Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Choice
Submitted August 1, 2005 Updated August 1, 2005 Status Incomplete | rave a gothic teenage boy is saved by Raven a gothic teenage girl with magical powers Rave has no clue or trace that hes from the planet AZARATH and two souls start a journey with action twists and romance
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Choice
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Choice
( rave )
Let go of me you, you mugs. Why should I. Uh!! He's getting away. Get him!!. ( thinking ) How am I suppose to get out of here, There is no way that I can beat those guys there so biig, and strong. Wait a minute there's a construction site up ahead maybe I could lose them in there. ( done thinking ) He's going into the construction site. Then rave suddenly walked onto a moving platform and was getting raised into the air. What, whats happening. ( thinking ) I'm getting raised into the air and those guys are climbing onto one too and coming to get me. Just then the platform stopped and Rave ran to the corner of the small building. Then the two mugs came. Hey hes over there in the corner. Get him!!!!. It's a choice of suicide or brutal torure and beyond. Stay tuned for the next chapter of rave and raven.
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shadow_girl_1313 on February 7, 2006, 8:52:16 AM
could you seperate what they're saying and what they're doin, this would make it less confusing, other than that... it's very goodravelution on August 1, 2005, 4:05:18 PM
ravelution on
This is my first story on the site and i hope youl like it