A beyblade Story:!

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Submitted
January 13, 2006
Updated
February 18, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 3
Size: 9k
Words: 1,899
Comments: 36
Views: 2,776
Faves...: 4
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ok basiclally this is a sotry that goes on and on. u can be with any characther u want! just let meh know and i'll let u join the story! its mostly a funny/love story! U DONT HAVE TO BE WITH A BEYBLADE CHARACHTER!!! ANY CHARACTHER WILL DO!

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Category: Anime/Manga » BeyBlade

Chapters

Chapter 1 - OoOo
Submitted: January 13, 2006 • Updated: January 13, 2006
Word count: 571 • Size: 3k • Comments: 9 • views: 587

Chapter 2 - MmMMM
Submitted: January 18, 2006 • Updated: January 18, 2006
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 10 • views: 580

Chapter 3 - ******
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: February 18, 2006
Word count: 723 • Size: 3k • Comments: 14 • views: 102

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chaos_chick12 on October 4, 2006, 12:15:37 PM

chaos_chick12 on October 4, 2006, 12:15:37 PM (Chapter: index)

can i be in? i want to be with tala and i have brown hair that is always in a ponytail that goes to my middle back with red highlights. i always wear red and black and if i can have a bitbeast i want it to be my own shadow. he's a black dragon with blood red eyes. thnx so much if u add me!

rainbow101 on August 29, 2006, 9:39:25 AM

rainbow101 on August 29, 2006, 9:39:25 AM (Chapter: index)

can i be in it?, my name is simone and i wanna be with Robert, i got brown hair, and green eyes

Lasatira on April 17, 2006, 7:33:31 PM

Lasatira on April 17, 2006, 7:33:31 PM (Chapter: 3)

aaw XD Can I be in this story O.o My name's Melissa but I don't like it so.. you can use Misuki ^^;; eto... my looks I look almost the same as Ray I should say =__=;; really I mean it... long black hair, brown/golden eyes no make up no way T_T;; tomboyish most of the time wearing boys clothes and most of the time black... I like Max XD

Lasatira on April 17, 2006, 7:28:51 PM

Lasatira on April 17, 2006, 7:28:51 PM (Chapter: 1)

oooh really nice story =3 it's funny XD

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 29, 2006, 1:30:18 AM

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 29, 2006, 1:30:18 AM (Chapter: 3)

Kitto alsohas pink and red streaks

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 29, 2006, 1:29:15 AM

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 29, 2006, 1:29:15 AM (Chapter: 3)

Kitto kinf of got pink streks

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 24, 2006, 7:46:36 AM

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 24, 2006, 7:46:36 AM (Chapter: 3)

Hi I had to go do something but Kitto is Kai's sister and my oc boy's name is Kurohyou he has black hair, blue eyes, a pair of jeans and a shirt Kitto nickname is Raion, and Kurohyou is Tategami if posible thank you very much! ^^

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 20, 2006, 9:34:24 AM

MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on March 20, 2006, 9:34:24 AM (Chapter: 3)

Can you plese add me my oc girl name is Kitto she has brown hair with red highlights with baby blue eyes with a dress that has no straps more later

Odin_Isreal_Kewl on March 18, 2006, 1:13:57 AM

Odin_Isreal_Kewl on March 18, 2006, 1:13:57 AM (Chapter: 3)

Can i be in it?Beyblade is the best(But this is beter!!!)I have black hair,black pants,a white shirt,and i think i want............................
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Hilary!!!

P.S.My name is Odin.

Kaisangelgirl on March 10, 2006, 6:07:22 AM

Kaisangelgirl on March 10, 2006, 6:07:22 AM (Chapter: 3)

well, now that i read that kai is taken. i guess you could put me with one of my ocs'. His name is alejandro, but i call him alex and he is based on a boy i used to know in kindergarden....well, bye for now.

Kaisangelgirl on March 10, 2006, 6:00:59 AM

Kaisangelgirl on March 10, 2006, 6:00:59 AM (Chapter: 2)

so interesting!!

Kaisangelgirl on March 10, 2006, 5:56:22 AM

Kaisangelgirl on March 10, 2006, 5:56:22 AM (Chapter: 1)

ummm...i would like to be a part of the story. silver hair with black highlights, emerald eyes that shine beautifully and brightly. I have a white diamond mark on my forehead with two little triangles on each of the upper side of the diamond. There are earrings that I always wear: they are violet diamonds with two little red circles. that's it. i don't know who i want to be with. i want to be with kai! but he's taken. can you for now just make it like kai has mixed feelings for me? pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeee?!

Feniko on February 27, 2006, 5:14:01 AM

Feniko on February 27, 2006, 5:14:01 AM (Chapter: 3)

%&#%&%&#(&!_!()+$()$*u@&#y# U TOOK REI!!!!! GRRRRRRR....OK THERE ARE OTHER SWEET GUYS LIKE BAKURA,CLOUD,MIGUEL,KAIBA(SETO)...HMMM
IF U PUT ME IN STORY(PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE) PUT ME WITH BAKURA(PLEASE)
REALY LIKE THIS!

Yorda_Valkov on February 24, 2006, 5:32:12 AM

Yorda_Valkov on February 24, 2006, 5:32:12 AM (Chapter: 3)

That was a cool one!!!^_^
Amaya,you can`t wait ,ha?Well,I think it will be amaya vs. yorda over tala more likely...XXXDDD!!!!JUST KIDDING PEOPLE!!!!
*walks into shadow*
---->Yeah......just kidding....my precious....

BTW,THANKS FOR GREETING ME MY BIRTHADAY!!!!!

akirahiwatari on February 23, 2006, 11:08:00 PM

akirahiwatari on February 23, 2006, 11:08:00 PM (Chapter: 3)

I know I'm boring but can you put me with Kadaj from Final Fantasy 7,not Jin Kazama?Please@_@
Can you?@_@

Amaya_Ivanov on February 19, 2006, 9:11:59 PM

Amaya_Ivanov on February 19, 2006, 9:11:59 PM (Chapter: 3)

XDXDthis is becoming interestingXDXDlol
can't wait "Yorda vs. Akira"XDXD
@_@*my Tala.....*=^_^=

Monkey-Ninja on February 18, 2006, 7:49:26 AM

Monkey-Ninja on February 18, 2006, 7:49:26 AM (Chapter: 3)

Oh, ofcourse Daichi likes me! He loves me! Good chapter.

super_neek on February 18, 2006, 12:04:21 AM

super_neek on February 18, 2006, 12:04:21 AM (Chapter: 3)

hhehehe! kai iz way to sexy for his shirt! but tyson? i got 4 wordz for him
'DAT AINT GOOD LOOKIN'

raysbabygal on February 16, 2006, 11:54:39 PM

raysbabygal on February 16, 2006, 11:54:39 PM (Chapter: 2)

shadowlove101 i can only put ur characther in this sotry! sorry and kai's already taken so ur gonna have to choose someone else!=) sorry again!

ShadowLove101 on January 29, 2006, 7:02:55 AM

ShadowLove101 on January 29, 2006, 7:02:55 AM (Chapter: 2)

I would like you to add all of my characters! That includes Hummingbird, Tucan, Jenny, Yin, Yang, Elizabeth, and Damion. I will do ANYTHING if you could make Kai and Hummingbird married like in my story. Also, Yin likes Spencer, Yang likes Bryan, Tucan likes Miguel. now remember..... I will do ANYTHING! A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G!

ShadowLove101 on January 29, 2006, 6:57:39 AM

ShadowLove101 on January 29, 2006, 6:57:39 AM (Chapter: 1)

OK girl, you better be adding all of my characters in this! And make them play truth or dare. That's da best!
TY☺☻☺☻

Yorda_Valkov on January 20, 2006, 1:26:57 AM

Yorda_Valkov on January 20, 2006, 1:26:57 AM (Chapter: 2)

And yeah,LOVEEE the story!

Yorda_Valkov on January 20, 2006, 1:26:16 AM

Yorda_Valkov on January 20, 2006, 1:26:16 AM (Chapter: 2)

Okay,I wanna be in the story!!!And with Brooklyn or Miguel or Johny,or something like that...You choose,I don`t care,coz Tala`s TAKEN!!!*cries*Or nobody!

Yorda_Valkov on January 20, 2006, 1:22:15 AM

Yorda_Valkov on January 20, 2006, 1:22:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

Amaya I HATE YOU!!!You always take Tala first!And just because I was too lasy to go to the post office and buy some more hours on the internet...

akirahiwatari on January 20, 2006, 12:13:40 AM

akirahiwatari on January 20, 2006, 12:13:40 AM (Chapter: 2)

Awwww,por Tyson HAHAHAH...
Great chapter^_^

Kakashikuns_lover60 on January 19, 2006, 12:15:17 PM

Kakashikuns_lover60 on January 19, 2006, 12:15:17 PM (Chapter: 2)

super cool story 4 thumbs up *Faves*

Monkey-Ninja on January 18, 2006, 7:21:10 AM

Monkey-Ninja on January 18, 2006, 7:21:10 AM (Chapter: 2)

Kai is soooo lazy.

Kaizgirl on January 18, 2006, 1:21:33 AM

Kaizgirl on January 18, 2006, 1:21:33 AM (Chapter: 2)

im glad there some truth in this story..u kno wad im talkin bout... love it! heavey! cant wait for the next one dude! whoop, whoop!

Amaya_Ivanov on January 18, 2006, 12:50:55 AM

Amaya_Ivanov on January 18, 2006, 12:50:55 AM (Chapter: 2)

XXXDDD!!!I can't stop laughting!!!lol!
Black kimono or whiteXXXDDD
and that thing with writer!XXDD
*fall from chair*
and MUMMY!!XXDDD
*start to ought of lauthing!XXXDDD*
and ferrari!!XXXDDDDDLOLx100
*my parents start to look me*
can't wait to read more!XXDD

Kaizgirl on January 15, 2006, 3:06:13 AM

Kaizgirl on January 15, 2006, 3:06:13 AM (Chapter: 1)

u know kai is dreamin bout me! :)

akirahiwatari on January 14, 2006, 5:08:58 AM

akirahiwatari on January 14, 2006, 5:08:58 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wait,wait can I be with Jin Kazama from tekken!?PLEASE??@_@...

akirahiwatari on January 13, 2006, 7:53:57 AM

akirahiwatari on January 13, 2006, 7:53:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

My look:black hair with red,green eyes,black close with...Brooklyn!!

Monkey-Ninja on January 13, 2006, 7:20:26 AM

Monkey-Ninja on January 13, 2006, 7:20:26 AM (Chapter: 1)

I would love to join. Incase you didnt know, i have hair like Tea's from Yu-Gi-Oh, except its green. I have green eyes and wear army clothes. My name is Lisa. I want to be with...

Can you guess?

Daichi!

Amaya_Ivanov on January 13, 2006, 3:19:58 AM

Amaya_Ivanov on January 13, 2006, 3:19:58 AM (Chapter: 1)

Myyyy BIRTHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!
And wow!I'm going to cinema for birthday.Last year I had birthday party in school's cellar...o_O
Great story!!!can't wait next chapy!!^_^
ps:Your birthday was few days ago in the story,right?You are born in may.