you how much this means to someone like me. If you could write others like this then please do, it is a fantastic gift.

eclipsedmoongoddess482 on August 5, 2004, 10:48:40 AM

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eclipsedmoongoddess482WOW! This is beautiful! The emotion in this is quite tragic. I like that! Yeah, you should make a fic outta this. I bet it would be really good! *Faves*


BTW, Thankies kindly for commenting on my *Cough,cough* retarded V12 fic! I really didn't expect anyone to comment on it (flame it maybe, but NEVER comment! ^-^;)

unloved_poet on August 4, 2004, 1:53:27 PM

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unloved_poetwow thats really good!!! i mean..wow..thats just awsome..