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Jin and Senko

Funny happy story

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Chapter 1 - Happy Days
Submitted: May 27, 2004 • Updated: May 27, 2004
Word count: 347 • Size: 1k • Comments: 14 • views: 334

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guardianofanime1115 on March 17, 2005, 12:24:02 PM

guardianofanime1115 on (Chapter: 1)
guardianofanime1115heh cool

sexyboy07 on June 26, 2004, 6:50:35 AM

sexyboy07 on (Chapter: 1)
sexyboy07i think thats its ok i like the one with tenchi a lot more tho
decent job:)

Zekk on June 24, 2004, 10:36:36 PM

Zekk on (Chapter: 1)
ZekkYou're learning... much better then your one for tomboat.

BML on June 8, 2004, 12:59:55 PM

BML on (Chapter: 1)
BMLyour so perky :) i love it. anyways, great story, although i have no clue who either one of those people are.

Stalker_003 on June 5, 2004, 11:30:10 AM

Stalker_003 on (Chapter: 1)
Stalker_003Hmmm, the only thing i can think to say about this is you should format it more like a real story thing... not that its not... i guess i mean like a book... ya know, spaces between the para's and stuff... and.. though, i dunno, maybe this site kinda messes that up even if you put it in... dunno... good though...

Raymei on June 2, 2004, 5:15:08 PM

Raymei on (Chapter: 1)
RaymeiVery cute n.n

Why the accent on Jin? o.o did they give him an accent in the dubbed?
wait..nevermind. don't wanna know lol

yuyuyasha33 on May 28, 2004, 7:38:54 AM

yuyuyasha33 on (Chapter: 1)
yuyuyasha33Ha...wind masta....xD I AM...Da Wind Masta!!!! Phwah, really cool. Write more soon!

Underworlds_Princess on May 28, 2004, 2:44:38 AM

Underworlds_Princess on (Chapter: 1)
Underworlds_Princessnice story, great work.

senkoneko on May 28, 2004, 2:02:28 AM

senkoneko on (Chapter: 1)
senkonekothankyou all for commenting
if you want me to write a story sometime email me or comment in my profile.

lovegoddess on May 28, 2004, 1:41:25 AM

lovegoddess on (Chapter: 1)
lovegoddessWOW!!!
FUNNY!!!
dats hilarious!
(see i told u i'd comment!)
^_^ *_* XD

fupu_woohoo on May 27, 2004, 1:45:40 PM

fupu_woohoo on (Chapter: 1)
fupu_woohooWeeeeeeee! i like it its very cool!

EmmyChan on May 27, 2004, 10:27:41 AM

EmmyChan on (Chapter: 1)
EmmyChanInteresting story. It would be nice if there was maybe more to it because when it comes to the end I feel left needing more. Well anywho good job.

halfbreed_fox_dragon on May 27, 2004, 5:04:18 AM

halfbreed_fox_dragon on (Chapter: 1)
halfbreed_fox_dragonyet another good one.you should elaborate on your stories! they could get real good!