Chapter 10 - I Can't Deal
Submitted March 4, 2004 Updated March 6, 2005 Status Incomplete | A leather bound book with all my poems in it.
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Chapter 10 - I Can't Deal
Chapter 10 - I Can't Deal
I can't deal I can barely feel
I dunno what to think ill just go to a shrink
Something catches me and tells me to stop
It ends up being some sacrilegious cop
Sore at the world and I don’t know why
I’m left all alone to die
No money left to go anywhere
This is quite a snare
I try to keep my word
But I can’t help to leave this world
I haven't slept for days
I can't find my way
I've seen better days
I know you'll never see it my way
It's been so long since I’ve been fine
I'm just trying to see the bottom of this bottle a wine
I can't turn around and say goodbye
Cuz if I did I’d know it was a lie
I'm so worried and it's hard not to care
But I can't find my way thru the glare
Just leave me and don't ask why
I can't stand it I feel like I’m gonna die
I’ve been down this road b4
I cannot care anymore
I can't wait to leave this place
I wish I’d just lose this race
I'm gone you can't make me stay
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This is my first attempt at a rhyming poem.
Please comment!
I dunno what to think ill just go to a shrink
Something catches me and tells me to stop
It ends up being some sacrilegious cop
Sore at the world and I don’t know why
I’m left all alone to die
No money left to go anywhere
This is quite a snare
I try to keep my word
But I can’t help to leave this world
I haven't slept for days
I can't find my way
I've seen better days
I know you'll never see it my way
It's been so long since I’ve been fine
I'm just trying to see the bottom of this bottle a wine
I can't turn around and say goodbye
Cuz if I did I’d know it was a lie
I'm so worried and it's hard not to care
But I can't find my way thru the glare
Just leave me and don't ask why
I can't stand it I feel like I’m gonna die
I’ve been down this road b4
I cannot care anymore
I can't wait to leave this place
I wish I’d just lose this race
I'm gone you can't make me stay
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is my first attempt at a rhyming poem.
Please comment!
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DarkDusk on April 30, 2004, 3:01:01 AM
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YAY! your poems awesome I shall cherish this book and add it to favs *holds on to book and makes sure no one tries to take it away* keep on writing them!