Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted June 17, 2005 Updated June 17, 2005 Status Incomplete | This is one of my favorite poems. Its about how Kagome would feel if Inu died. PLEASE comment
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
A Lover's Ghost
Your voice still haunts me
In the darkened hall
Your face is in the mirror
But I know you are gone
Your essence lingers
in the air
Your footsteps echo
Yet your not there
I lose myself
In your golden eyes
Which fade away
with morning light.
You shimmer beneath a timeless tree
The place our paths first crossed
But every time I reach for you
From my sight you are lost.
I see you in my weary thoughts
I see you in my dreams
I see you everywhere, and in everything
.....Or so it seems.
Your voice still haunts me
In the darkened hall
Your face is in the mirror
But I know you are gone
Your essence lingers
in the air
Your footsteps echo
Yet your not there
I lose myself
In your golden eyes
Which fade away
with morning light.
You shimmer beneath a timeless tree
The place our paths first crossed
But every time I reach for you
From my sight you are lost.
I see you in my weary thoughts
I see you in my dreams
I see you everywhere, and in everything
.....Or so it seems.
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HotchickFruba on October 10, 2006, 8:45:38 AM
sangofan1 on July 23, 2006, 12:22:19 PM
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awww thats so sad could i use it for one of storys?Inu_lover1644 on April 1, 2006, 4:20:23 PM
btw, PLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZ! check out my story its new and its my first one, if you don't want to then screw you!nah I'm just kidding. =^_^=
Inu_lover1644 on April 1, 2006, 4:19:09 PM
WOW, that is really good I like it. IT RHYMES! =^_^= LOL *favs*Inuyashasbabygirl on March 17, 2006, 10:58:13 AM
wahhhhh that was sad. but i love it sniff...sniff. grabs tissue.Mutos_gurl101 on October 28, 2005, 12:37:36 AM
This ia sooo wonderful, it makes you feel like your in her place for a minute... by the way thanx for checking out and commenting on my story.:)
Animanic on October 27, 2005, 10:36:02 AM
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cool, so deep and passionet, like kagome was writing it herself.*cat* I'm here kagome!
YOUR NOT INUYASHA!
I want to be...
love_bunny on September 6, 2005, 12:59:17 AM
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Very prettiful!FallenShadows on July 22, 2005, 7:38:48 AM
I love your poem so much! And thanks for your comment!Inuyasha_Demon_Boy on July 1, 2005, 11:58:46 AM
it freaks me out. nice job *favz*JamesMarsters on June 30, 2005, 9:14:36 AM
It awesome. I like it a lot.haruyasha on June 21, 2005, 5:11:06 AM
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That is so sweet YukinaObbsessionist on June 18, 2005, 9:57:48 AM
Heya awesome job! I luv it! *poem and artist to favez* Spectacular job! I luv it! Plez make more!
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