Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted September 6, 2004 Updated September 6, 2004 Status Incomplete | a poem about a quiz i took...you'll see what i mean
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
I went to Quizzila and i took this quiz that said what type of dragon your spirit beast was.....it told me that i had a dragon egg, and my dragon hadnt hatched yet...i think i will retake that quiz...anyways, i told my friend that i might write a poem about it and here it is! (yes it does go along with my other dragon poems that i have up here already but i thought that it was too long to put it in there...T_T)
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Dragon Egg:
Covered in dust,
lying in wait.
Her life depends
on the choices I make.
Guide her thoughts,
that's what I'll do.
Leading her on
when my life comes anew.
Others I've lead,
previously.
Always moving,
living tediously.
Not yet awake,
she walks alone.
Leaving her house
and facing the unknown.
A dragon egg,
that's what I am.
Sitting alone,
thinking only of Sam.
What will she do?
Where will she go?
Those are the things
the spirit beasts control.
Mysterious,
wanting the least:
that describes me,
her only spirit beast.
Covered in dust,
lying in wait.
She comes slowly
and I'm almost too late.
Too late to help,
too late to lead,
too late to live
and fulfil all she'll need.
Faster she comes.
She's almost here.
I can tell now
that my future draws near.
She stops ahead
and I go cold.
It's not yet time,
for now she is too bold.
Im unwanted
now in her life.
I cannot help
as she faces her strife.
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I myself love this poem and i think i got better with spelling and grammar... i can't really tell though...oh well! i hope u guys like this one! its my favorite! i had other stanzas too but i knocked them out...oh and if u didn't notice, this poem has a weird construction: the first three lines in every stanze have 4 sylables and the last one has six. thats true in every stanza, atleast thats the way i wanted to make it...isnt that like a haiku or something? i dunno...oh well ^_^...im weird i know o.O;; oh and dont forget to check out my other poems! ^_^ i love to write! and draw! yay!
-tears_of_manga, signing out!
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Dragon Egg:
Covered in dust,
lying in wait.
Her life depends
on the choices I make.
Guide her thoughts,
that's what I'll do.
Leading her on
when my life comes anew.
Others I've lead,
previously.
Always moving,
living tediously.
Not yet awake,
she walks alone.
Leaving her house
and facing the unknown.
A dragon egg,
that's what I am.
Sitting alone,
thinking only of Sam.
What will she do?
Where will she go?
Those are the things
the spirit beasts control.
Mysterious,
wanting the least:
that describes me,
her only spirit beast.
Covered in dust,
lying in wait.
She comes slowly
and I'm almost too late.
Too late to help,
too late to lead,
too late to live
and fulfil all she'll need.
Faster she comes.
She's almost here.
I can tell now
that my future draws near.
She stops ahead
and I go cold.
It's not yet time,
for now she is too bold.
Im unwanted
now in her life.
I cannot help
as she faces her strife.
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I myself love this poem and i think i got better with spelling and grammar... i can't really tell though...oh well! i hope u guys like this one! its my favorite! i had other stanzas too but i knocked them out...oh and if u didn't notice, this poem has a weird construction: the first three lines in every stanze have 4 sylables and the last one has six. thats true in every stanza, atleast thats the way i wanted to make it...isnt that like a haiku or something? i dunno...oh well ^_^...im weird i know o.O;; oh and dont forget to check out my other poems! ^_^ i love to write! and draw! yay!
-tears_of_manga, signing out!
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Koolkat6968 on September 7, 2004, 12:25:16 AM
Koolkat6968 on
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!that's awesome wanna read my stories?tears_of_manga on September 6, 2004, 10:33:22 AM
^_^...........i cant believe u said that, Kaochin-chan! u r a great writer! hey yall! whoever is reviewing my work! go check out Kaochin_Shia's story Battle for the Throne! It's really good! dont listen to what this dork says! *points at Kaochin who is huddled in corner sulking*oh and thanks for reviewing my work by the way! ^__^ i feel so loved!
Kaochin_Shia on September 6, 2004, 10:28:17 AM
Kaochin_Shia on
Wow, that is darn good. ^___^ You made me proud to be your best friend ::sniffle:: You're such an accomplished writer and I'm.... not... >_< ::sulks in corner:: Good job once again.