Chapter 1 - Gone and never coming back...
Submitted October 22, 2004 Updated October 22, 2004 Status Incomplete | a poem...I'm gone...nothing will ever be the same...they've killed me....
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Chapter 1 - Gone and never coming back...
Chapter 1 - Gone and never coming back...
My death has come as no surprise,
And if I die no one will cry,
And why won't anyone cry?
Listen here I'll tell you why,
I am nothing and nobody has ever cared,
But I've never been so scared,
I need some one to hold me tonite,
Someone to love and tell me it will be alright,
But my hate no one can tame,
It will never be the same,
I once was loved but now betrayed,
And you will never know the pain,
That I've kept inside,
But I can no longer hide,
All this pain I feel,
It seems so unreal,
Only rage is what I feel,
It pulses through me like bloody wound,
I've gone insane no going back,
I will never get back on track,
This is all your fault! why can't you see?!
That I hurt everytime you scream at me!!!,
I am gone because of you!!!,
I am gone and I'm never coming back!!!
You don't know!!!,
You never let the real me show!,
And it never will,
For it is me that you kill,
I will never feel again,
Never hope,
Never know,
Never live,
Gone,
Lost,
Never to see the light of day,
Ever again....
And if I die no one will cry,
And why won't anyone cry?
Listen here I'll tell you why,
I am nothing and nobody has ever cared,
But I've never been so scared,
I need some one to hold me tonite,
Someone to love and tell me it will be alright,
But my hate no one can tame,
It will never be the same,
I once was loved but now betrayed,
And you will never know the pain,
That I've kept inside,
But I can no longer hide,
All this pain I feel,
It seems so unreal,
Only rage is what I feel,
It pulses through me like bloody wound,
I've gone insane no going back,
I will never get back on track,
This is all your fault! why can't you see?!
That I hurt everytime you scream at me!!!,
I am gone because of you!!!,
I am gone and I'm never coming back!!!
You don't know!!!,
You never let the real me show!,
And it never will,
For it is me that you kill,
I will never feel again,
Never hope,
Never know,
Never live,
Gone,
Lost,
Never to see the light of day,
Ever again....
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ratbrat on October 22, 2004, 8:10:56 AM
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gah!! ty!! ill try to make it sumtime ok!?!? Perhaps within the next week!!! Umm if you want to see more of my poems you are welcome to go here www.ratbrat.devianart.com and scroll through my gallery!! it would be great to see a story by you!! you are a very talented writer!!^^Rei_Anul_Sama on October 22, 2004, 7:26:57 AM
wow, it's as if your describing me! I've felt like this sooooooo many times before...in fact, i feel like shoot right now...anyways, this is awsome! can you make a poem titled "Here In My Arms"? It's supposed to be about a teenage boy who looses his girlfriend on a rainy day. she dies from a bullet and they were outside at the time of her death. He holds her as she dies and basically thinks of the poem. if you need another referense, i'm probably going to make a short story about them. if you have any ideas about names, i'm open to sugestions.