Chapter 1 - You Won
Submitted December 21, 2005 Updated December 21, 2005 Status Incomplete | This is a poem I wote for my friend Ray.......
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Chapter 1 - You Won
Chapter 1 - You Won
So
I've seen this pain before
I've helped you fight before
You won before
But now there is more to the story
Both of you are in pain
I want to help again
But when I try I am pushed away
I can feel your pain right now
both of you
but sometimes that is not enough
Why did God make me care
When caring gets you nowhere
but shunned
Seeing you both this way
makes me want to help
even when you say there is no way
but there is always a way
and now when your in the midst of tears, pain, suffering, hateing and loving,
remember the last time
You won.
I've seen this pain before
I've helped you fight before
You won before
But now there is more to the story
Both of you are in pain
I want to help again
But when I try I am pushed away
I can feel your pain right now
both of you
but sometimes that is not enough
Why did God make me care
When caring gets you nowhere
but shunned
Seeing you both this way
makes me want to help
even when you say there is no way
but there is always a way
and now when your in the midst of tears, pain, suffering, hateing and loving,
remember the last time
You won.
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ham_chan on March 13, 2006, 2:25:21 AM
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*first comment dance* holy crappers!!!!! very good chanchez very good! have i read this befor? i feel as if i have, but i dunno. either way it rocks my socks off. so sad. is this about him and machela or that other chick o_O i forget. did he like or did u even show it to him?? tell me! tell me now! *blood vessel in head growing bigger* i mean it!! *vessel almost bursting* whoa what was that all about. very strange. *vessel back to normal with no memory of what just happened* kay i'm off to comment on the other story/poem/novel that you have on here. toodles