Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted June 16, 2005 Updated June 16, 2005 Status Incomplete | this poems about the color black.....i like the color black...hope it gives u chills....ooooowwww
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
BLACK
by:kayla
black is so intense
it's struggle and it's strain
black is bold and fierce
it's darkness and it's pain
black learks within our shadows
consumes the depth of night
colors in our sins
soaks up all the light
black is inside heartache
it thrives on our despair
black is full of mystery
it hides what isn't there
black lives in our deception
it tells us only lies
it leaves us cold and empty
it's seen inside our eyes
black is full of fear
that never goes away
you can leave the lights on
but it will always stay
by:kayla
black is so intense
it's struggle and it's strain
black is bold and fierce
it's darkness and it's pain
black learks within our shadows
consumes the depth of night
colors in our sins
soaks up all the light
black is inside heartache
it thrives on our despair
black is full of mystery
it hides what isn't there
black lives in our deception
it tells us only lies
it leaves us cold and empty
it's seen inside our eyes
black is full of fear
that never goes away
you can leave the lights on
but it will always stay
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advent_children_rulez on December 20, 2005, 5:04:25 PM
i luv black it is soooo kl it is my favourite colour!!!(ok its not a colour it's an absense of light but hu cares) i luv this poem it is so kl i weaer black most the time heck im wearin it now but i dont agree with lines 9 10 13 14 15 soz i am picky 2day had too much caffine red devil has 34% pure caffine content on it and says not 4 kids but anyways adds to favsInvdrDana on September 11, 2005, 5:26:39 AM
InvdrDana on
That was awesome! It felt so chilling as you said!heartless-sinner on June 17, 2005, 7:08:32 AM
so very true cuz were there is light there are shadows.I really love it!!! AWESOME!!!!! ^-^! i also love black but my parents wont let me wear too much of it.