Chapter 5 - Dazed and Confused Runaway
Submitted June 19, 2004 Updated June 24, 2004 Status Incomplete | Krackle age 13 goes throght a lot scarier changes than just pubertey. Krackle's powers are tally outta control
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Chapter 5 - Dazed and Confused Runaway
Chapter 5 - Dazed and Confused Runaway
Krackle mean while ran and kept on running till he colapsed in
exsuation in an alley way. Unable to stand the thought that he might
have killed Heath, he decided he needed to stay as far as he could from
his friends. He didn't want to hurt them too. He made up his mind he
wasn't going back, Heath had brought him in to his home and look at
what he did in return for his kindness.
Someone interrupts his self-directed hatred.
"Hey kid you look lost...!" A Girl's voice said
Krackle raises his head from his knees "...What...?"
"I said You look lost..." "What's your name?"
"Krackle" "...Who are you?" Krackle asks looking at the strangely
dressed White hedgehog with bluish hair
"I'm Tsurara." She raised her hand toward the wall, leaving a large
area of the wall covered in ice. "I'm an elemental like you..." "Come
with me..." She said in a strangly cold yet welcoming tone.
Krackle gets to his feet to follow her thinking she might be trying to
help him. Krackle at least wasn't alone with his thoughts anymore.
"I heard you took out a some tough guy out in the middle of the
street." Tsurara said
"I didn't mean to...!" Krackle said
"You're powers are over running you aren't they....?"
"Yeah I can't control them!"
"Just follow me, theres a group of us, we are all elementals, we can
help you to learn how to put your unique abilities to better use."
Krackle niavely follows her to a the Elemental hideout.
As they enter one of the guards asks "Who is this runt....!"
"Hes the electric elemental, we were all looking for."
"I expect a great reward for bringing in a powerful new member."
"C'mom I need to introduce you to our master..."
A little nervous voice inside Krackle's head, "This isn't good theres
no way out!"
As he was led down the hallway, he felt the other members leering at
him as he passed.
He knew he was trapped now and had a strong feeling of unease and
stupidity.
"Master the new member has been captured."
"Excellent 1.1.3."
"Here is your reward..."
A bag rises from the counter opens and fills itself with jewels, and
travels back to Tsurara.
Krackle stares blankly it was like something off a Sci-fi movie.
"You are gracious my master..."
"Welcome to the cult of the Elemental Supremecy..." "Your designation
is 0.0 till you have proven your worth to me..."
Krackle feeling really uneasy finally says something. "Hey wait a
minute, I didn't say I wanted to join you guys...!"
"You must see this is your only option, the under developed life forms
may still reign supreme thanks to larger population. However the
Elementals are more advanced they're for more entitled to rule than,
those weaklings."
"...But..I have friends that don't have powers..." "I'll never hurt
them..."
"You will do as you are told 0.0 or you will be brain-washed until you
submit to my will..."
"No!" "I'll never hurt them!"Krackle yells defiantly.
Suddenly Krackle had a sharp peircing headache worse than anything he
had felt before! "Agggggghhhh!" Krackle held his head. He was able
to bearly see the that he was now very close to the ceiling, being held
by some intangable power!
"You submit your will or perish!" She shouts then moved her hand as if
to throw something, Krackle suddenly flies across the room and slams
into the wall.
As he rubs he sore head and back a group of Elementals pick him up and
take him to a cell and toss him in.
Krackle shakes it off and looks around, confused he asks "Who am
I...?!"
Krackle could still remember some other things but he couldn't remember
his name.
Frusterated he finally came up with name that he thought must be his
name because he sensed it held a lot of importance to him, even though
he couldn't for the life of him remember why. "Is my name Heath...?"
He wondered He looked at the cell he was in and thought"How did I get
here...?" in a daze.
Elsewhere the one really named Heath begins to slowly regain
consciesness. "Uuuughhhhh...." "What happened Heath said confused.
"You alright, bud?"Alex asks being the first to notice his eyes lids
move slightly.
"Heath, were you hit by a car...?!" Flare still hadn't figured out
what exactly had happened yet.
"I.. don't think so..." "No tire marks." Heath said horsely
"Thats not funny Heath...!" Flare yells at him.
"Wait a minute, where is Krackle is he alright?"
Alex: "He disappeared after we loaded you into ambulance."
Flare: "Dart went looking for him..."
Heath:"He did...?" Heath is luke warm about this, unable to decide
whether its a good or bad thing.
exsuation in an alley way. Unable to stand the thought that he might
have killed Heath, he decided he needed to stay as far as he could from
his friends. He didn't want to hurt them too. He made up his mind he
wasn't going back, Heath had brought him in to his home and look at
what he did in return for his kindness.
Someone interrupts his self-directed hatred.
"Hey kid you look lost...!" A Girl's voice said
Krackle raises his head from his knees "...What...?"
"I said You look lost..." "What's your name?"
"Krackle" "...Who are you?" Krackle asks looking at the strangely
dressed White hedgehog with bluish hair
"I'm Tsurara." She raised her hand toward the wall, leaving a large
area of the wall covered in ice. "I'm an elemental like you..." "Come
with me..." She said in a strangly cold yet welcoming tone.
Krackle gets to his feet to follow her thinking she might be trying to
help him. Krackle at least wasn't alone with his thoughts anymore.
"I heard you took out a some tough guy out in the middle of the
street." Tsurara said
"I didn't mean to...!" Krackle said
"You're powers are over running you aren't they....?"
"Yeah I can't control them!"
"Just follow me, theres a group of us, we are all elementals, we can
help you to learn how to put your unique abilities to better use."
Krackle niavely follows her to a the Elemental hideout.
As they enter one of the guards asks "Who is this runt....!"
"Hes the electric elemental, we were all looking for."
"I expect a great reward for bringing in a powerful new member."
"C'mom I need to introduce you to our master..."
A little nervous voice inside Krackle's head, "This isn't good theres
no way out!"
As he was led down the hallway, he felt the other members leering at
him as he passed.
He knew he was trapped now and had a strong feeling of unease and
stupidity.
"Master the new member has been captured."
"Excellent 1.1.3."
"Here is your reward..."
A bag rises from the counter opens and fills itself with jewels, and
travels back to Tsurara.
Krackle stares blankly it was like something off a Sci-fi movie.
"You are gracious my master..."
"Welcome to the cult of the Elemental Supremecy..." "Your designation
is 0.0 till you have proven your worth to me..."
Krackle feeling really uneasy finally says something. "Hey wait a
minute, I didn't say I wanted to join you guys...!"
"You must see this is your only option, the under developed life forms
may still reign supreme thanks to larger population. However the
Elementals are more advanced they're for more entitled to rule than,
those weaklings."
"...But..I have friends that don't have powers..." "I'll never hurt
them..."
"You will do as you are told 0.0 or you will be brain-washed until you
submit to my will..."
"No!" "I'll never hurt them!"Krackle yells defiantly.
Suddenly Krackle had a sharp peircing headache worse than anything he
had felt before! "Agggggghhhh!" Krackle held his head. He was able
to bearly see the that he was now very close to the ceiling, being held
by some intangable power!
"You submit your will or perish!" She shouts then moved her hand as if
to throw something, Krackle suddenly flies across the room and slams
into the wall.
As he rubs he sore head and back a group of Elementals pick him up and
take him to a cell and toss him in.
Krackle shakes it off and looks around, confused he asks "Who am
I...?!"
Krackle could still remember some other things but he couldn't remember
his name.
Frusterated he finally came up with name that he thought must be his
name because he sensed it held a lot of importance to him, even though
he couldn't for the life of him remember why. "Is my name Heath...?"
He wondered He looked at the cell he was in and thought"How did I get
here...?" in a daze.
Elsewhere the one really named Heath begins to slowly regain
consciesness. "Uuuughhhhh...." "What happened Heath said confused.
"You alright, bud?"Alex asks being the first to notice his eyes lids
move slightly.
"Heath, were you hit by a car...?!" Flare still hadn't figured out
what exactly had happened yet.
"I.. don't think so..." "No tire marks." Heath said horsely
"Thats not funny Heath...!" Flare yells at him.
"Wait a minute, where is Krackle is he alright?"
Alex: "He disappeared after we loaded you into ambulance."
Flare: "Dart went looking for him..."
Heath:"He did...?" Heath is luke warm about this, unable to decide
whether its a good or bad thing.
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thunderhead on June 23, 2004, 4:38:24 PM
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neato! must sleep...! School...!
RogueClawdite on June 23, 2004, 2:38:55 AM
LOL! Hey I was thinking of an ending to my fic (man I gotta work on it) and I thought it'd take place in the sky in the rain, and Aurora had to get Jack to help them because he was the only flying character. Here's a little excerpt:
<br>Rouge: "Jack...So nice to see you again...I've MISSED YOU"
<br>Jack: "It ends tonight, Rouge"
<br>Rouge: "We both know I'd win"
<br>Jack: "Oh, I don't have to kill you. I just have to get you on the GROUND. Then You're all Heath's"
<br>Rouge: "Jack...So nice to see you again...I've MISSED YOU"
<br>Jack: "It ends tonight, Rouge"
<br>Rouge: "We both know I'd win"
<br>Jack: "Oh, I don't have to kill you. I just have to get you on the GROUND. Then You're all Heath's"
thunderhead on June 23, 2004, 12:06:08 AM
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