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Chapter 3 - thanks lotz people

my first story! this is Naruto OC wonderland, if you have an OC tell me!

Chapter 3 - thanks lotz people

Chapter 3 - thanks lotz people
hey i was writing the other day and i was suddenly stuck with a thought. i forgot to mention the time of the story. well you know its in the summer but this story takes place after sasuke leaves but before the time skip. cant believe i forgot to add that.
i also want to say thanks to the people out there who are helping me with names(im not good with names)
thank you
gaaragurl4life for the name Takashi
sasukeXsakuraforever for the name Celine
tallestpurple101 for the name Chingi
look for these names in the future it will be legendary

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Kohakucrazy on December 7, 2007, 12:54:07 PM

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KohakucrazyOOOH! What's he gonna cook?

rffraff05 on December 8, 2007, 7:04:59 AM

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rffraff05he gonna cook fish

GreyPichu on December 5, 2007, 10:13:23 AM

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GreyPichulol that was so funny!yes i've finally gotten to continue this story again!^^HOORAY!

rffraff05 on December 6, 2007, 9:53:31 AM

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rffraff05make sure to comment on every chapter! for you know... tax reasons

winxgirl21 on August 14, 2007, 11:04:35 AM

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winxgirl21Oh! Update soon! I have to see what happens! Awesome chapter, by the way!

rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:22:06 PM

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rffraff05don't worry i will!

sasukeXsakuraforever on August 15, 2007, 11:24:14 AM

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sasukeXsakuraforever*te he* No problem! Thank you, for letting me and the two others be in your story! ^_~*

rffraff05 on November 24, 2007, 10:21:24 PM

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rffraff05thanks! you'll be in soon!

vesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:44:12 AM

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vesblondieYay! Lee saved Gaara!!! *huggles a Gaara plushi*
This was really good on decriptions :]

rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 10:45:42 AM

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rffraff05that is something im not very good at, i tend to skip very specific things unless they are important foreshadowing in the story

vesblondie on September 19, 2007, 10:51:20 AM

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vesblondieI try to be more descriptive, but sometimes I'm not too ood at it :[ Hehe you're a really good writer. My boyfirend Lane (emobuddie0) and I are planning on writing a story together...I don't know how it'll work...but we'll try something XD

rffraff05 on September 19, 2007, 10:52:32 AM

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rffraff05that'll be awesome!

nextguardian on September 1, 2007, 12:34:10 PM

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nextguardianNice job, great ch!

Symphoniaprincess101 on August 28, 2007, 2:27:01 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101Yay Celine^^