Ramen for your Thoughts?
Submitted February 12, 2008 Updated June 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | I've wanted to do something like this for quite a long time! These are just some small Naruto stories that I've made up (will make up). Support is loved and adored! Please read and enjoy!
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Chapter 1 - Valentine's Day
Submitted: February 13, 2008 • Updated: February 29, 2008
Word count: 2940 • Size: 15k • Comments: 16 • views: 1085
Chapter 2 - Naruto's Day Off 1
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 1545 • Size: 7k • Comments: 12 • views: 460
Chapter 3 - Naruto's Day Off: 2
Submitted: March 4, 2008 • Updated: March 4, 2008
Word count: 2084 • Size: 11k • Comments: 8 • views: 679
Chapter 4 - Another's Shoes: 1
Submitted: March 17, 2008 • Updated: March 17, 2008
Word count: 1786 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 422
Chapter 5 - Another's Shoes: 2
Submitted: March 19, 2008 • Updated: March 21, 2008
Word count: 1250 • Size: 6k • Comments: 10 • views: 608
Chapter 6 - Another's Shoes: 3
Submitted: March 30, 2008 • Updated: March 30, 2008
Word count: 1683 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 434
Chapter 7 - Another's Shoes: 4
Submitted: June 10, 2008 • Updated: June 26, 2008
Word count: 1143 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 352
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nextguardian on August 6, 2008, 5:05:17 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 7)
lol, that last line was hilarious!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on July 5, 2008, 9:24:17 PM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 7)
roflmao! They're all so dumb! Can't wait for more ^_^rlkitten on July 10, 2008, 5:41:08 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 7)
lol glad you like themY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 11, 2008, 11:09:20 PM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 6)
Best Idea, Best Chapter, Best Plot. BEST IN SHOW!You are one amazing writer
rlkitten on June 26, 2008, 12:15:23 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 6)
Thank you :)kagome99 on May 12, 2008, 5:20:59 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 1)
OH...WOW!!!
That is REALLY good!!!!
FAVES!!!
rlkitten on June 26, 2008, 12:15:05 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
yup yuphflp on June 11, 2008, 12:25:32 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 7)
It was worth the wait, although just a bit short. Keep it going.rlkitten on June 26, 2008, 12:13:05 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 7)
Yeah ^^; I just wanted to post something to let everyone know I'm still alive and writing, etc. So it is kinda shortm, but it's something, right? lolkogalover2013 on June 25, 2008, 4:36:37 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 7)
lolkogalover2013 on June 25, 2008, 4:27:13 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 6)
dats funnykogalover2013 on May 27, 2008, 4:34:24 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 5)
lolkogalover2013 on May 27, 2008, 3:45:15 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 4)
lol neji and saskue are so much alike cute smart and killersnextguardian on April 1, 2008, 4:18:24 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 6)
Pregnant? LOL! And "Girls are scary" -lol, great stuff! Kunoichi are really scary. Part girl, part warrior. One wrong move, and you've got a kunai at your neck! lol, anyway, great job!rlkitten on April 2, 2008, 6:21:15 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 6)
Glad you liked it ^^ lolhflp on March 30, 2008, 2:30:13 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 6)
LOL. That was the best chapter yet!!!rlkitten on March 30, 2008, 10:02:46 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 6)
Really? ^^ Heh, thanks!hflp on March 21, 2008, 10:38:52 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 5)
I think you meant to say,Naruto stopped looking at not and Tentenrlkitten on March 21, 2008, 1:05:34 PM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 5)
Oh! There's one!! ^_^ Thank you!!hflp on March 30, 2008, 2:30:40 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 5)
No problemnextguardian on March 20, 2008, 4:36:18 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 5)
This is interesting. I can't wait to see where this winds up!nextguardian on March 20, 2008, 4:36:59 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 5)
My fave part had to be Gai ordering the 40-mile jog. It's just seems like something he would say without even thinking about it, lol.rlkitten on March 21, 2008, 6:12:35 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: index)
That, and I wanted to make Sakura suffer >=3winxgirl21 on March 19, 2008, 9:45:12 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
Lol, this is awesome! XD I bet Sakura will figure it out next. Or maybe not..hmm..I can't wait to see what happens! =)rlkitten on March 20, 2008, 12:05:51 PM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 5)
MAYbeeeeeee, lol /\_/\ I'm glad you like it!winxgirl21 on March 21, 2008, 1:16:57 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
it's awesome. and it's a totally original idea. I love reading stuff that no one's thought of before. =)rlkitten on March 21, 2008, 6:16:23 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: index)
I love finding out that I'm writing about something that no one else has thought of before /\_/\winxgirl21 on March 21, 2008, 6:40:46 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
well, no one's written about Gai and Kakshi switching their students' bodies. =Drlkitten on March 21, 2008, 9:29:08 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: index)
Lol, great.winxgirl21 on March 19, 2008, 9:37:22 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
Uh-oh. I wonder why Kakashi and Gai wanted to do this...lol. It's going to be interesting!rlkitten on March 19, 2008, 9:42:54 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 4)
lol, you have no idea X3winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 12:08:59 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
lol, ramen is soo not worth all of that. XD Great chapter! =)rlkitten on March 19, 2008, 8:27:09 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 3)
I'm glad you liked it ^^ Thank you
hflp on March 19, 2008, 8:14:14 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 5)
LOL. I like how kakashi got tenten to keep quiet. Keep it going.rlkitten on March 19, 2008, 8:25:18 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 5)
heh /\_/\ Don't worry, there' more.nextguardian on March 17, 2008, 3:23:56 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 4)
Lol! Tenten's reaction is incredibly funny! This is going to be hilarious, keep it coming!rlkitten on March 17, 2008, 3:52:06 PM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 4)
Glad you liked it ^^hflp on March 17, 2008, 10:31:08 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 4)
LOL. ohhh this chapter is the best yet.rlkitten on March 17, 2008, 10:40:29 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 4)
/\_/\ Thanks! Hopefully Part two will turn out just as good ^^winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 12:02:54 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
lol, I can't wait to see who naruto thinks he can outsmart. XD Great chapter! =)winxgirl21 on March 14, 2008, 11:58:13 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
That was really, really good! I like how you put their different perspectives in different colors. I also really like how Lee doesn't want to tell Gai-sensei about what happened. He wants it to be just for him and Sakura to know. That's so cute! =)kogalover2013 on March 7, 2008, 8:41:12 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 2)
lol good assignmentÂ
rlkitten on March 7, 2008, 11:04:34 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
/\_/\kogalover2013 on March 7, 2008, 8:30:17 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 1)
awsome fic lol luv dat naruto partÂ
rlkitten on March 7, 2008, 11:04:12 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
^^ Thank you!kogalover2013 on March 7, 2008, 8:56:30 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 3)
uhhh ur mean j/k lol ur he-ler-i-ouskogalover2013 on March 7, 2008, 8:56:57 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 3)
srry forgot great chappierlkitten on March 7, 2008, 11:07:00 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: index)
Thx!!!! X3Axel4eva on March 3, 2008, 2:33:23 PM
Axel4eva on (Chapter: 2)
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rlkitten on March 5, 2008, 11:29:49 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
lol, I'm so glad you liked it!!nextguardian on March 4, 2008, 1:21:04 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 3)
lol, poor Naruto! No, scratch that, poor Lee! Either way, great chapter!rlkitten on March 5, 2008, 11:24:22 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 3)
Heh =D I'm glad you liked it!!nextguardian on March 4, 2008, 1:16:31 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
Lol, great stuff! Naruto is priceless here!rlkitten on March 5, 2008, 11:22:30 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
/\_/\nextguardian on March 4, 2008, 12:48:24 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
lol, that's awesome, and really well written! The part with Naruto was hilarious, for the record!rlkitten on March 5, 2008, 11:21:19 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
Heh ^^ Thanks. I just couldn't resist adding the last part. The idea popped into my head and I just couldn't ignore it. I didn't want to leave Sasuke hangin out by the bridge all day, either xDhflp on March 4, 2008, 12:41:11 PM
hflp on (Chapter: 3)
There is no way any type or amount of ramen would be worth all that.rlkitten on March 5, 2008, 11:19:19 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 3)
lol, but our dear, intelligent friend, Naruto, never thought of that happening XDhflp on March 17, 2008, 10:18:52 AM
hflp on (Chapter: index)
very trueAxel4eva on March 3, 2008, 2:24:55 PM
Axel4eva on (Chapter: 1)
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SunaNoFara on February 26, 2008, 12:19:05 PM
SunaNoFara on (Chapter: 2)
"Under construction"...*rolls eyes*rlkitten on February 26, 2008, 12:47:40 PM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
Whatever~ *rolls eyes alsoSadisticPrincess on February 24, 2008, 11:33:47 AM
SadisticPrincess on (Chapter: 1)
Wow colorful but nicerlkitten on February 25, 2008, 9:49:21 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
thank you ^^SadisticPrincess on March 3, 2008, 10:34:42 AM
SadisticPrincess on (Chapter: 1)
You're welcomehflp on February 24, 2008, 4:38:30 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 2)
lol. Can't wait for part 2.rlkitten on February 25, 2008, 9:48:13 AM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 2)
I'm glad you liked it! I'm really sorry about the way it's all jumbled up. I submitted it and still actually need to fix it. I have some rewording to do, too.hflp on February 14, 2008, 2:54:55 AM
hflp on (Chapter: 1)
That was good.rlkitten on February 14, 2008, 12:22:42 PM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
Thanks!SunaNoFara on February 14, 2008, 8:43:40 AM
SunaNoFara on (Chapter: 1)
Cheesy, and da red is burning mah eyes worse than the pink!! DXBut then again, I think most romances are cheesy, even a superbly well-written one. XD
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It was okay. Needs improvement, but it's not totally horrible (like some people's stuff) Use some more pronouns--it goes both ways. Don't use too many, but it's like the School House Rock song about pronouns. "Saying all those nouns, over and over can really wear you down!"
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Lol, that's a funny song.
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Anyways, good job. ^^
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P.S. Stop giving me inspiration...-_-'
rlkitten on February 14, 2008, 12:22:24 PM
rlkitten on (Chapter: 1)
Well, now- I didn't think it was THAT cheesy...and what do you mean pronouns? I thought I used them just fine. Examples of where I over used, please /\_/\' Â
And I'm sure there are a couple typos, but that was just because I didn't have time to proof read. It was almost 11, when I lost Internet, and I had to submit it real quick right after I finished. I didn't think it was too horrible, despite the "slight" Lee Saku pairing, which it isn't really if you think about it.
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I loved the ending...I thought it up last minute XD