Chapter 6 - 6
Submitted March 22, 2006 Updated April 5, 2006 Status Incomplete | thank to mudvayne. they gave me all my insperation to this story. thanks.
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Chapter 6 - 6
Chapter 6 - 6
“I guess your feeling better so I have to go to work now.” She said in a hurry, as she collected her papers and what not.
“Oh. Don't think I'm like that though. Because I'm not all,” I said looking to her. “That man, Jigsaw, he did something to me. That wasn't physical but mental.” then I stopped when I realized I was yelling at something that was no longer there. She left and I was all alone at a time like this. I didn't even notice her living me. “What's wrong with me?” I muttered to myself.
She was back in 1 hour and 2 minutes. I didn't move an inch since she left. I just watched the clock with an undisturbed stair. As she walked in and seen me there she landed on the bed then looked in my eye with sadness and despair. I hear nothing but silence of nothing. When she spoke the sound came form her gentle lips as a harp or a bird. The soothing sound of Elia's voice but she didn't say anything real. At least that I could understand. She was blank, and I could understand that.
As we ate lunch we didn't talk. We had nothing to say. Then, when that was over. I went out. I didn't say anything about it. I just lift. And that was that. I got in my car and drove off. Stopping by a vender and getting out. I got a soda and went back. But someone pulled up it started to rain. Their window was painted black and red then I saw it. On the back window it read “I KILLED YOU!!” someone then stepped out I ran for the man dressed in black. I stop cold. Filled with anger I turn around and ran towards the stranger. I can to a halt seeing it was my father.
He smiled and said “You were the one that killed me caused me pain and suffering. So I return the favor.” He paused to hear me cry out several. “FATHER! Why have you betrayed me father.” So he just smiled and said to me “Simple cause I could.” I dropped to me feet crying. “HHHHH” he laughed in me face. Like a twisted freak. “Goodbye son.” He said living.
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sis on April 13, 2006, 12:05:22 PM
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WOW!Awesome job,Hmmm his father?Great job!Great plot twist!=D
bluefairy421 on April 11, 2006, 8:34:33 AM
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theonenamezander on April 11, 2006, 1:43:26 AM
bluefairy421 on April 6, 2006, 8:45:49 AM
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sis on April 6, 2006, 6:12:33 AM
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