Chapter 1 - i blink
Submitted February 28, 2005 Updated February 28, 2005 Status Incomplete | something i wrote when i was pissed...please comment and tell me if i should give up poetry lol
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Chapter 1 - i blink
Chapter 1 - i blink
When my eyes are open, you can be my friend.
But every time I blink you've turned your back again.
I know you hear my pathetic, soundless plea,
but every time I blink I know you gave me up.
You only befriended me to see how much I suck.
You think you know it all, im a loser, poser, and fake.
But that's not enough, you need to make me break.
So you spare me a wave and a quick glance.
But you can't fool me I know you're fake for every time I blink you turn your back again.
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Darkdust_cookie on May 10, 2005, 2:41:06 AM
You definetly shouldn't give up poetry. That was real good my poems sounded kinda bad compared 2 that.
Kaira on April 16, 2005, 9:45:26 AM
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Meowchi on March 17, 2005, 8:17:23 AM
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Lanfear on March 1, 2005, 3:14:20 PM
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