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Chapter 1 - Bro

Sonic finds his long lost brother.
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Chapter 1 - Bro

Chapter 1 - Bro


OK THIS STORY WILL CONFUSE YOU IF YOU DONT PAY ATTTION





Sonic: Man i am sooooo bored Eggman acting good for now Amy noy bugging and Tails is in his workshop making stuff I wish some thing would happen
???: HEY BRO!!1 Sonic: WHA!!! WHO THE HECK ARE YOU?!?! ???: I am your brother Shadow. Sonic:: s-shadow? my long lost brother shadow? Shadow: yep its me
(Sonic hugs Shadow. but you are probly wondering what this shadow looks like? huh? he looks just like sonic exept he is yellow yes yellow.) Shadow: HEY HEY HEY
no more of this mushy stuff ok? Sonic: but bro last time i saw you was when you went into that hybernation state to get rid of your killer deseise. that was 10 years ago
i am 15 now. hey were the same age now!! Shadow:Anyway bro you you faster now? you couldent run worth a lick when i left you. Sonic: ha i am the fastest thing alive.
Shadow: ok lets see lets have a race ( btw they are on moubis sonic home planet) to see ehos the fastest? Sonic: ok but i will cream ya. Shadow: hmmmmmm
ok to hilltop villge and back.Me: ok you two when i say go you go Sonic and Shadow: just say go already!!! Me:GOOOOO!!! (ZOOOOOOM) LATER
Shadow: HA HA I WIN THAT WAS EZ. Sonic: i-i-i lost? well i lost to my bro anyway come meet my friends. Sonic: everyone come see my brother!!!! All: (chatter about sonics brother) Sally: welcome to knothole. Shadow: ??? wheres the castle is this not mobotroplis? Sally: no mobotroplis is gone DR. Eggman made it into robotroplis.
Shadow:.... i see and you are? Sally: i am princess Sally acorn (Shadow interrups) SALLY THAT LITTLE GIRL? (BOWS DOWN) Sally i was a royal gard before i left please be one again. Sally: NO royal gards are not needed any more. but you can be a freedom fighter if you want. Shadow: Yes Sally i will become a freedom fighter. We will regain control of mobotroplis. Sonic: here are my other friend. Tails. Tails: Hi. Knuckels: YOU you were the one my father taught how to use the emaralds. you know more about them than me.Sonic: And this is Amy. Shadow: (blushes and thinks wow what a girl) Amy:(Amy thinks wow hes cuter than sonic i try him out and see if he is better than sonic)Shadow and Amy to gether: Will you go on a date with me? Amy: yes. Shadow:yes. Sonic thinks (wowinstant love wait amy dont love me no more wooooohooooooo)





DON'T MISS THE NEXT CHAPTER SHADOW AND AMY'S DATE!!!!!!

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zweetboi on March 31, 2006, 8:25:52 AM

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zweetboiOK! But some constructive critisism:

Shadow... I thought.. but... Shadow..Shadow. Dark. Yellow. Could ya help me out here!