Chapter 7 - What's wrong?
Submitted December 3, 2006 Updated June 29, 2007 Status Incomplete | Hinata's birhtday is coming up.... say lets have a birthday party at the Hyuugas.... Finished!!!
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Chapter 7 - What's wrong?
Chapter 7 - What's wrong?
IMPORT! MY SPELLING AND GRAMMER MISTAKES MIGHT BE EVEN WORSE FOR NOW I AM HYPER FROM 2 CLASSES OF SWEETS AND OTHER JUNK FOOD ITALIC IS SOMEONE THINKING now without further adu let the story begin
disclaimer I dont own naruto or any of the characters
"SUPRISE!" everyone in the room yelled and they came out of their spots
"T-Thank you!" Hinata-sama rarely shutter so everyone know she was really suprise and happy about the party
"So birthday girl" Ino stated "What does it feel like to finally be fifthteen?"
"I'm just so happy" Hinata-sama said with a big smile on her face
Everyone in was happy that the party was such a success. The girls talked upmust themselves. While Chouji was of crouse eating. Shikamaru was changelling one of the Hyuuga to a game of 'GO'. As the rest of the boys were talking and the sensi's were talking about missions and other things. Even the Hyuugas were chatting of people whom werent apart of the clan.
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After talking with the girls for sometime now she got bored and decided sit down on her knees on a mat and looked at everyone. She couldnt stop from wondering how everyone was having a good time but her. Sure this was her only party that her father actually let people from outside the clan join in, but somehow she still couldnt shake the feeling that even though it was her birhtday it seemed that everyone else was having a better time--well except Sasuke-kun but then again he never does anything fun.
Felling bored she looked at her dress which was a combination of kimono and a dress. The top was like a kimono it had a 'V' strap showing her clevage and the bow at the back and after the bow it was a dress one of the sides was spilt showing off leg. Her hair but into one bun but her bangs were still in place and she had a burette with the hyuuga symbol on it. While her sister wore a typical kimono her was done similar to her sister.
"Hinata-nee chan whats wrong... dont you like your party?" Hanabi-chan looked at her sister a bit worried
"Hai, but I still cant believe that they put the party together"
"So you like it then. Then why are you sitting this party is for you?" Hanabi-chan said in an confuse voice
"I just have something on my mind dont worry yourself about it."
"Positive?"
"Positive now go ahead and enjoy the party too!" Hinata-sama said in an reasurring voice
"Okay but dont forget that the party is for you and these are you friends!"
After her sister left Hinata-sama went back to thinking. Are you sure they're here for me or just the party? Hinata-sama went into deep though concersing whether or not they are her friends. Then she felt someone shaking her but it took her awhile to realize it then the person started calling her name
"Hinata-sama"
"Hinata-sama"
"Huh.... Hai" she looked up to see Neji-kun
"Hinata-sama are you alright?" Neji-kun said in his mono-tone voice
"Hai, I'm just thinking" she gave Neji-kun a half smile
"Okay but just dont over do it got it?"
"Hai, nii-san I promise"
Neji-kun than left and rejoin the party. Hinata-sama was once again alone and starting to think again but before she could get anything in her mind she heard Ino-chan yell
"TIME FOR GIFTS" Ino-chan said happily and grabbed Hinata (a/n: can ya'll give ideas on what everyone got for hinata? Cause Gifts is the next chapter)
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Srry I would have updated yesterday but my sisters hogged the computer well please give me some ideas and as always review and anonymus reviews are enabled! ;D
disclaimer I dont own naruto or any of the characters
"SUPRISE!" everyone in the room yelled and they came out of their spots
"T-Thank you!" Hinata-sama rarely shutter so everyone know she was really suprise and happy about the party
"So birthday girl" Ino stated "What does it feel like to finally be fifthteen?"
"I'm just so happy" Hinata-sama said with a big smile on her face
Everyone in was happy that the party was such a success. The girls talked upmust themselves. While Chouji was of crouse eating. Shikamaru was changelling one of the Hyuuga to a game of 'GO'. As the rest of the boys were talking and the sensi's were talking about missions and other things. Even the Hyuugas were chatting of people whom werent apart of the clan.
---
After talking with the girls for sometime now she got bored and decided sit down on her knees on a mat and looked at everyone. She couldnt stop from wondering how everyone was having a good time but her. Sure this was her only party that her father actually let people from outside the clan join in, but somehow she still couldnt shake the feeling that even though it was her birhtday it seemed that everyone else was having a better time--well except Sasuke-kun but then again he never does anything fun.
Felling bored she looked at her dress which was a combination of kimono and a dress. The top was like a kimono it had a 'V' strap showing her clevage and the bow at the back and after the bow it was a dress one of the sides was spilt showing off leg. Her hair but into one bun but her bangs were still in place and she had a burette with the hyuuga symbol on it. While her sister wore a typical kimono her was done similar to her sister.
"Hinata-nee chan whats wrong... dont you like your party?" Hanabi-chan looked at her sister a bit worried
"Hai, but I still cant believe that they put the party together"
"So you like it then. Then why are you sitting this party is for you?" Hanabi-chan said in an confuse voice
"I just have something on my mind dont worry yourself about it."
"Positive?"
"Positive now go ahead and enjoy the party too!" Hinata-sama said in an reasurring voice
"Okay but dont forget that the party is for you and these are you friends!"
After her sister left Hinata-sama went back to thinking. Are you sure they're here for me or just the party? Hinata-sama went into deep though concersing whether or not they are her friends. Then she felt someone shaking her but it took her awhile to realize it then the person started calling her name
"Hinata-sama"
"Hinata-sama"
"Huh.... Hai" she looked up to see Neji-kun
"Hinata-sama are you alright?" Neji-kun said in his mono-tone voice
"Hai, I'm just thinking" she gave Neji-kun a half smile
"Okay but just dont over do it got it?"
"Hai, nii-san I promise"
Neji-kun than left and rejoin the party. Hinata-sama was once again alone and starting to think again but before she could get anything in her mind she heard Ino-chan yell
"TIME FOR GIFTS" Ino-chan said happily and grabbed Hinata (a/n: can ya'll give ideas on what everyone got for hinata? Cause Gifts is the next chapter)
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Srry I would have updated yesterday but my sisters hogged the computer well please give me some ideas and as always review and anonymus reviews are enabled! ;D
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1mangalover on January 16, 2007, 10:58:13 AM
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sakura- clothes
ino- doll
naruto- ramen
sasuke- ?
thats all i can think of, but o well.
GOOD JOB ON STORY!!! Maybe Naruto should give Hinata a really cool gift and she passes out all red???? just an idea. keep it up!!