Chapter 1 - all the story
Submitted August 11, 2006 Updated August 11, 2006 Status Complete | i did this at school for one of my subjects so i am sorry if it is shoot
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Chapter 1 - all the story
Chapter 1 - all the story
The day was over and the sun had gone down, the world was asleep well all but two. They were Rachel and Josh, The two people who have the best grades at Black View high school. But they are also the most hated. You see they are each others only friends. Well there is one more, her name is Kisa but she is lust their teacher in fighting. But we will meet her later. At the moment Rachel and Josh are in the woods...
'Hey Rachel' josh said walking up behind her,
' Yeah what?' Rachel replied putting her hands on his hands that were just bellow her breasts.
'why do you seem lost in a different world all the time?' Josh asked letting go of Rachel
'i dont know' rachel replied turning to look at Josh with tears rolling down down her face,
'why are you crying? i hope i didn't make you cry' Josh said pulling her towaords him. As her face hit his cheast she started to cry even more.
' This is why i'm crying' Rachel pulled a letter from the bag that was by her side
'WHAT?!' Josh said in shock 'who would sent this to you?' Josh said looking at Rachel who was still crying 'Rachel maybe we should go and see Kisa' josh asked said trying to stop her from crying
'yes maybe you'r right' Rachel and stoped crying.
'Ok we will leave after school' josh said and both waled back into the town (oh yeah they live next door to each other)
Josh walked Rachel to the door and gave her a kiss on the hand then walked off.When Rachel walked in to her house, her father was asleep on ther sofa
'i'm home dad' Rachel said, putting a blanket over him, and went to her room, 'what dose this letter mean?' Rachel asked herself.
(Josh)
when Josh got home his kid brother had fallen asleep doing his homework, so Josh put him into hs bed and walked off into his room and went to bad but he was still thinking of the letter and how safe Rachel was going to be.
(the next day) (Rachel)
'hey sweety' rachels dad yelled (oh yeahshe dosen't know her mum) 'time to get up' he said
'yeah, yeah i'm coming' rachel said walking to the bathroom to have a shower, once she got out and got dressed she went to the kitchen and made some breakfast, then watched t.v till Josh came to get her.
(josh)
'come on Josh you don't want to keep Rachel waiting do you?' Josh's mother said
'yes mum i will be right down' josh repiled walking into the kitchen and made breakfast,once he finshed he went and had a shower got dressed and went to pick up Rachle with his kid brother.
(rachel)
'hey dad' rachel said turning off the t.v
'yeah what's up sweety?' Rachel father asked
'well um-' rachel was trying to ask her father somthing but then,
'Rachel!' josh yelled from outside
'oh hey josh, bye dad, oh yeah dad i'm going to KIsa's to night so i will see you in the mornin' rachel said and ran out.
'Hey Rachel' said josh's little brother
'Hey Jay' rachel replied 'oh and hi Josh' she said, and they all walked to the primery school.
' Hey Jay can you get a lift with a friend tonight?' Josh said
'what? Are you and Rachel going on a date?' Jay asked and he is only 10 years old 6 years youger then Josh and Rachel
'Why do you need to know?, but can you?' josh asked
'yeah i can' Jay said running off to see his friends.
'Ok off the school' Josh said looking at rachel
'yeah' Rachel said walking off because she didn't want Josh to see her blood shot eyes from crying
'hey Rachel have you been crying?' Josh asked trying to catch up to her
'yeah i have i couldn't think of anything but that letter' Rachel said snd she stopped and pulling the letter from her bag,
'hey Rachel don't worry, we will get Kisa to take a look at it and we will find out who sent it' josh said putting his arms across her back and gave her a big hug
(at school)
'hey josh why are we here? Why can't we just go to Kisa's' Rachel asked standing at the frount of the school,
'well we have a test and i know you wouldn't want to fall to 4th on the list, would you?' Josh said taking Rachel's hand and walking into the school.
(inthe class rom)
'Okay class, start the test' Mrs K said (their teacher they have when they have a test)
(1 hour and 44 minutes later)
'Mrs K, i'm done' Rachel said handing in her test into the teacher, leaving the room.
(5minutes later)
'done Mrs K' Josh said, handing his test into the teacher and then moving off to see Rachel.
(front of the school)
'Hey Rachel are you ready to go?' Josh asked walking up to Rachel
'yeah i'm ready but-' Rachel stoped before she finshed her sentene
'but what?' josh asked looking at rachel who was crying ' but what? Rachel' Josh said
'it's nothing' Rachel said wiping away the tears on her cheal
'Hey Rachel no one will hurt you, not when your'r with me' Josh said taking her hand and pulling her closer to him and kissing her on the forehead, Rachel blushed 'Rachel let's go' Josh said looking at Rachel with a smail on his face.
(3 hours later)
'here we are' Josh said looking up at a flat of rocks going up,
'Let's go Josh' Rachel said and they both ran up as fast as they could,
'KISA!' Rachel yelled
'Rachel, Josh how nice to see you both but why are you here? you'r not ment to be here for one more week' Kisa said giving Rachel a hug
'Kisa look at this' Josh said handing Kisa the letter
hello rachel
i know where you live, i know who you love and i know how to take all that away, i also know how to take away your life.
'do you know who wrote it and why?' Josh asked holding Rachel
'yes i do' Kisa said
'WHAT!?' Rachel and Josh both yelled
'who Kisa please tell me' Rachel said as Josh let go and stepped back 'kisa who?' Rachel said
'your sister Rachel' Kisa replied
'ha ha Kisa i dont have a sister' Rachel said
'Oh yeah, when your Mother had to leave she had to take her with her' Kisa said
'hey Kisa how do you know so much about Rachel's Mother?' Josh asked
'well i do but Rachel trust me, she means what she said' Kisa said handing Rachel a pair of guns and Josh a sword
'what are these for?' Josh asked looking at the sword
'they are for you to use, you know how to use them and now you know why i made you practes with fake ones' Kisa said 'now get in the car' she went on 'we are go to see her' Kisa said and got in the car,
'Hey Rachel are you ok?' Josh asked taking her hand
'no i mean if this person is my sister why did she send me this letter?' Rachel asked
'i don't know but we will find out soon' Josh said and they both got into the car.
(5 hours and 55 minutes later in the car)
'We are here, are you ready Rachel?' Kisa said as they pulled up to a miltary scientific laboratory
' um Kisa why are we here?' Josh asked
'well this is where she is and you will find out alot here Rachel' Kisa said
'what do you mean by that?' Rachel asked
'you will find out' Kisa said looking back at Rachel who was holding Joshs hand, they came up to a door
'it's me' Kisa said and the door opened
'Hello Kisa who is this?' a person asked
'it's Rachel and josh' Kisa said and everyone looked
'Kisa let me guess she is here to see Anna?' a woman said
yes she is' kisa said
'um Kisa who is Anna?' Rachel asked still holding Joshs hand
'Anna is your sister' Kisa said and walked off Rachel and Josh both follwed, soon they came up to another door but people were like trying to hide something or at least keep something in.
'is she in there?' Josh asked
'yes' Kisa replied
'Kisa would you like to go in?' one of the people asked
'um kisa why are you so well know here?' Rachel asked
'well i use to be in the army just like you Father, but we will talk after you meet her' Kisa said
'okay' Rachel said and the door opened, Rachel griped on to joshs arm and walked in
'Hello sister' Anna said she was covered in blood she was sitting on the floor
'are you the one who sent me this note?' Rachel asked letting go of josh
'yes, i am so glad you got it, but i didn't think you would come to see me' Anna said standing up
'what did you think i would do, run?' Rachel said trying to make it seem like she wasn't scard
'well i guess living with a 5 star general for your whole life you would learn how to hide your fear' Anna said
'what Father is a 5 star general?' Rachel said shocked but she was not the only one Josh was too but Anna just learghed 'what are you larghing about Anna?' Rachel said
'he is not our Father, our Father is dead' Anna said
'what, no' Rachel said and ran out, Josh went after her and did Kisa and Anna
(outside)
'RACHEL WAIT!' Josh yelled, Rachel stopped and turned to him, she had tears falling from her eyes water falls (well at the speed) 'Rachel i'm sorry i didn't tell you about you Father' Kisa said coming out of nowhere
'what you known' rachel asked about to turn and run till
'she had to know she is our mother' Anna siad who was behind Rachel
'is this true?' Rachel asked
'yes i am so sorry' Kisa said then rachel ran off back into the palce.
'why Kisa why didn't you tell her?'Josh asked
'because i thorght if i did she would never learn how to fight with me' Kisa said
'now i get it' Josh said
' what do you get?' Kisa asked
'well it was wird how you can fight so well' Josh said
'yeah well it's nice that you say that but where did Anna go?' Kisa said
'oh no you dont think she is with rachel do you?' Josh said
'i think she is' Kisa replied and they both ran after them.
(battel feald)
'why?, why would she keep this from me?' Rachel said to herself 'I feel like an idote' Rachel pulled one of the two guns from her balt and put it to her head
'what do you think you are doing?' Anna said walking in to the room 'well then what are you waiting for, if you really want to die pull the trigger and leave Josh to deal with the loss if his lover' Anna said
'what is with you Anna?' Rachel said putting the gun back into her balt
'what do you mean?' Anna asked as Josh and Kisa ran in
'you wrote me that letter and now you save my life' Rachel said
'well to tell you the truth i know if wrote that letter you would come and everything i said was a lie i didn't know where you lived i didn't know who you loved or how to take away your life but i did know you are someone who faces her fears' Anna said
'how?' Josh said walking up behind Rachel and putting his arms around her
'well because i hears it from Mother' Anna said looking at Kisa
'what?'Rachel asked
'well mother know one day you would have to find out about me and she thorght this was the best way because if she told you, you would run but if you were scared you would face it head on' Anna siad
'so how did you get the letter to her?' Josh asked
'by me' Kisa said 'i put the letter in you bag when you were asleep that is why i known who wrote it' Kisa said
'so why are you here Anna' Rachel asked
'well when mum had to leave you with the geberal she toke me with her and she came here and now i am a solder and went to help train you' Anna said
'so what will we do now?' Rachel said
'well you and Josh go back on living the way you did and i will go on living the way I did and every thing will stay the same but evey 2nd week i will come and see you okay?' Anna said
'yeah it sounds good' Rachel said and Josh let go and Rachel went up to Anna and hugged her.
And so it went back to how it was but after about 2 years went past Rachel and Josh got married, oh yeah, Rachel still thinks the general as her Father and so does Anna.
THE END
'Hey Rachel' josh said walking up behind her,
' Yeah what?' Rachel replied putting her hands on his hands that were just bellow her breasts.
'why do you seem lost in a different world all the time?' Josh asked letting go of Rachel
'i dont know' rachel replied turning to look at Josh with tears rolling down down her face,
'why are you crying? i hope i didn't make you cry' Josh said pulling her towaords him. As her face hit his cheast she started to cry even more.
' This is why i'm crying' Rachel pulled a letter from the bag that was by her side
'WHAT?!' Josh said in shock 'who would sent this to you?' Josh said looking at Rachel who was still crying 'Rachel maybe we should go and see Kisa' josh asked said trying to stop her from crying
'yes maybe you'r right' Rachel and stoped crying.
'Ok we will leave after school' josh said and both waled back into the town (oh yeah they live next door to each other)
Josh walked Rachel to the door and gave her a kiss on the hand then walked off.When Rachel walked in to her house, her father was asleep on ther sofa
'i'm home dad' Rachel said, putting a blanket over him, and went to her room, 'what dose this letter mean?' Rachel asked herself.
(Josh)
when Josh got home his kid brother had fallen asleep doing his homework, so Josh put him into hs bed and walked off into his room and went to bad but he was still thinking of the letter and how safe Rachel was going to be.
(the next day) (Rachel)
'hey sweety' rachels dad yelled (oh yeahshe dosen't know her mum) 'time to get up' he said
'yeah, yeah i'm coming' rachel said walking to the bathroom to have a shower, once she got out and got dressed she went to the kitchen and made some breakfast, then watched t.v till Josh came to get her.
(josh)
'come on Josh you don't want to keep Rachel waiting do you?' Josh's mother said
'yes mum i will be right down' josh repiled walking into the kitchen and made breakfast,once he finshed he went and had a shower got dressed and went to pick up Rachle with his kid brother.
(rachel)
'hey dad' rachel said turning off the t.v
'yeah what's up sweety?' Rachel father asked
'well um-' rachel was trying to ask her father somthing but then,
'Rachel!' josh yelled from outside
'oh hey josh, bye dad, oh yeah dad i'm going to KIsa's to night so i will see you in the mornin' rachel said and ran out.
'Hey Rachel' said josh's little brother
'Hey Jay' rachel replied 'oh and hi Josh' she said, and they all walked to the primery school.
' Hey Jay can you get a lift with a friend tonight?' Josh said
'what? Are you and Rachel going on a date?' Jay asked and he is only 10 years old 6 years youger then Josh and Rachel
'Why do you need to know?, but can you?' josh asked
'yeah i can' Jay said running off to see his friends.
'Ok off the school' Josh said looking at rachel
'yeah' Rachel said walking off because she didn't want Josh to see her blood shot eyes from crying
'hey Rachel have you been crying?' Josh asked trying to catch up to her
'yeah i have i couldn't think of anything but that letter' Rachel said snd she stopped and pulling the letter from her bag,
'hey Rachel don't worry, we will get Kisa to take a look at it and we will find out who sent it' josh said putting his arms across her back and gave her a big hug
(at school)
'hey josh why are we here? Why can't we just go to Kisa's' Rachel asked standing at the frount of the school,
'well we have a test and i know you wouldn't want to fall to 4th on the list, would you?' Josh said taking Rachel's hand and walking into the school.
(inthe class rom)
'Okay class, start the test' Mrs K said (their teacher they have when they have a test)
(1 hour and 44 minutes later)
'Mrs K, i'm done' Rachel said handing in her test into the teacher, leaving the room.
(5minutes later)
'done Mrs K' Josh said, handing his test into the teacher and then moving off to see Rachel.
(front of the school)
'Hey Rachel are you ready to go?' Josh asked walking up to Rachel
'yeah i'm ready but-' Rachel stoped before she finshed her sentene
'but what?' josh asked looking at rachel who was crying ' but what? Rachel' Josh said
'it's nothing' Rachel said wiping away the tears on her cheal
'Hey Rachel no one will hurt you, not when your'r with me' Josh said taking her hand and pulling her closer to him and kissing her on the forehead, Rachel blushed 'Rachel let's go' Josh said looking at Rachel with a smail on his face.
(3 hours later)
'here we are' Josh said looking up at a flat of rocks going up,
'Let's go Josh' Rachel said and they both ran up as fast as they could,
'KISA!' Rachel yelled
'Rachel, Josh how nice to see you both but why are you here? you'r not ment to be here for one more week' Kisa said giving Rachel a hug
'Kisa look at this' Josh said handing Kisa the letter
hello rachel
i know where you live, i know who you love and i know how to take all that away, i also know how to take away your life.
'do you know who wrote it and why?' Josh asked holding Rachel
'yes i do' Kisa said
'WHAT!?' Rachel and Josh both yelled
'who Kisa please tell me' Rachel said as Josh let go and stepped back 'kisa who?' Rachel said
'your sister Rachel' Kisa replied
'ha ha Kisa i dont have a sister' Rachel said
'Oh yeah, when your Mother had to leave she had to take her with her' Kisa said
'hey Kisa how do you know so much about Rachel's Mother?' Josh asked
'well i do but Rachel trust me, she means what she said' Kisa said handing Rachel a pair of guns and Josh a sword
'what are these for?' Josh asked looking at the sword
'they are for you to use, you know how to use them and now you know why i made you practes with fake ones' Kisa said 'now get in the car' she went on 'we are go to see her' Kisa said and got in the car,
'Hey Rachel are you ok?' Josh asked taking her hand
'no i mean if this person is my sister why did she send me this letter?' Rachel asked
'i don't know but we will find out soon' Josh said and they both got into the car.
(5 hours and 55 minutes later in the car)
'We are here, are you ready Rachel?' Kisa said as they pulled up to a miltary scientific laboratory
' um Kisa why are we here?' Josh asked
'well this is where she is and you will find out alot here Rachel' Kisa said
'what do you mean by that?' Rachel asked
'you will find out' Kisa said looking back at Rachel who was holding Joshs hand, they came up to a door
'it's me' Kisa said and the door opened
'Hello Kisa who is this?' a person asked
'it's Rachel and josh' Kisa said and everyone looked
'Kisa let me guess she is here to see Anna?' a woman said
yes she is' kisa said
'um Kisa who is Anna?' Rachel asked still holding Joshs hand
'Anna is your sister' Kisa said and walked off Rachel and Josh both follwed, soon they came up to another door but people were like trying to hide something or at least keep something in.
'is she in there?' Josh asked
'yes' Kisa replied
'Kisa would you like to go in?' one of the people asked
'um kisa why are you so well know here?' Rachel asked
'well i use to be in the army just like you Father, but we will talk after you meet her' Kisa said
'okay' Rachel said and the door opened, Rachel griped on to joshs arm and walked in
'Hello sister' Anna said she was covered in blood she was sitting on the floor
'are you the one who sent me this note?' Rachel asked letting go of josh
'yes, i am so glad you got it, but i didn't think you would come to see me' Anna said standing up
'what did you think i would do, run?' Rachel said trying to make it seem like she wasn't scard
'well i guess living with a 5 star general for your whole life you would learn how to hide your fear' Anna said
'what Father is a 5 star general?' Rachel said shocked but she was not the only one Josh was too but Anna just learghed 'what are you larghing about Anna?' Rachel said
'he is not our Father, our Father is dead' Anna said
'what, no' Rachel said and ran out, Josh went after her and did Kisa and Anna
(outside)
'RACHEL WAIT!' Josh yelled, Rachel stopped and turned to him, she had tears falling from her eyes water falls (well at the speed) 'Rachel i'm sorry i didn't tell you about you Father' Kisa said coming out of nowhere
'what you known' rachel asked about to turn and run till
'she had to know she is our mother' Anna siad who was behind Rachel
'is this true?' Rachel asked
'yes i am so sorry' Kisa said then rachel ran off back into the palce.
'why Kisa why didn't you tell her?'Josh asked
'because i thorght if i did she would never learn how to fight with me' Kisa said
'now i get it' Josh said
' what do you get?' Kisa asked
'well it was wird how you can fight so well' Josh said
'yeah well it's nice that you say that but where did Anna go?' Kisa said
'oh no you dont think she is with rachel do you?' Josh said
'i think she is' Kisa replied and they both ran after them.
(battel feald)
'why?, why would she keep this from me?' Rachel said to herself 'I feel like an idote' Rachel pulled one of the two guns from her balt and put it to her head
'what do you think you are doing?' Anna said walking in to the room 'well then what are you waiting for, if you really want to die pull the trigger and leave Josh to deal with the loss if his lover' Anna said
'what is with you Anna?' Rachel said putting the gun back into her balt
'what do you mean?' Anna asked as Josh and Kisa ran in
'you wrote me that letter and now you save my life' Rachel said
'well to tell you the truth i know if wrote that letter you would come and everything i said was a lie i didn't know where you lived i didn't know who you loved or how to take away your life but i did know you are someone who faces her fears' Anna said
'how?' Josh said walking up behind Rachel and putting his arms around her
'well because i hears it from Mother' Anna said looking at Kisa
'what?'Rachel asked
'well mother know one day you would have to find out about me and she thorght this was the best way because if she told you, you would run but if you were scared you would face it head on' Anna siad
'so how did you get the letter to her?' Josh asked
'by me' Kisa said 'i put the letter in you bag when you were asleep that is why i known who wrote it' Kisa said
'so why are you here Anna' Rachel asked
'well when mum had to leave you with the geberal she toke me with her and she came here and now i am a solder and went to help train you' Anna said
'so what will we do now?' Rachel said
'well you and Josh go back on living the way you did and i will go on living the way I did and every thing will stay the same but evey 2nd week i will come and see you okay?' Anna said
'yeah it sounds good' Rachel said and Josh let go and Rachel went up to Anna and hugged her.
And so it went back to how it was but after about 2 years went past Rachel and Josh got married, oh yeah, Rachel still thinks the general as her Father and so does Anna.
THE END
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