Chapter 11 - Longing
Submitted March 4, 2004 Updated March 6, 2005 Status Incomplete | A leather bound book with all my poems in it.
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Chapter 11 - Longing
Chapter 11 - Longing
I long to whisper in your ear
To tell you the things I want you to hear
I long to show you what you cannot see
To show you who you are to me
I long to smell your scent you’re very essence
Even after the evanescence
I long to touch you and your soul
To prove to myself together we are whole
I long to taste your lips with passion
To make sure you’re face isn’t ashen
I long to run my fingers through you’re hair
To try and show you how much I care
Do you understand the pain I feel
When I can’t be around you for real
I’m afraid for you and I
I wish I could look you in the eye
And tell you all the words I feel for you
Even when we’re through
I love you so much I can’t believe it
It’s the most common feeling I emit
When I’m around you
I hope you feel this way too
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Well this is a poem i wrote in like 5 min. lol I think it's pretty good and I do think i'm getting better at rhyming lol. Comments please!
To tell you the things I want you to hear
I long to show you what you cannot see
To show you who you are to me
I long to smell your scent you’re very essence
Even after the evanescence
I long to touch you and your soul
To prove to myself together we are whole
I long to taste your lips with passion
To make sure you’re face isn’t ashen
I long to run my fingers through you’re hair
To try and show you how much I care
Do you understand the pain I feel
When I can’t be around you for real
I’m afraid for you and I
I wish I could look you in the eye
And tell you all the words I feel for you
Even when we’re through
I love you so much I can’t believe it
It’s the most common feeling I emit
When I’m around you
I hope you feel this way too
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Well this is a poem i wrote in like 5 min. lol I think it's pretty good and I do think i'm getting better at rhyming lol. Comments please!
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DarkDusk on April 30, 2004, 3:03:42 AM
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you did THAT in 5 MINUTES *worships you* uhh sorry *snaps out of it* I got crazy there good job may your talent in poems improve (not that it could improve anymore)