Chapter 1 - no food?
Submitted May 26, 2004 Updated May 26, 2004 Status Incomplete | Funny but stupid
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Chapter 1 - no food?
Chapter 1 - no food?
Senko walked up to the fridge and,DUN DUN DUUUN,
"NO FOOD" shrieked Senko. She walked around her house for 10 minutes.
"Still no food, I wonder where it went?" thought Senko.
So she went in search of it.
After about an hour a piece of cheese ran up and said,"follow me".
Then we went through a large forest,for about an hour She
was complaining. Finally the cheese got as big as the empire state building and
shouted,"Would you just shut the heck up!"
Senko turned chibi and answered meekly"okay"....
"I'm sorry Mr.Cheese"
"That's alright" said the cheese.When they reached the middle of the forest
All of the food jumped out of thier hiding places.
After an hour all of them were gone.
Where do you suppose they went?
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Please comment I know it sucks but hey this is my first fanfic!
Bye bye for now!
Thursday may 27,2004 1:50
Yaaaaay someones commented it's like 20 people commented but it's the world to me! Catnip
"NO FOOD" shrieked Senko. She walked around her house for 10 minutes.
"Still no food, I wonder where it went?" thought Senko.
So she went in search of it.
After about an hour a piece of cheese ran up and said,"follow me".
Then we went through a large forest,for about an hour She
was complaining. Finally the cheese got as big as the empire state building and
shouted,"Would you just shut the heck up!"
Senko turned chibi and answered meekly"okay"....
"I'm sorry Mr.Cheese"
"That's alright" said the cheese.When they reached the middle of the forest
All of the food jumped out of thier hiding places.
After an hour all of them were gone.
Where do you suppose they went?
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Please comment I know it sucks but hey this is my first fanfic!
Bye bye for now!
Thursday may 27,2004 1:50
Yaaaaay someones commented it's like 20 people commented but it's the world to me! Catnip
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jesslovesbilly82 on May 24, 2005, 3:43:49 PM
this is a scara story.guardianofanime1115 on March 17, 2005, 12:27:37 PM
ha mr cheese....heh heh heh ah and then the all food disappeared, what is she gonna think of next? sexyboy07 on June 26, 2004, 6:53:26 AM
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food is my favorite hobby soo i of course love this one i think that its a lil pointless for her to walk around her house for 10 minutes thwen decide to look for food so if tehres anyway that you could combine the ideas then continue with the story but besides that its an A+ from me
:)
Zekk on June 24, 2004, 10:37:54 PM
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Ahahhahahahhahaha... i don't get it... ahahahahhahahahahahhahahhahahhah really funny.BML on June 8, 2004, 1:03:28 PM
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woooah.....that really made me want some velveeta :)Stalker_003 on June 5, 2004, 11:33:46 AM
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That was quite possibly the weirdest thing i have ever read.... ummmm... i think i read it... it was more like some satanic beast was posessing me and making me feel the hillarious yet terrifying goings on of the story... odd... i dont think i will ever be the same....yuyuyasha33 on May 28, 2004, 7:36:32 AM
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xD *roflmao* Hilarious. I really like it.senkoneko on May 28, 2004, 2:04:06 AM
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Thankyou love goddess!Thanxs much Your going in my favorite artists
lovegoddess on May 28, 2004, 1:42:55 AM
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oh hon,nutin wrong w/ ur story!dats SOO funny!
u've really gots a nak 4 writing!
senkoneko on May 27, 2004, 11:10:10 AM
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Thankyou for commenting thank you very much ladies and gentlemen(in elvis voice)EmmyChan on May 27, 2004, 10:29:56 AM
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Kool I liked it. It would be kool if maybe you could do comic strips seems like something that you'd be good at.halfbreed_fox_dragon on May 27, 2004, 4:59:42 AM
I think its very funny! lol. i mean who ever heard of talking cheese.then again it does seem like stuff just gets up and walks off sometimes.....0.o *sits pondering this fact* oh well! bye! ^_^