Chapter 1 - bunni
Submitted May 16, 2004 Updated May 16, 2004 Status Incomplete | an animal cruelty poem for sliver
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Chapter 1 - bunni
Chapter 1 - bunni
i lay in this cell,
near dying and so weak,
all you humans think oh well,
but my blood it still seeps,
im the test-bunny,
that u test makeup on,
all u care about is money,
for i will soon be gone,
no name but a number,
number 973,
i will soon be in an eternal slumber,
all the things you do to me,
the wire it it does slice,
and ever so deep,
it must be nice,
you have no need to weep,
all these needles they shot,
right through my skin,
although you think not,
this must be a sin,
all these things you inject,
my head beats like a gong,
now you will have to disect,
to see what has gone wrong,
now i lay here,
and slowly wither away,
my death it grows near,
now i would like to say:
humans are pathetic,frackING SICK FREAKS!
IT SHALL SOON BE JUDGEMENT DAY!
near dying and so weak,
all you humans think oh well,
but my blood it still seeps,
im the test-bunny,
that u test makeup on,
all u care about is money,
for i will soon be gone,
no name but a number,
number 973,
i will soon be in an eternal slumber,
all the things you do to me,
the wire it it does slice,
and ever so deep,
it must be nice,
you have no need to weep,
all these needles they shot,
right through my skin,
although you think not,
this must be a sin,
all these things you inject,
my head beats like a gong,
now you will have to disect,
to see what has gone wrong,
now i lay here,
and slowly wither away,
my death it grows near,
now i would like to say:
humans are pathetic,frackING SICK FREAKS!
IT SHALL SOON BE JUDGEMENT DAY!
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really, you should trade meter for rhyme, because poems are more effective if they have meter - even if they dont rhyme
really good concept though!!! i like!!