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Chapter 0 - people & stuff(read the bottom section)

Seven months after tokyo was nearly destroyed, the origonal mew mews are invited on a trip to paris.
But what if the cyniclons attack again?

Chapter 0 - people & stuff(read the bottom section)

Chapter 0 - people & stuff(read the bottom section)
asked:
k-chan
aqua-chan
sliv-chan
nikki
kinkykitten

accepted:
kinkykitten
kitty
nikki
sliv
aqua- chan

characters:

(mine)
natasha-mewmew forest(black panther)
rinzen-mew mew dumpling(red panda)
bella-mew mew grape(galapagose penguin)
(not mine)
rougue minato-mew mew rogue(evil black panther)
lucia-mew mew autumn(bear wolf)
madison-mew mew madison(cheetah)
kayli-mew mew rainbow(butterfly)


READ THIS PART!-changing tokyo mew mew end

okay, anyone who has ever met me should know im a stubborn, blunt and slightly crazy indivigual who will bend the laws of anime to suit my sad little needs.
and im pretty much going to do that to tmm.
so, since my story plainly isnt going to work if i dont, this is my altered ending to tmm(im gonna be vry harsh here):

so, we should all know that in ep 51, deep blue killed kish(fangirls: nooo!)
and then masaya starts to fight deep blue and stuff(ep 52 begins). and it ends up with masaya
committing suicide to kill deep blue. but then taruto, pai(not sliv-pai, ebil alien-pai) and kish live again(fangirls: yayy!).
but then cuz ichigo wants to save her boyfriend, she dies for him and then the mews come in and find her in masayas arms cuz ichigo died for everyone.(so sad)
anyway so then(now i change stuff) kish feels bad his lil kitty has died on him
(and where as in the origonal ver, he sends them out of the palace, takes the
remaining mew aqua and leaves with pai and taruto, and ichigo comes back to life)
in my version, he and the other aliens sacrifice themselves and the mew aqua to resurrect ichigo.
so everyone on earth is happy. the aliens are still screwed and then they here word that deep blue failed and stuff. they are sad, confused and angry. they decide on revenge.

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KinkyKitten on November 22, 2008, 4:27:42 PM

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KinkyKittenwheres Mew Mew Rogue?? shes supposed to be the one working for the cyniclons 0.o yea her real name is Rika Minamoto. also i want her to have a crush maybe on a good guy who works for the mews to turn her good again well try too anyways or a cyniclon and its gotta be a main character.
ur story is great so far lol i love it but i feel kinda left out that meh character hasnt been mentioned in it yet. well once but only a tiny sentence T_T

shinypikachu2608 on November 22, 2008, 6:37:23 PM

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shinypikachu2608.....Ok.Ummm shiny need go create-a-character.
Also I know rogue hasn't arived yet. But that's part of the plot.
Please don't feel left out.
Just wait till the fuss about Kaili's over and done with
cuz once it is.....let's just say theres gonna be a rogue
on the loose. *evil grin*

KinkyKitten on November 22, 2008, 7:04:09 PM

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KinkyKittenyea, alright. also its 9 chapters in and shes not even in it yet.....i thought she was going to be mentioned when the cyniclons was planning to use a mew mew that would work with them. i thought they were talking about Rogue but apparently they werent. im going to feel left out until shes mentioned T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T

swampertgirl0504 on July 18, 2008, 1:18:54 AM

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swampertgirl0504ok. So um, ichigo is still alive in the original?

swampertgirl0504 on July 14, 2008, 4:54:21 PM

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swampertgirl0504I said i'd join