Konoha High: Christmas Break
Submitted January 25, 2008 Updated April 7, 2009 Status Incomplete | The Konoha High gang is looking forward to their upcoming Christmas Break,and when a group trip is proposed,everyone is excited.But once again there's drama occuring with love,friendships,new friends and possible rivals,and much more.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - chapter 1
Submitted: January 25, 2008 • Updated: January 25, 2008
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Chapter 2 - chapter 2
Submitted: February 1, 2008 • Updated: February 1, 2008
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Chapter 3 - chapter 3
Submitted: February 9, 2008 • Updated: February 9, 2008
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Chapter 4 - chapter 4
Submitted: February 17, 2008 • Updated: February 17, 2008
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Chapter 5 - chapter 5
Submitted: February 24, 2008 • Updated: February 24, 2008
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Chapter 6 - chapter 6
Submitted: March 1, 2008 • Updated: March 1, 2008
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Chapter 7 - chapter 7
Submitted: March 8, 2008 • Updated: March 8, 2008
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Chapter 8 - chapter 8
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
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Chapter 9 - chapter 9
Submitted: March 22, 2008 • Updated: March 22, 2008
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Chapter 10 - chapter 10
Submitted: March 29, 2008 • Updated: March 29, 2008
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Chapter 11 - chapter 11
Submitted: April 5, 2008 • Updated: April 5, 2008
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Chapter 12 - chapter 12
Submitted: April 12, 2008 • Updated: April 12, 2008
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Chapter 13 - chapter 13
Submitted: April 20, 2008 • Updated: April 20, 2008
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Chapter 14 - chapter 14
Submitted: April 26, 2008 • Updated: April 26, 2008
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Chapter 15 - chapter 15
Submitted: May 4, 2008 • Updated: May 4, 2008
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Chapter 16 - chapter 16
Submitted: May 10, 2008 • Updated: May 10, 2008
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Chapter 17 - chapter 17
Submitted: May 22, 2008 • Updated: May 22, 2008
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Chapter 18 - chapter 18
Submitted: June 1, 2008 • Updated: June 1, 2008
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Chapter 19 - chapter 19
Submitted: June 12, 2008 • Updated: June 12, 2008
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Chapter 20 - chapter 20
Submitted: June 22, 2008 • Updated: June 22, 2008
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Chapter 21 - chapter 21
Submitted: July 3, 2008 • Updated: July 3, 2008
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Chapter 22 - chapter 22
Submitted: July 13, 2008 • Updated: July 13, 2008
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Chapter 23 - chapter 23
Submitted: July 19, 2008 • Updated: July 19, 2008
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Chapter 24 - chapter 24
Submitted: July 30, 2008 • Updated: July 30, 2008
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Chapter 25 - chapter 25
Submitted: August 1, 2008 • Updated: August 1, 2008
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Chapter 26 - chapter 26
Submitted: October 4, 2008 • Updated: October 4, 2008
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Chapter 27 - chapter 27
Submitted: November 30, 2008 • Updated: November 30, 2008
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Chapter 28 - chapter 28
Submitted: January 30, 2009 • Updated: January 30, 2009
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Chapter 29 - chapter 29
Submitted: April 7, 2009 • Updated: April 7, 2009
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Chapter 29 - chapter 29
Submitted: April 7, 2009 • Updated: April 7, 2009
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eelchic on February 7, 2010, 4:49:17 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 29)
totally wasnt bad.eelchic on February 7, 2010, 4:44:46 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 28)
very very goodeelchic on February 7, 2010, 4:38:21 AM
eelchic on (Chapter: 27)
aw that was so sweet!erandor3 on June 23, 2009, 12:06:08 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 29)
ur chapters are never bad owo!!!!!erandor3 on June 23, 2009, 11:58:32 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 28)
DUN DUN DUN INO AND SAKURA ARE GOING TO USE THEIR PLANS AGAIN!!!!! and im finally back on here ^^ :3kogalover2013 on June 10, 2009, 9:21:15 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 29)
good [ino hits me in the head] sorry i mean awsomekogalover2013 on June 10, 2009, 9:15:21 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 28)
awsome as alwayskogalover2013 on June 10, 2009, 9:09:22 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 27)
so sweet lol im backkogalover2013 on June 10, 2009, 9:04:50 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 26)
lol cuteSymphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2009, 4:59:00 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 29)
it's not that THAT bad.its actually really good^^winxgirl21 on April 23, 2009, 9:24:28 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 29)
thanks! =) you're one of the few who thinks that, lol.Symphoniaprincess101 on April 4, 2009, 9:48:46 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 28)
oh wow lolwinxgirl21 on April 7, 2009, 11:22:55 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
lol. you know what's funny? I'm just getting ready to update, and you commented so closely to update time...XD sorry, i'm just a little insane right now...Symphoniaprincess101 on April 4, 2009, 9:40:12 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 27)
NAH!!!!!!!!KAWWAII NE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^W^winxgirl21 on April 7, 2009, 11:21:33 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
lol. =)GreyPichu on January 30, 2009, 11:42:16 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 28)
I'm so glad you updated, It's great! =3winxgirl21 on January 30, 2009, 11:52:06 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
thanks! =3Kohakucrazy on January 30, 2009, 10:54:45 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 28)
AWESOME!!!! OOh...Tema's found a boyfriend....* grins evilly* Oh Tema! * goes through the crowd to find her* Anyway..Update please! * has Temari by the arm* We need to chatwinxgirl21 on January 30, 2009, 11:51:28 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
haha, poor Temari!Kohakucrazy on February 1, 2009, 2:39:46 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: index)
Ah she fine....* watches Temari go back to find dan afte rour little chat* Just a little chat....winxgirl21 on February 1, 2009, 6:01:22 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
lol, ok, then.zerotimberwolf on January 30, 2009, 8:07:05 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 28)
This is good, cant wait for more ^^winxgirl21 on January 30, 2009, 8:12:12 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 28)
thanks! =) I'm working on the next chapter now and hoping to get a lot of it done..>.<zerotimberwolf on December 17, 2008, 7:15:01 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 27)
Awesome!!!!!winxgirl21 on December 17, 2008, 7:47:14 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
thanks! =)Kohakucrazy on December 14, 2008, 8:13:19 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 27)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW! >W< SO SWEET!winxgirl21 on December 14, 2008, 8:23:01 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 27)
I'm glad that you thought so. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on October 12, 2008, 9:30:44 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 26)
...AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW^//////////////^that was cute^^10,000,000 of any kinds of foods you like^^winxgirl21 on October 15, 2008, 6:23:30 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
thanks. =) i've been trying to work on the next chapter, but I'm currently on comptuer restriction. my mom left, and my watchdog sister is studying...so i snuck on =) lol.erandor3 on October 5, 2008, 8:22:36 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 26)
lol kibas in love kibas in love*says teasiongly pointing at kiba*X3kiba:.....i will hunt u down with akamaru and then kill u and let akamaru eat ur inards.....
me:O_O SAVE ME!*hides behind sasuke the chicken butt haired boy*chicken butt hair boy will save me :D
sasuke:dont toy with me.....
*hides behind sakura*ok nice and friendly pink haired sakura will save me :D
winxgirl21 on October 7, 2008, 5:49:08 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
haha XDerandor3 on October 20, 2008, 8:28:33 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
hooray for the nice and friendly pink haired sakura!*hug*=3winxgirl21 on October 21, 2008, 7:13:06 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
hooray for Sakura! lolnextguardian on October 5, 2008, 1:54:31 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 26)
Very nice work, as always :)winxgirl21 on October 7, 2008, 5:48:19 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
thanks =)cloudaeris on October 4, 2008, 12:36:51 PM
cloudaeris on (Chapter: 26)
Pretty awesome stuffwinxgirl21 on October 5, 2008, 1:04:23 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
thanks =)zerotimberwolf on October 4, 2008, 10:15:50 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 26)
Awesome chapter Gaara rocks!winxgirl21 on October 4, 2008, 10:27:54 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
haha, yes, I <3 gaara =)thanks so much for commenting!
Kohakucrazy on October 4, 2008, 8:14:06 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 26)
Wow... I love this chapter!winxgirl21 on October 4, 2008, 8:30:15 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
thankies, i'm glad you did. =)GreyPichu on October 4, 2008, 8:01:16 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 26)
YAY, I'M SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! =D OMG 2 more couples for the story, awesomesauce!winxgirl21 on October 4, 2008, 8:29:05 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 26)
I'm glad you're glad, lol. =) thanks for the comment! I know I've been gone for a while, hopefully I'll be back for a good while now.
QuestionMarks109 on August 28, 2008, 12:08:21 PM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: index)
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!11!!!11ONE!!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!winxgirl21 on August 29, 2008, 3:30:35 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
sorry...I've had awful writer's block lately...I haven't even been able to write at all. i've beent rying to work on the next chapter...but I just can't seem to write anything.Kohakucrazy on August 19, 2008, 4:37:11 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 25)
* sigh* ITAAA!! That may have been funny, but it wasn't nice...Awesome cahpter though! It's a real treat for me since I dun have internet, but I don't on much anyways...Keep up the good work, I'll have no complaints of not being able to use the net much... ^^winxgirl21 on August 19, 2008, 8:56:55 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
oh, wow. I would die with no internet. Hopefully when you get on again, I'll have updated, but i have extreme writer's block right now. I can't write more than a sentence at a time...>.<kogalover2013 on August 17, 2008, 10:46:56 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 25)
lol and fyi i luv dat songwinxgirl21 on August 17, 2008, 10:49:03 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
lol, I love it, too!kogalover2013 on August 17, 2008, 10:22:23 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 23)
coowinxgirl21 on August 17, 2008, 10:47:25 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
=)kogalover2013 on August 17, 2008, 10:35:00 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 24)
coowinxgirl21 on August 17, 2008, 10:42:12 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
=)cloudaeris on August 4, 2008, 9:26:37 AM
cloudaeris on (Chapter: 25)
Poor Sasukewinxgirl21 on August 4, 2008, 9:41:42 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
lol, I know...erandor3 on August 4, 2008, 12:31:01 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 25)
oh noe the chicken butt haired boy is mad =O run away!winxgirl21 on August 4, 2008, 3:48:10 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
haha, yes, run away! XDQuestionMarks109 on July 30, 2008, 10:11:17 AM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: 24)
Geebus Gaara stop acting like such a sour poos! This a great chance! DO IT ! DO IT !-Early Comment FINALLY!-
Anywho, that chapter was great! If i were Gaara i wouldn't believe that "Lost him on the Dance Floor" thing. All you gotta do is look for spikey black hair ^_^. As usual, great job!
winxgirl21 on July 30, 2008, 11:19:44 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
haha, but Gaara doesn't know that. and maybe there's some other guy with black chicken butt hair out there.lol, just had to say that. XDerandor3 on August 4, 2008, 12:24:13 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: index)
yay black chicken butt hair!XDerandor3 on August 4, 2008, 12:23:07 AM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 24)
yea just ask some one "Hey have u seena guy with black hair that makes him look like a cockatoo?"XD lolSymphoniaprincess101 on August 3, 2008, 3:16:31 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 25)
the itachi part was funny lolwinxgirl21 on August 3, 2008, 6:08:33 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
glad you think so. =) he's my favorite character to write.Symphoniaprincess101 on August 3, 2008, 3:10:54 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 24)
Yay^^btw "Her hair was dimply straightened..." you spelled simply wrong.winxgirl21 on August 3, 2008, 6:07:06 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
ooo! thanks so much for catching taht, no one else pointed that out to me. I'll have to try to change it.Symphoniaprincess101 on August 5, 2008, 7:53:52 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: index)
nah it sounds funny lolwinxgirl21 on August 5, 2008, 7:58:19 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
lol, ok.QuestionMarks109 on August 3, 2008, 3:09:33 AM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: index)
LOL@ITACHI! I would so be pissed if my lder brother did some sht like that. xD. Why do I find himnthe funniest in this story? xD ! xD ! xD ! xD ! SPAM! Lol, anywho. Meghan is starting to take interst in Kiba....^-^!!! I Luv this Chappie! Good Job!winxgirl21 on August 3, 2008, 6:05:53 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
haha, I have so much fun writing his character. It's my favorite part to write =) I have no clue about if she'll be with Kiba or not...I haven't decided yet, lol.nextguardian on August 1, 2008, 12:44:44 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 25)
You always give Itachi the best parts, it's hilarious! I didn't know he DJed between Akatsuki gigs! lol, nice chapter!winxgirl21 on August 2, 2008, 4:20:44 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
haha, of course he DJs between Akatsuki gigs. it's the cool thing to do. I love writing his part. it's just so much fun. =)
GreyPichu on August 1, 2008, 2:17:10 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 25)
OMG they requested my favorite song! =Dwinxgirl21 on August 1, 2008, 4:25:48 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
lol, someone from fanfiction.net actually requested that I put the song in the story, and since it worked in alright, i put it in there. =)zerotimberwolf on August 1, 2008, 1:44:04 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 25)
Oh I would really be pissed if my brother did something like that to mewinxgirl21 on August 1, 2008, 1:51:32 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 25)
haha, i think anyone would be.GreyPichu on July 30, 2008, 11:35:52 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 24)
ya that last comment from Gaara wasnt very nice. lol kiba kinda acts like he likes Meghan. =]winxgirl21 on July 31, 2008, 8:29:43 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
no, it wasn't very nice. haha, still haven't figured that last thing out yet. It's a toss-up for how things will turn out.zerotimberwolf on July 30, 2008, 9:59:08 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 24)
Come on Gaara...no reason for the "too cool for life" routine...winxgirl21 on July 30, 2008, 11:12:47 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
lol, apparently he thinsk there is.zerotimberwolf on July 30, 2008, 11:20:34 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
yeah apparently lmaowinxgirl21 on July 30, 2008, 11:24:11 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
=)cloudaeris on July 30, 2008, 9:58:36 AM
cloudaeris on (Chapter: 24)
pretty cool cant wait as always
winxgirl21 on July 30, 2008, 11:10:19 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 24)
thanks! I'm hoping I'll actually get out something on time this time...>.<GreyPichu on July 27, 2008, 6:03:23 AM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 23)
OMG I totally freaked out when Kiba showed up. I wonder what will happen between Kiba and Meghan. ^_^winxgirl21 on July 27, 2008, 6:24:31 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
actually, i don't even know yet. ^.^'erandor3 on July 22, 2008, 11:04:43 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 23)
OH NOES KIBA'S HERE =O this can't be good but hopefully he will like meghan and stop chasing Hinata =3winxgirl21 on July 22, 2008, 11:54:34 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
lol, i don't know if he'll like her or not. for now, she's just helping out and getting him away from Hinata.Symphoniaprincess101 on July 22, 2008, 6:40:15 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 23)
I cross my fingers for mitsuki's luck on trying to get garra to dance with her^^winxgirl21 on July 22, 2008, 11:49:57 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
I'll be crossing mine, too, because i don't know what's going to happen yet.Symphoniaprincess101 on July 22, 2008, 6:34:36 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 22)
...oh boy i have bad feeling.winxgirl21 on July 22, 2008, 11:47:39 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
lol, why does everyone get a bad feeling at that part?Symphoniaprincess101 on July 22, 2008, 6:29:00 AM
Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 21)
oh boyO_Owinxgirl21 on July 22, 2008, 11:46:19 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
lol =)QuestionMarks109 on July 21, 2008, 10:08:18 AM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: 23)
Naruto did a great job controlling himself for an Htperactive Person. LOL. Things didn't happen fast, it was a great time! I Hope Gaara dances with her! :3winxgirl21 on July 21, 2008, 11:23:50 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
lol,ya, he did. Hopefully Gaara will dance with her, but only time will tell.kagome99 on July 21, 2008, 4:33:09 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: 23)
wow.naruto was actually pretty calm.
as in, he didn't kill anyone. :D
what happened to my OC?
winxgirl21 on July 21, 2008, 11:23:01 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
haha, ya, although he considered punching Kiba so that he hd no front teeth.your OC just isn't in this part of the story yet. =)
kagome99 on July 23, 2008, 3:19:15 AM
kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
lol.kiba must value his teeth.after all.-- he is a dog.
kay, kay...
i wont ask anymore questions. :D
winxgirl21 on July 24, 2008, 6:14:49 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
haha, ya, i think he does.and ya, don't worry, everything's planned out.
cloudaeris on July 20, 2008, 1:20:12 PM
cloudaeris on (Chapter: 23)
very nicenaruto was a very good boy cause he didnt kill anyone
winxgirl21 on July 20, 2008, 10:18:44 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
lol, how he restrained himself, i have no idea...zerotimberwolf on July 19, 2008, 12:39:53 PM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 23)
I would have acted just like Naruto did, if Kiba touched her I wouldnt blame Naruto for socking him...winxgirl21 on July 19, 2008, 12:44:51 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
lol, I know. Most of the guys i know would've punched him the second he said he wanted to dance with her...nextguardian on July 19, 2008, 12:10:01 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 23)
Naruto was a lot calmer than most would have been. He would have been walking away without his fangs, at best.I don't think the chapter was choppy, I think you spaced things out nicely. Nice job.
winxgirl21 on July 19, 2008, 12:16:16 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 23)
lol, ya, i know.and I'm glad that you think it wasn't choppy...I just feel like i've been having trouble getting my ideas down. it's not writer's block..more like i have too much i want to happen in too little time...
nextguardian on July 20, 2008, 1:02:25 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: index)
That happens to me all the time. What I wound up doing was increasing the length of my chapters.winxgirl21 on July 20, 2008, 10:16:26 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
maybe I should try that...erandor3 on July 16, 2008, 10:05:21 PM
erandor3 on (Chapter: 22)
YAY THEY ARE ALIVE!and temari and ino are both still in one peice (wretsling announcer comes in)announcer:did u say there was going to be a death match?
me:sorry it didn't happen D=
announcer:I'm still getting paid you know
me:no ur not now go away ⌐.⌐
winxgirl21 on July 17, 2008, 2:32:33 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
lol, sorry bout the no death match thing.QuestionMarks109 on July 16, 2008, 3:00:34 AM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: 22)
Aw Man! D: I Wanted to See If They'd Make it. And Temari is just causing so much trouble! And the Part when Ino was stuttering, so classic! This is So Awesome!winxgirl21 on July 16, 2008, 6:05:23 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
you'll see next chapter. =) lolQuestionMarks109 on July 16, 2008, 2:56:11 AM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: 21)
To Be Continued...LOL! I Wonder What Temari could Possilbly do Next!winxgirl21 on July 16, 2008, 6:04:07 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
lol, idk. =)QuestionMarks109 on July 16, 2008, 2:51:37 AM
QuestionMarks109 on (Chapter: 20)
Oooh Boy, Temari's causing troble. I can't await to see what Ino does to her.P.S: Awesome chapter!
winxgirl21 on July 16, 2008, 6:03:09 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 20)
thanks! =)nextguardian on July 15, 2008, 2:18:52 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 22)
Wow...Ticking off either Ino or Temari is like putting a bullseye on your back, I would imagine. Poor Shikamaru. Poor, poor Shikamaru. Two feuding females in his ear...that had to suck for him.winxgirl21 on July 16, 2008, 1:50:37 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
lol, ya, it is exactly like that. XD I do feel kinda bad for Shikamaru...GreyPichu on July 15, 2008, 1:23:03 PM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 22)
omg Ino was SO CLOSE to punching temari! ahh that was good. ^_^winxgirl21 on July 16, 2008, 1:49:04 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
lol, I know. =)Kohakucrazy on July 15, 2008, 3:38:33 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 22)
Awesome! I can't wait for more! And my grad went well.. I used Sakura's hair style! It was so pretty! If I can get an e-mail I could send you pictures.winxgirl21 on July 16, 2008, 1:47:47 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
oh, wow! my e-mail is Meghanlee5@aol.comIt's good that your grad went well. =)
kogalover2013 on July 13, 2008, 5:41:05 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 22)
awsomewinxgirl21 on July 13, 2008, 10:46:47 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
thankies =)kogalover2013 on July 14, 2008, 4:13:06 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: index)
wellcomeieswinxgirl21 on July 14, 2008, 11:11:12 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
=)kogalover2013 on July 13, 2008, 5:27:32 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 21)
omg dramawinxgirl21 on July 13, 2008, 10:45:34 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
lol, I know. XDkogalover2013 on July 14, 2008, 4:12:29 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: index)
lolwinxgirl21 on July 14, 2008, 11:12:24 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: index)
=)cloudaeris on July 13, 2008, 12:33:04 PM
cloudaeris on (Chapter: 22)
Wow i was like hoping for a cat fight but this is still really goodwinxgirl21 on July 13, 2008, 10:43:03 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
ya, I thought about writing a cat fight, but i decided against it, lol.zerotimberwolf on July 13, 2008, 7:55:18 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 22)
That could have turned out a lot worse between Temari and Ino...winxgirl21 on July 13, 2008, 9:49:55 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 22)
ya, I know. I was considering having them fight, but i decided against it, lol.erandor3 on July 6, 2008, 11:21:15 PM
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DUN DUN DUN! trapped in an elevator ino temari and shikamaru.....TEMARIvsINO EXTREME DEATHMATCH WINNER GETS SHIKAMARU! XD lolzerotimberwolf on July 10, 2008, 10:58:00 AM
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Now THAT would be entertainment!winxgirl21 on July 10, 2008, 11:04:18 AM
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lol, that would be something to see. XDwinxgirl21 on July 6, 2008, 11:34:37 PM
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lol, I'd love to see that. XDGreyPichu on July 5, 2008, 2:07:25 PM
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whoa OMG that's so awesome. I wonder if Ino will kill Temari while they're in the elevator. XD lolwinxgirl21 on July 6, 2008, 5:58:09 AM
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lol, I would laugh so hard if Ino killed her. XDnextguardian on July 4, 2008, 1:13:25 PM
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Oh, that seriously sucks! Poor Shikamaru! Having to have Ino in his ear about this...lol, I wouldn't put it past Ino to blame Shikamaru somehow!winxgirl21 on July 6, 2008, 5:57:14 AM
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lol, ya, she probably would blame him. XDcloudaeris on July 3, 2008, 10:53:58 PM
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wow i have always had a fear of getting stuck in an elevator.CAN'T WAIT!
winxgirl21 on July 4, 2008, 2:09:02 AM
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it's not fun getting stuck in one. I got the idea because I got stuck in one while i was at the beach, lol.zerotimberwolf on July 3, 2008, 6:06:56 AM
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wow I cant wait for the next one, its gonna be awesomewinxgirl21 on July 3, 2008, 8:22:58 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 21)
I'm hoping to finish it up and actually update on time this time, lol. =)AlleyCat17 on July 3, 2008, 2:44:07 AM
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great chapter and i love the girls hairs.also that was some way to end the chapter.can't wait for the next chapter.winxgirl21 on July 3, 2008, 2:51:24 AM
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lol, glad you liked the way the chapter ended. I'm hoping the next chapter will turn out really well. =)kagome99 on July 2, 2008, 1:42:36 AM
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drama!!!cant wait!
winxgirl21 on July 3, 2008, 2:49:19 AM
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=) lolkagome99 on July 2, 2008, 1:33:03 AM
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EVIL Temari..very funny... :D
winxgirl21 on July 3, 2008, 2:45:06 AM
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thanks =Dkagome99 on July 2, 2008, 1:27:33 AM
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SWEET!it sounds sooo chocolately...mmm...
:D
it's weird that you used Call of Duty 4...
I actually love that game...well but on the PS3...
im a nerd... :D
oh... and sorry fur not coming on in a while...
been outta town and stuff...
winxgirl21 on July 3, 2008, 2:14:45 AM
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lol, I've never actually played it, I've just heard some guys talking about it...a lot. So I figured it would be good. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on June 27, 2008, 9:50:46 AM
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oh boy...dramawinxgirl21 on June 28, 2008, 9:44:36 AM
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lol, yes, drama. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on June 27, 2008, 9:45:46 AM
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oh boy i feell sorry for antie ten ten's bunswinxgirl21 on June 28, 2008, 9:43:34 AM
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lol, I know, but she looks really pretty with her hair down =)kogalover2013 on June 24, 2008, 12:42:55 PM
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omg sasuke haz a viper dats bad cant wait 4 da dancewinxgirl21 on June 24, 2008, 11:27:26 PM
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lol, it's not bad if he's a good driver. If naruto had gotten a viper, on the other hand...kogalover2013 on June 25, 2008, 4:15:21 PM
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lol bad as in awsome and if naruto had a viper i would hidewinxgirl21 on June 26, 2008, 11:29:38 PM
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lol, oo, ok. =)kogalover2013 on June 27, 2008, 3:50:29 PM
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lolAlleyCat17 on June 24, 2008, 1:53:20 AM
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sweet chapter and i can't wait for the dance to start and i hope shikamaru can find away out of the whloe temari thing before something bad happens and he losses ino but the is super smart so im sure hell know what to do.anyway i hope you update soon so i can find out whats going to happen next.winxgirl21 on June 24, 2008, 11:23:56 PM
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thanks! hopefully he'll get out of it. =) lolcloudaeris on June 23, 2008, 7:04:31 AM
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Poor Naruto he is just dumb to put it nicely. Love Sasuke's car. And as always CAN'T WAIT!!winxgirl21 on June 23, 2008, 10:16:13 AM
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lol, yes he is. And I know. XD Sasuke has an awesome car!Kohakucrazy on June 23, 2008, 6:50:12 AM
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NOOO Update soon before tomorrow! I have grad and I like sakura's hair... BUt I wanna see what Ten's is cuz I may wanna get her style done... Dang it... I'll probably go with Sakura's hair style then..winxgirl21 on June 23, 2008, 10:13:52 AM
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oo, the next chapter isn't wirtten yet or I would! I'm sorry! But good luck at graduation! =)GreyPichu on June 22, 2008, 1:13:57 PM
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Temari acts like she's known Shikamaru for years. lol =]winxgirl21 on June 22, 2008, 10:57:40 PM
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lol, ya, she does. XDnextguardian on June 22, 2008, 12:21:31 PM
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Tenten's reaction is always great. I give her credit for being smart enough to worry about what INo is going to do to her. And, poor Naruto, always left out! Great work!winxgirl21 on June 22, 2008, 12:35:07 PM
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thanks! =) lol, ya Naruto does always seem to get left out...zerotimberwolf on June 22, 2008, 9:45:36 AM
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The guys should be helping Shikamaru out here if they are really friends, but good chapter anywaywinxgirl21 on June 22, 2008, 9:57:50 AM
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don't worry, they're going to help him out, lol.kogalover2013 on June 14, 2008, 6:53:39 AM
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i would be scared lol awsome ficwinxgirl21 on June 21, 2008, 12:00:30 AM
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=) thanks.eelchic on June 13, 2008, 12:16:35 PM
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Great chapter Sakura's necklace sounds breath taking!! the introducing thing should be evry interesting and i can't wait for the hair and make-up!!winxgirl21 on June 20, 2008, 11:59:07 PM
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ya, the introduction should be interesting. I actually got an idea for it while I was on vacation...lol.eelchic on June 13, 2008, 12:10:53 PM
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oh I am nervous for the drama hopefully it doesn't mean any break ups... well anyway GREAT chapter haha i liked how the girls gave the guys matching ties to their dresses I'll have to remember that for next year,lol!winxgirl21 on June 20, 2008, 11:57:06 PM
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we'll just have to see what type of drama will happen...lolnextguardian on June 13, 2008, 12:02:56 PM
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lol, I loved Tenten's reaction at the end! Great chapter all around!winxgirl21 on June 20, 2008, 11:54:26 PM
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thanks! =)eelchic on June 13, 2008, 12:02:54 PM
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Awsome chapter and very cute dresses!!! Mhmm I love my mom's choco chip pancakes!!! they are delish and then i have one plain just plain and then a plain with syrup!!! that was actually what i had 4 breakfast dis morning!! mmmmm those were good!!again amazing chapter!!winxgirl21 on June 20, 2008, 11:52:07 PM
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chocolate chip pancakes rock! =)lol, thanks for commenting!Kohakucrazy on June 13, 2008, 12:00:34 AM
Kohakucrazy on (Chapter: 19)
What are they going to do to TenTen? And I LVOE Sakura's necklace... So pretty..... BUt shouldn't Shikamaru look out for Temari? And Naruto and his ramen... He needs to eat something else for once! -.- I feel bad for Hina-chan to have to deal with that.winxgirl21 on June 20, 2008, 11:50:55 PM
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Thanks! =) it will all come together soon. >=) lol.
zerotimberwolf on June 12, 2008, 10:41:02 AM
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Hmmm...The dance sounds like it will be very interesting...winxgirl21 on June 12, 2008, 11:01:16 AM
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hopefully it will be. =) lolcloudaeris on June 12, 2008, 10:22:41 AM
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Thats coolioness HAHA.Great stuff.CAn't Wait.winxgirl21 on June 12, 2008, 10:29:30 AM
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=) thanks!QuestionMarks109 on June 12, 2008, 8:42:03 AM
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Awwww No Drama in This Chappie. But Kewl Chappeh Tho! HAS Sakura done that many times?winxgirl21 on June 12, 2008, 9:17:02 AM
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no, no drama. in the next few chapters though it'll hopefully start to pick up. yes, she has. lol
GreyPichu on June 12, 2008, 1:01:12 AM
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amethysts, is that how u spell it? i wouldn't know cuz i dont know much about jewelry but wat color is that jem supposed to be?winxgirl21 on June 12, 2008, 5:07:25 AM
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an amethyst is purple. it's the birthstone for february. =)QuestionMarks109 on June 17, 2008, 11:49:15 AM
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Rubies Pwn Morewinxgirl21 on June 20, 2008, 11:49:33 PM
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I prefer amathysts over everything, though I may be a bit biased because it's my birthstone, lol. =)Kohakucrazy on June 7, 2008, 5:55:47 AM
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Awesome chapter!winxgirl21 on June 7, 2008, 6:20:40 AM
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thanks! =)Symphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 7:18:16 AM
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...*sigh*LOL Neji got a pink tie and dad got a purple one LOLwinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 7:32:43 AM
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pink and purple ties are wayy cool, lol. =)erandor3 on June 6, 2008, 7:10:22 AM
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uh-oh temaris gonna try steal shikamaru this could be bad :owinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 7:30:32 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 18)
yesh, it could be.erandor3 on June 6, 2008, 7:01:58 AM
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PANCAKES :Dwinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 7:29:15 AM
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yay for pancakes! =Derandor3 on June 6, 2008, 6:55:56 AM
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christmas yay XD:Pwinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 7:27:50 AM
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I kno! I <3 christmas! lolSymphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 6:24:33 AM
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wow even i.....nevermind i go that crayz over chocolate too lolwinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:53:17 AM
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lol, i thought that they didn't go too crazy over it. i would've been freaking out over it...Symphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 6:17:05 AM
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW^///^ UNCLE NEJI SAID SOMETHING IS CUTE OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!O_Owinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:52:17 AM
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lol, yes, he did. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 6:10:31 AM
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LOL dad got draged out of bed again by mom^^winxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:49:46 AM
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lolSymphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 6:05:41 AM
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wow...that's my mom^^haha dad^0^winxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:48:55 AM
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who? lolSymphoniaprincess101 on June 6, 2008, 5:59:30 AM
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tipical narutowinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:47:10 AM
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lol =)QuestionMarks109 on June 6, 2008, 5:35:02 AM
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Uh to the Oh. Temari's about to becom e the homewrecker i nvr tawt she was. This is baaad. As for kankuro....Should I Add more dots? But all and all, this was a great chapter. Can't wait to see more drama. I Wonder if sumone's gonna try and put the moves on SasukeOther Me: No Duuh!
Why?
Other Me: He's Hawt. â¥_â¥
Oh Gawd. Why ME?!
winxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:46:31 AM
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lol, I'm actually not sure about more drama with Sasuke and Sakura. I've been considering it, but I'm waiting for a really good idea with it. =)cloudaeris on June 4, 2008, 11:48:27 AM
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nice cant waitwinxgirl21 on June 6, 2008, 6:42:24 AM
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=) I'm hoping to get the next chapter finished up soon.kogalover2013 on June 3, 2008, 5:48:17 PM
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awsome cant wait 2 c wat happenswinxgirl21 on June 4, 2008, 4:35:11 AM
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=) graciaskogalover2013 on June 4, 2008, 12:26:14 PM
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tanadaGreyPichu on June 2, 2008, 11:48:33 AM
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oh i see how the drama's coming now... awesome. =3winxgirl21 on June 3, 2008, 3:40:24 AM
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lol, glad that you think so. =)nextguardian on June 1, 2008, 12:17:02 PM
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Great chapter! Temari's a troublemaker, lol.winxgirl21 on June 2, 2008, 4:34:10 AM
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yes, she is, lol.zerotimberwolf on June 1, 2008, 7:39:28 AM
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I'm sensing major drama...Shikamaru can handle it thoughwinxgirl21 on June 1, 2008, 7:46:38 AM
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but can Ino...?zerotimberwolf on June 1, 2008, 1:32:12 PM
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Oh thats a good question...winxgirl21 on June 2, 2008, 4:35:29 AM
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lol,ya.QuestionMarks109 on May 31, 2008, 6:34:00 AM
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Oo! I Cnt WAIT For the Drama. And the Dresses Seem pretty cute too. I wonder what the Boys are gonna where....<.< >.>winxgirl21 on May 31, 2008, 10:18:18 PM
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they'll probably just wear suits with matching ties. XD lolcloudaeris on May 23, 2008, 12:03:50 PM
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Nice chapter.Omg here comes drama I hate it thats all ive heard at school this year.yea but atleast here its not real lol Love keep writing
winxgirl21 on May 25, 2008, 1:51:39 AM
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trust me, i totally hate drama at school. for the past month, that's all my group of friends has been. It's a lot better just to write about it, lol.kogalover2013 on May 22, 2008, 3:41:14 PM
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awsomewinxgirl21 on May 23, 2008, 5:44:57 AM
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=Dnextguardian on May 22, 2008, 12:57:55 PM
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You did a nice job, as always. It's funny how you compared the guy's reactions and the girl's reactions.winxgirl21 on May 23, 2008, 5:44:06 AM
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thanks. =)zerotimberwolf on May 22, 2008, 8:39:50 AM
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lol now I'm hungry...god I sound like Chojiwinxgirl21 on May 22, 2008, 8:48:39 AM
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lol, don't worry, i'm always hungry.GreyPichu on May 22, 2008, 8:26:29 AM
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Yay, you updated, great job! don't worry about the late update, it's okay!! =]winxgirl21 on May 22, 2008, 8:47:49 AM
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Thanks so much! *gives you hug for not being upset*cloudaeris on May 12, 2008, 6:59:09 AM
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SOOOOO CuTe! Haha can't wait!winxgirl21 on May 12, 2008, 7:40:41 AM
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gracias! hopefulyl I'll get the next chapter finished soon...I seem to be updating late a lot lately..>.<QuestionMarks109 on May 12, 2008, 12:41:49 PM
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Awww, that was so Cute. Sasuke was so Sweet ! Even tho I Hate his Guts. xD . Weird how they all had White Gold heart NEcklaces, hmmmm . . . . *Nancy Drew Face*Awesome Chapter ! Can't Wait for More
winxgirl21 on May 13, 2008, 6:42:49 AM
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haha, pretty much the guys all went shopping together, and i just like white gold the best. XDQuestionMarks109 on May 12, 2008, 12:31:12 PM
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Lmfao, Gaara's being Dragged. Lol. Isooo Feel Lyk Sasuke Right Now. And Mitsuki acts Like Me LOLL.Awesome Chapter!
ON TO TEH NEXT ONE(Why am i always so late? -.-;)
winxgirl21 on May 13, 2008, 6:38:21 AM
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lol, turst me, i feel like Sasuke a lot. XDI think everyone acts like Mitsuki at times, some of us mroe than others...lol.
kagome99 on May 12, 2008, 5:01:14 AM
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koolio!!cant wait!!
maybe if you say please ill give you starbucks(my fave)!!
|:D->-<
winxgirl21 on May 12, 2008, 7:35:57 AM
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Thankjs!oo, please?! lol.
kagome99 on May 13, 2008, 5:02:53 AM
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sure...why not? wat could possibly happen?
its not like ur gonna turn into godzilla and rampage through manhattan and look fur every little drop of coffee you can find...
wait...
u wont... wont u?
XD
winxgirl21 on May 13, 2008, 6:47:23 AM
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*shifty eyes* no...of couse not...eelchic on May 11, 2008, 3:42:27 AM
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OMG that was so romantic I mite cry lol!!!! it was toally amazing!& omg I love Taylor Swift I love her song Our Song and I have Teardrops On my Guitar on my ipod,shes like tote amazing!Great Chapter really I'm speachless at the awsomeness!winxgirl21 on May 11, 2008, 8:36:59 AM
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I know! She's like my favorite singer! I have her whole album on my ipod. =)muchas gracias, mi amiga! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this chapter.
eelchic on May 11, 2008, 9:20:13 PM
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De Nada,mi amiga!winxgirl21 on May 12, 2008, 7:41:36 AM
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=Dkogalover2013 on May 10, 2008, 5:00:45 PM
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awsome girlwinxgirl21 on May 11, 2008, 1:42:42 AM
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=]nextguardian on May 10, 2008, 3:17:31 PM
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Okay, I'm a guy. Should I, like, take a hint from this chapter as to what girls like? XD Sorry, sorry, I'll actually comment on the chapter, I had to slip that in, though! Really great job with the chapter! It came across as just what the fic needed at just the right time imho!winxgirl21 on May 11, 2008, 1:41:57 AM
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lol, not all girls. I'mb asically going on what I see my friends getting from their boyfriends. meaning that they all have received a heart necklace in some form. thanks! =)
GreyPichu on May 10, 2008, 2:00:57 PM
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hm it's kinda odd how all the girls got gifts for each other, and the guy just got gifts for their gfs. lol guys r so strange. XDwinxgirl21 on May 11, 2008, 1:37:37 AM
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actually, they're not done giving gifts yet. XD although I don't know exactly what the guys would get each toher...I'm going to ahve to consult wiht some friends on this, lol.zerotimberwolf on May 10, 2008, 11:04:11 AM
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The guys were just being smart in this one awesomewinxgirl21 on May 10, 2008, 12:03:29 PM
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lol, yes, they were. =) thanks!GreyPichu on May 7, 2008, 11:51:17 AM
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aww Garra is SO kewl! X]winxgirl21 on May 9, 2008, 9:17:30 AM
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hehe, yesh he is. XDkagome99 on May 7, 2008, 4:58:57 AM
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CAFFIENE!!!!I LUV CAFFIENE!!!
now that i read this i want to get some coffee!!!
XDDD
i need my caffiene!!!
cant wait fur next chappie!!!
winxgirl21 on May 7, 2008, 5:07:31 AM
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after i wrote this I went and got a french vanilla cappuchino. XD so good! lol.kagome99 on May 7, 2008, 6:02:08 AM
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Aw!LUCKYYYY!!!
the only caffiene i have right now is a bottle of mountain dew.
right now im writin the next chappie fur The Play.
i needed some caffiene to keep me goin.
winxgirl21 on May 7, 2008, 10:04:42 AM
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mm...I want mountain dew now. i had sprite earlier, but it's totally not the same...lol.I can't wait til it's up! =)
kagome99 on May 12, 2008, 4:54:17 AM
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me too. |:Dim almost done!!!
and guess what?
i just had a whole bunch off dark chocolate covered exspresso beans frum Universal Studios & Islands of Adventure Saturday in Orlando Florida!!!!
It was SOOO much fun!!!!
that was my first time there!!!
winxgirl21 on May 12, 2008, 7:45:27 AM
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mm..sounds yummy! I've never been to universal studios, but I've been to Disney World like 4 times, and Sea World once. I love it down there.kagome99 on May 13, 2008, 5:01:13 AM
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i loved it!but Disney is WAYYY better!!
lots more rides! :D
winxgirl21 on May 13, 2008, 6:49:26 AM
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yup, im in luv with disney. i especially <3 splash mountain. one time we got to the park and waited until it opened for 20 minutes, then my dad sister and i rode splash mountain 5 times in a row with no lines while my mom took my little sis to the bathroom. everyone else was still sleepin in ther hotel rooms. lol.nextguardian on May 6, 2008, 3:14:46 PM
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Poor Sakura, no schemes for her (in this ch anyway) Great job! Poor Sasuke, not a morning person? Looks like their's still a little fangirl in Sakura, to drag him out of bed like that!winxgirl21 on May 7, 2008, 5:06:41 AM
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lol, definately not a morning person. XD Of course just a little bit. =)
kogalover2013 on May 6, 2008, 11:22:33 AM
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omg so awsomewinxgirl21 on May 7, 2008, 5:04:01 AM
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=Derandor3 on May 5, 2008, 10:10:18 AM
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My parents don't let me have coffee,except one time,but for some reason cafeine calms me down but then later i get hyper X3 i drink cappicinos wen i can XDwinxgirl21 on May 5, 2008, 10:19:51 AM
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lol, I drink cappuchinos all the time. they're my addiction. XD I don't really get taht hyper off of them, though...erandor3 on May 9, 2008, 9:10:08 PM
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yep me neither :P.......CAFFIENE!XDwinxgirl21 on May 10, 2008, 5:04:48 AM
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yes! XDeelchic on May 4, 2008, 11:14:47 AM
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OMG loved this chapter very funny! dude I'm like Meghan and Sasuke in the morning but once i get some caffenine or maybe a sugary ceral in me in the moring i'm good to go!lol but it relly depends on the morning like some mornings I'll just be hyper,lol!great chapter very funny and ooo Mitsuki and Garra will make a very cutee couple!lolwinxgirl21 on May 5, 2008, 9:53:25 AM
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lol, ya, getting up early def. isn't my thing. XD I usually wake up after a cappuchino...I think they're going to make a cute couple, too. =)glad to see someone agree with that.
eelchic on May 5, 2008, 11:41:02 AM
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OMG I love Starbucks cappiuchino and thier frappichinos i like the mochas at the mall then a red bull at the movie lol!Very Adorable couple!lol little hyper
But question who will Meghan end up with Konkeru?lol(idk how to spell it) questions that ponder me lol but seriously is everyone gunna have someone exept her,OMG wait maybe DAN lol or will Dan end up with Temari?!!! sorry if I reuin ur plot...>_< but still...=)
winxgirl21 on May 6, 2008, 9:48:23 AM
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mm...I love most coffee type drinks. =)lol, honestly, I haven't gotten that far yet. XD they'll end up with someone...I think. hehe...
eelchic on May 6, 2008, 9:56:50 AM
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yeah dito just not black coffe ick :P Yeah ok just courious!but hopefully they will...lol
winxgirl21 on May 7, 2008, 10:06:22 AM
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I can't stand black coffee. With a capital CANT. lol. I haven't exactly thought much on the pairings, but I guess i should..
eelchic on May 7, 2008, 10:56:24 AM
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Dito when I take my Moms coffe and its black I'll spit it or gag and spit it out in the sink or just out and get in trouble lol Yeah Maybe...but its not relly THAT important lol
winxgirl21 on May 7, 2008, 11:04:29 AM
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lol, i don't even go near my mom's coffee. ya, that's true...
cloudaeris on May 4, 2008, 10:08:01 AM
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I feel just like Sasuke right about now.Lol Nice chapterwinxgirl21 on May 5, 2008, 9:51:44 AM
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lol, i feel like that a lot. XDAmmyK on May 2, 2008, 10:29:05 AM
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PLease! Ur story makes my day....ok that sounds rally creepy, but I mean that in a good way....well, it helps make my day....does that make sense, cuz if it doesn't, that just means im being me....just 4get i said any of the stuff before...-_-''' U have a great story, nd i hope many more series are to come, and if not, i have these printed ones (haHA!)winxgirl21 on May 3, 2008, 5:12:00 AM
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lol, I udnerstand where you're coming from. It always makes my day when my favorite stories are updated. I'm actually not done with the next chapter yet because i spent the night at a friend's house to work on a project alst night, adn we worked on it until a little while ago today...>.< I am trying to get it done, though. =)AmmyK on April 29, 2008, 10:25:49 AM
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well, its true! god! this will sound nerdy, but I've printed out ur story, and now my freinds want copies...-_-'''' (don'r worry, they no u wrote it)winxgirl21 on April 29, 2008, 10:44:08 AM
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lol, don't worry, you don't sound nerdy at all to me. I've actually printed out chapters of my favorite stories, too. lol. I can't beleive that so many people enjoy my story. XD thanks so much for making my day!AmmyK on April 28, 2008, 10:16:35 AM
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u should totally make a bunch of these little series, and put them into a book. i swear all naruto fans shall buy it.winxgirl21 on April 29, 2008, 8:46:09 AM
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lol, I'm flattered that you think so. =)kagome99 on April 28, 2008, 5:35:29 AM
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poor Sasuke... :Dhe didnt even have a chance... ^^
winxgirl21 on April 28, 2008, 8:35:31 AM
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haha, nope, none at all. =)kagome99 on April 28, 2008, 9:22:15 AM
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im just like that too...but last christmas eve i was told i couldnt wake them up till AT LEAST 6:30...
they are such party poopers...
:D
winxgirl21 on April 28, 2008, 10:04:29 AM
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lol, sorry, but I'd be with them. XD 7's actually the time I'll consider getting up because of being pestered...kagome99 on April 29, 2008, 5:02:11 AM
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i just usually cant wait til then...so they said that from now i can open my stocking and that's it...
it bums me out...
oh well...
:DDD
winxgirl21 on April 29, 2008, 8:45:20 AM
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haha, when I was little the rule was we could go into the family room, pull out the top thing from our stocking, and then turn on the t.v. and my mom always kenw if we took out more than that and then put it back...lol.kagome99 on April 30, 2008, 5:12:14 AM
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hehe...ur mom must have some eye to be able to notice that...
:D
winxgirl21 on May 3, 2008, 5:13:11 AM
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ya. she might've just memorized the order of mine...I'm the only one who's ever tried to peek...-.-'cloudaeris on April 27, 2008, 9:39:53 AM
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Haha.nice chapter I feel for sasuke cause i have an 18 year old cousin who wakes up at 4 on christmas and wakes me up.so yea i feel bad for him...anyway LOVe IT keep up the good work.winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 10:03:08 AM
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omg, i would so die. XD waking up that early is so not fun. lol.QuestionMarks109 on April 27, 2008, 4:57:22 AM
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Merreh X-mas ! Hm...I Wonder where them prezzies came frum eh ? Naruto doesnt have a clue whats HE's talking about.And that outfit was purtty!!!!
Is Lee in this Sequel yet ? :o
GFREAT CHAPTER!!!
winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 7:49:17 AM
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Santa clause! lol.ya, Naruto needs to think more...the doctor is always right! well, most of the time, anyways.
I'm not sure if Lee will show up...but i have a few otehr characters appearances planned...lol.
QuestionMarks109 on April 27, 2008, 4:52:04 AM
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Oh...Em...Geee. Itachi's comming. Why does Ino have to make such a Big entrance ? And I Can Feel Sasuke's Adrinaline pumping Up LOLThis is soooo Great! Sasuke and Sakura r cute 2gether
ONTO THE NEXT CHAPATAHAA!
winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 7:15:14 AM
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lol, yesh, he is. because, she's ino. she doesn't need another reason, lol. =D
QuestionMarks109 on April 27, 2008, 4:45:23 AM
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Lol, Mitsuki and Sugar isnt a right match 4 eachother !:D .
Poor Daniel . I Wish he would've seen that step.
Sasuke knows he wanted to watch them Soap Operas LOL.
ON TO THA NEXT CHAPTA
(Great CHappie btw)
winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 7:07:54 AM
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haha, ya, she gets just a bit crazy. ya, but I guess that's usually what happens when you walk backwards.
he's just trying to hide that fact from the world, but we're all on to Sasuke's obsession, lol.
=D
QuestionMarks109 on April 27, 2008, 4:39:00 AM
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Awww Family Vacation !Mitsuki Is Sooo Sneak
"Or check the 3rd floor for some problems" LOLL!!! Classic
Great Job !
ON TO THE NXT CHAPTAHHH!!!
winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 7:05:27 AM
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haha, yes, she is very sneaky. =3AmmyK on April 27, 2008, 12:08:34 AM
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THIS IS AWSESOME!!!!!!!! How did u even get this Konoha high school idea anyways??? Whatever, it seems like a big hit!winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 7:02:31 AM
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actually, I don't even remember where the idea came from, lol. =)nextguardian on April 26, 2008, 1:56:34 PM
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The DOCTOR doesn't have a clue? I think Naruto has that backwards...Christmas, such a magical thing! I'm still hyper Christmas morning. I have to be cheerful early, I've got family to deal with the rest of the day, lol!
Anyway, great chapter!
winxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 6:59:57 AM
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lol, ya he does have it backwards. XDYa, i know where you're going with that. lol.
GreyPichu on April 27, 2008, 5:11:02 AM
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Poor sleepy Sasuke was woken up really early. i probably wake up at 8 or 9 o' clock on Christmas. =]GreyPichu on April 27, 2008, 5:12:28 AM
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OMG AND I BET SANTA CLAUSE CAME!!! XDwinxgirl21 on April 27, 2008, 7:50:03 AM
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lol, ya, I know, i'm definaltey not up at 5:30. XD and yesh, Santa visited!kogalover2013 on April 26, 2008, 9:46:37 AM
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awsome but its not lame kwinxgirl21 on April 26, 2008, 10:05:37 AM
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ok. lol.zerotimberwolf on April 26, 2008, 6:16:41 AM
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By the time I wake up on Christmas the rest of my family has already been waiting an hour or two on me lol good chapterwinxgirl21 on April 26, 2008, 10:04:51 AM
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haha, ya, I know how that is. XD my sister normally gets me up if we make her wait too long.Kohakucrazy on April 26, 2008, 3:44:13 AM
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Well....Someone's peppy christmas morning...winxgirl21 on April 26, 2008, 4:03:20 AM
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isn't everyone? lol, although not at that hour... maybe a littl later.eelchic on April 26, 2008, 3:14:00 AM
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Yeah Christmas morning!!! Merry Christmas!!! lol Why is it always the younger kids that wake u up at like 3 in the morning? my youngest brother does that!I just yell bite me and throw something,then 10 minutes later he gets me up again and then I get up!!!lol great chapter!!!tote awsome!!winxgirl21 on April 26, 2008, 3:23:20 AM
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thanks! And i know. The younger kids think that 3 am means wake everybody up time. lol.Kohakucrazy on April 23, 2008, 12:22:24 PM
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Do update soon...winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 5:31:44 AM
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I'm hoping to update Saturday.AmmyK on April 23, 2008, 10:33:04 AM
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this series is amazing.winxgirl21 on April 24, 2008, 5:30:48 AM
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thanks so much! =)erandor3 on April 22, 2008, 6:25:32 AM
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YOU MUST UPDATE!winxgirl21 on April 22, 2008, 7:29:07 AM
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I'm going to try to update saturday. =)erandor3 on April 25, 2008, 9:03:40 PM
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YAY! XDkogalover2013 on April 21, 2008, 2:09:41 PM
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omg u are sooooooooooo lucky omg awsome storywinxgirl21 on April 22, 2008, 7:25:29 AM
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thanks! =)kogalover2013 on April 22, 2008, 10:13:42 AM
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welcomeeelchic on April 21, 2008, 8:32:42 AM
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OMG I'm so happy for you being the Spring Queen!!! its sorta like Mean Girls but ur not mean sorry I've watched that movie like 5 times this weekend,lol!!! great chapter! Decorating the Tree is 1 of my fave things at Christmas I do it with my Daddy no one else likes 2 help lol!Well great chappie!& bet u made an Awsome Queen!^-^ =)winxgirl21 on April 21, 2008, 10:34:18 AM
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thanks so much! =) lol. it was such a great shock for me. all my friends went all, we told you so on me, though. XD I actually was up against two popular girls, and I'm not all that popular.kagome99 on April 21, 2008, 6:14:10 AM
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kool chappie...All i can do is wonder at wat Itachi's doing...
I always do wit stuff like that...
then it ends up being something i didnt even think about...
:DDD
cant wait!!!
Oh!!!
and CONGRATZ!!!!
winxgirl21 on April 21, 2008, 6:34:32 AM
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thanks so much! haha, you'll see what he's doing soon! =)
kagome99 on February 11, 2008, 3:54:38 AM
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awesome chappie!hope you feel better!!
im pretty sick myself.
P.S.I hate Leanne and love James.
^^ this is just how im feeling about these friends of mine who are goin out.
I I
kagome99 on April 21, 2008, 6:16:05 AM
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ugh...i cant believe i even said that...
makes me wanna throw up!!!
james is such a prick!!!
winxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 6:33:46 AM
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Thanks! ^-^ I hope you feel better, too.nextguardian on April 20, 2008, 12:30:02 PM
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Itachi's coming...I'd be worried. Whenver Itachi shows up, bad things happen...Great chapter!
winxgirl21 on April 21, 2008, 6:00:44 AM
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haha, not necessarily bad for us, just bad for Sasuke. XDnextguardian on April 22, 2008, 6:50:58 PM
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True...entertaining either way, though! Although, Sakura doesn't seem to get along too well with Sasuke's older bor, lol.winxgirl21 on April 23, 2008, 8:58:15 AM
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lol, true. =)cloudaeris on April 20, 2008, 12:27:11 PM
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Nice!Love it!I wish I could be like Sakura all cuddled up to Sasuke....lol.Good Chapter!Can't Wait!And CONGRATS!winxgirl21 on April 21, 2008, 5:58:48 AM
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Thanks so much! =)zerotimberwolf on April 20, 2008, 10:15:17 AM
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Haha cant wait for morewinxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:52:47 AM
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I'm hoping that I'll update next Saturday. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 1:32:59 PM
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....wow Mitsuki needs to stay off the sugar for a while.winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:51:49 AM
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haha, ya, she does. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 1:25:40 PM
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cool.winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:51:06 AM
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=)Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 1:19:37 PM
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ino can give me the creeps at times.winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:50:45 AM
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I think she can do that to everyone, lol.Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 1:14:16 PM
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yay naruto is ok^^winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:50:10 AM
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yupz. =DSymphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 1:08:54 PM
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...........*tension*winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:48:26 AM
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lol. =)Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 1:03:40 PM
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Hope naruto is alright.winxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:21:18 AM
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=)Symphoniaprincess101 on April 19, 2008, 12:58:41 PM
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YOU SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME WITH THAT ENDING!!!!!!O_O I hope they're ok o_owinxgirl21 on April 20, 2008, 10:19:18 AM
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lol, scaring people can be fun...kagome99 on April 15, 2008, 4:46:02 AM
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lolz...i luv sugar...
the bestest thing in the world...
except maybe fur Monsters...
u kno the energy drink...
THEY are the bestest...
srry bout the rain...
that happened to me once but we were at school and my mom furgot about me...
sad aint it? that parents can be so furgetful wit that but not bout our report cards... :(
and it just so happens that right now i have an F...it sux... :/
winxgirl21 on April 15, 2008, 6:31:28 AM
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Yes, I <3 sugar. I don't really like energy drinks so much...I prefer cappuchino. french vanilla...mmmm...I'm so addicted to wawa's that it isn't even funny. XDYa, I know...o, wow, what class is it in? My mom normally doesn't mind my report card...I have to keep my gpa over 4.0, though....but at my school, it's not hard, because honors classes are 5's if you get an A.
Hopefully you'll be able to bring your grade up! =)
kagome99 on April 16, 2008, 10:33:40 AM
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i LOVE cappucinos!!!!i just had one this morning! XD
i got in Ag.
I hate that class.
it's only becuz i missed her class 4 days cuz of field trips....
ugh...it's usually the same with me too.
i have, wait, HAD 4.0.
i just want to strangle that women!!!!
well cant wait fur next chapp!!!
:DDD
~~K99
winxgirl21 on April 19, 2008, 11:46:49 PM
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Ah, I hate it when that happens! I've missed class days for field trips before, but my mom was always on me about going and talking to the teacher to get my work..>.< if it was up to me, I wouldn't take the tests and stuff til weeks later... But hopefully your grade will come up soon!kagome99 on April 21, 2008, 6:20:27 AM
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Yeaa...me too...
but when i asked for all the work she was like,'It's due at the end of the period. and there's a test tomorrow...it's not my fault you band kids miss so much school...'
i just want to hit her across the head wit the shovel we were using in class today...
~~K99
P.S.
I'll update as soon as I can... :D
winxgirl21 on April 21, 2008, 6:36:48 AM
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haah, my only advice is...don't get caught! XDOk! I'll be looking for it. =)
kagome99 on April 15, 2008, 4:37:06 AM
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HECK YESS!!!Gaara is in it!!!
and my OC!!!
thanx!!! ^^
cant wait for more... :D
winxgirl21 on April 15, 2008, 6:27:22 AM
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haha, I'm glad that you like that so far. =)eelchic on April 13, 2008, 1:12:53 AM
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Lol sugar is not something my friends like me to have or Red Bull but I tote luv both I'm like bouncing of the walls and giggling for no reason although sometimes they let me have 2 Red Bulls for fun it always is,lol!^^ Great Chapter! I tote love decorating the tree,its so much fun!winxgirl21 on April 13, 2008, 1:37:41 AM
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lol, same here! My friends don't like me having sugar. Well, some of them. Other friends and I get icing and cookies and so much we bounce off the walls and peopel get afraid...lol. =Deelchic on April 13, 2008, 1:46:45 AM
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Yeah icing and cookies together are awsome specially when you have like a relly sugary soda or a Red Bull i experianced the power of two Red bulls and lots of cookies last night at my friends we were soooo hyper,her Mom was laughing cuz we would laugh for no apperent reason,lol,I'm still a little maybe alot hyper,lol!^^winxgirl21 on April 13, 2008, 8:08:00 AM
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lol, I know how that is. I can get so hyper at times, that I'll laugh for ten minutes straight at nothing, then when i stop, someone will say something about it, and I'll laugh again. i can't stop even if I try. It's fun! =)eelchic on April 13, 2008, 9:21:29 AM
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I know peolpe ask me what I'm high on I just say sunshine and if its raining they'll say its raining then I'll just start burst out laughing thw words that always make me laugh are banana syrup fudge and eggs! its so fun ! Lunch is when i'm at my hyperness est its so much fun I'll yell in peoples ears saying I love red bull and start laughing most day i bet u do!lolwinxgirl21 on April 15, 2008, 6:34:01 AM
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lol, I guess my history class is when I'm most hyperest, lol. My crazy friend and I have lots of fun...hehe. Even though we have rotating schedules, I'mn always awake in that class...lol. then on the bus I'm bouncing off the walls. people think I'm crazuz at school, I'm really shy and quiet, and then they give me sugar, and woohoo! I'm off the walls. XDnextguardian on April 12, 2008, 12:51:46 PM
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Great chapter. lol, sugar is dangerous in the wrong hands!winxgirl21 on April 12, 2008, 12:53:04 PM
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lol, extremely dangerous! =)puppydog2 on April 12, 2008, 12:14:24 PM
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awesome chapter cant wait till next 1winxgirl21 on April 12, 2008, 12:36:26 PM
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thanks! =)cloudaeris on April 12, 2008, 9:28:38 AM
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Great Chapter.Can't wait, as always.I'm sorry about what happened to you.That sounds like something that would happen to me.Ok well can't wait.winxgirl21 on April 12, 2008, 10:08:22 AM
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ya, it wasn't fun...and now my dad's trying to make up for it...lol. Thanks for the comment! =)kogalover2013 on April 12, 2008, 8:26:52 AM
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awsome i cant wait till nex chappiewinxgirl21 on April 12, 2008, 9:55:23 AM
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=Derandor3 on April 10, 2008, 8:09:48 PM
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OMG U PUT TEMARI,KANKURO AND SUBAKU NO GARRA IN THE STORY........................AWESOME!winxgirl21 on April 11, 2008, 8:28:31 AM
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ya, I just had to add them in. =Dpuppydog2 on April 9, 2008, 12:43:52 PM
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sweetness!winxgirl21 on April 11, 2008, 8:27:51 AM
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thankies. =)rffraff05 on April 7, 2008, 12:46:14 PM
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amazigness!!!! and i spelt that wrong!!! yay!!!winxgirl21 on April 9, 2008, 9:12:33 AM
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lol, yay for spelling things wrong! XDcloudaeris on April 6, 2008, 3:20:40 AM
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Wow.It was a shocker that Garra and them are here.Good Chapter I would type more but I gotta go.I have a busy week ahead so if I don't like comment next week if you update then thats why.Ok.Good Chapter.winxgirl21 on April 6, 2008, 9:31:52 AM
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I completely understand that. =)kogalover2013 on April 5, 2008, 7:09:35 PM
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good but da family vac w/ garaa unsuspectedwinxgirl21 on April 6, 2008, 9:31:08 AM
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I <3 the unsuspected! =Dkogalover2013 on April 6, 2008, 11:10:33 AM
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lolnextguardian on April 5, 2008, 3:02:44 PM
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lol, those two at the front desk are great chars! And the thought of Gaara...on a vacation with his family...lol, that has some great potential!winxgirl21 on April 6, 2008, 9:29:40 AM
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lol, ya it does...XDzerotimberwolf on April 5, 2008, 11:13:04 AM
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Sweet, Gaara has entered the building!winxgirl21 on April 5, 2008, 12:03:19 PM
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yes he has! =)eelchic on April 5, 2008, 10:38:43 AM
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Great Chapter!Awsome the sand clan is here!,lol
I know aht you mean we've had projects left & right! & the greatest thing is next is the 4th 9 weeks thats when they relly like to lay it down! I so love school!*sarcasim*,lol
I want summer to be here!,lol
Great chapter,can't wait to see the suprise!
winxgirl21 on April 5, 2008, 12:01:42 PM
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lol, i know!My geometry isn't too hard, actually, but it's four pages so far, and i'm not halfway done...and my teacher expected short papers...^.^' I'm not sure if she'll even accept it. It's some crazy story that I spun about a geometry world and such. lol.
eelchic on April 5, 2008, 12:12:40 PM
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whats geometry world?lol yeah I'm like that my stories I somehow add 10 pages to the #pages she gives us for the project! I guess its just a writter trait,lol! good luck with your Geometry World/story/paper thing,lol!winxgirl21 on April 5, 2008, 12:29:48 PM
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haha, I'm not even sure what geoemetry worlds is, except that geometry isn't just a bunch of stuff they have to learn there, it's their way of life. It helps them do everything they have to do. XD and the book that tells them how to do it has been stolen, so i have to save it by using my geometry knowledge. XD I'm crazy, what can i say?eelchic on April 5, 2008, 12:53:27 PM
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that sounds funny! I don't think your totally crazy,but I 'm a little crazy myself!lol @.@Are you going to put it on FAC when you finnish it?just wondering...lol :)
winxgirl21 on April 5, 2008, 1:10:02 PM
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I'm not sure. it's not exactly what i'd call well written...lol.QuestionMarks109 on April 5, 2008, 8:55:34 AM
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The Wrath....OF INO!*Faints*
xDDD
winxgirl21 on April 5, 2008, 8:59:07 AM
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haha, yes! it's scary!zerotimberwolf on April 3, 2008, 8:12:14 AM
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haha "the wrath of Ino" thats too funnywinxgirl21 on April 3, 2008, 10:47:01 AM
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Ino can be scary...lol. =)zerotimberwolf on April 5, 2008, 6:52:24 AM
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and Shikamaru would know lolwinxgirl21 on April 5, 2008, 7:56:21 AM
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lol, I feel bad for him...rffraff05 on April 2, 2008, 9:47:16 AM
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... wow, i can't believe i didn't notice that... im a dorkwinxgirl21 on April 2, 2008, 10:04:57 AM
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haha, it wasn't supposed to be an obvious thing. =)Kohakucrazy on April 2, 2008, 6:54:11 AM
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UPDATE!!! AWSEOMENESS!!!winxgirl21 on April 2, 2008, 7:08:33 AM
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thanks! =) I'm going to try to update on friday, it depends on if I stay home from school or not...lol.rffraff05 on March 31, 2008, 11:41:39 AM
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to ino "BEGONE DEMON!" lol great chapter... *feels guilty about asking* can i be in it?winxgirl21 on April 2, 2008, 7:07:38 AM
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haha, sure, just give me info on my profile. i needed one more person to have enough. =) you'll probably work the ski lifts, is that all right with you?rffraff05 on April 2, 2008, 8:40:49 AM
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YAYNESS!winxgirl21 on April 2, 2008, 8:43:12 AM
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=D lol.kagome99 on March 31, 2008, 5:12:06 AM
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I love it...ONCE AGAIN!!!!its awesome!!!
cant wait for next chappie... :]
winxgirl21 on March 31, 2008, 9:29:12 AM
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I'm glad that you love it. =)nextguardian on March 29, 2008, 1:55:25 PM
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Good stuff! Once again, Ino steals the spotlight! lol, if she can settle Naruto down, she has got to be one scary girl!winxgirl21 on March 30, 2008, 8:29:58 AM
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haha, Ino and Sakura are the only two who can do that by wrath. XDcloudaeris on March 29, 2008, 9:18:30 AM
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Wow the wrath of Ino...scary.That chapter made me want Ramen.LOL.Cool Chapter I'm excited to see if naruto listens and rests.I doubt it.winxgirl21 on March 30, 2008, 8:24:48 AM
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haha, I don't think he'll listen. he's too stubborn. XDkogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 7:48:49 AM
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awsome cant wait to hear da drama lol awsome as expectedwinxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 8:59:19 AM
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haha, the drama is coming! =)kogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 9:46:20 AM
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i can tellpuppydog2 on March 29, 2008, 8:09:57 AM
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sweet... i have a feeling drama is gonna startwinxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 8:58:24 AM
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haha, that feeling is right! =)GreyPichu on March 29, 2008, 2:02:23 AM
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i like the names Meghan and Mitsuki, they're really pretty names. and good chapter! :]winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 3:51:14 AM
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thanks! The Meghan character is actually based off of me. (my name's Meghan. XD) but she's probably not going to act much like me. And Mitsuki is my friend's OC. Thanks so much for commenting! =D
erandor3 on March 29, 2008, 12:49:22 AM
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OH NOES THE WRATH OF INO!*hides behind naruto who is behind shikamaru*winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 3:49:48 AM
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haha, yes, hide! She's coming! thanks so much for commenting! =)
erandor3 on April 4, 2008, 10:56:20 PM
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no problem ^^ *is still afraid of the wrath of ino* o-owinxgirl21 on April 4, 2008, 11:04:54 PM
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lol, everyone should be...can you imagine what she'd do...? she and Sakura together are an even scarier thought. o.oerandor3 on July 7, 2008, 12:17:00 AM
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DUN DUN DUN! EVIL SAKURA AND INO! FEAR THEIR WRATH!uh oh i think they heard that*gets chased by ino and sakura*AHHHHHHHHHH AH AH HA HA HELP! OW LET GO OF MY HAIR THATS HOW I GET ATTENTION DX *is chained to a wall in a dungeon*help they gonna torture me!
erandor3 on July 7, 2008, 12:22:29 AM
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NO STOP IT AHHHHHH!!!! o////o why are u taking my shirt off! AHHHH NOOOO NOT THAT KIND OF TORTURE! IM TOO YOUNG! AHHHHHHHHHH!eelchic on March 29, 2008, 12:41:50 AM
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No one wants to face the wrath of! *shudders* Awsonme they have Ramen!That would be my food choice for a while,lol!!
Great Chapter!! I loved It!!^-^ XD
winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 3:48:03 AM
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haha, I know, Ino can be scary. MM, ramen is amazing!
thanks so much for commenting! =)
eelchic on March 29, 2008, 4:09:46 AM
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mmhm it is spectacular! no problamo!
winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 9:01:39 AM
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=)zerotimberwolf on March 24, 2008, 5:41:17 AM
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Ops I missed the update but glad I found it. Yeah theres no way they are going to keep naruto away from his snowboard lolwinxgirl21 on March 24, 2008, 6:40:21 AM
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lol, ya, i know, but they can try. =)nextguardian on March 23, 2008, 12:20:58 PM
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Great stuff! Shikamaru and Sasuke were great in this ch!winxgirl21 on March 24, 2008, 3:39:52 AM
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thanks! =)cloudaeris on March 23, 2008, 11:58:15 AM
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Well at least it's not his leg.But then again he will probably end up getting hurt worse before its over with.LOL.I thought that the was sasuke acted was so cool, but then again he always is.-_^Good Chapter.Totaly pumped for the next one.winxgirl21 on March 23, 2008, 12:14:00 PM
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Thanks! =) I'm glad you think the way Sasuke acted was cool, I always worry about making him seem OOC. He and Neji are hard to write, along with Hinata.cloudaeris on March 24, 2008, 10:25:09 AM
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I think u do them all perfectly.Most people have a hard time with them.Don't ever doubt that you can't do them well..cause you can.And I just wanna say thanks for making Sasuke so cool.HE ROCKS!Keep up the good work!winxgirl21 on March 24, 2008, 10:50:05 AM
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thanks so much! *hugs you*AlleyCat17 on March 23, 2008, 4:05:19 AM
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great chapter and naruto is so damn stubborn and at least he is going to be fine oh and this chapter was sweet anyway can't wait for more chapters.winxgirl21 on March 23, 2008, 9:23:58 AM
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thanks! Ya, I figured that he'd be more stubborn if he could stand and attempt to make his way to the ski lift. lol. =)kogalover2013 on March 22, 2008, 3:07:08 PM
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awsome dude cant wait to see wat happensÂ
winxgirl21 on March 23, 2008, 9:22:31 AM
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thanks! I'm hoping to start working on the next chapter soon. =)kogalover2013 on March 23, 2008, 9:47:22 AM
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coopuppydog2 on March 22, 2008, 11:53:34 AM
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awsome!winxgirl21 on March 23, 2008, 9:20:04 AM
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thanks! =)eelchic on March 22, 2008, 10:51:57 AM
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Awsome chapter! XD Naruto is stubborn but I think with some perswasiveness from Hinata should keep him in line,lol!! ^-^
Kool they made the team!
Again great Chapter!!! =)
winxgirl21 on March 23, 2008, 9:18:05 AM
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hopefully he'll listen to Hinata. =) We'll just have to see, lol.Kohakucrazy on March 19, 2008, 11:38:43 AM
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good chapter.... Continue!!!Mikura
winxgirl21 on March 19, 2008, 10:50:10 PM
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thanks! =)cloudaeris on March 19, 2008, 6:32:02 AM
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Itachi was like the total typical older brother.^^That was a really good chapter because of that, I thought.I hope Naruto heals fast cause he is the comic relief.LoLz!Great chapter can't wait.(sorry 4 the late comment I always try 2 comment when u post them but like most other ppl I'm super busy.)winxgirl21 on March 19, 2008, 6:59:48 AM
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I totally understand. =)And thanks so much! Hopefully he will heal fast.
nextguardian on March 18, 2008, 2:01:38 PM
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lol, the Itachi thing is great! Can't wait to see where that whole thing goes!winxgirl21 on March 19, 2008, 5:36:56 AM
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thanks! =) I'm not exactly sure where it's going myself. hehe. ^.^'nextguardian on March 20, 2008, 3:47:51 PM
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I do that all the time. Somehow, it turns out better if you just let it happen, lol.winxgirl21 on March 21, 2008, 12:55:38 AM
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ya, i know. except when you get writer's block....><GreyPichu on March 16, 2008, 9:54:27 PM
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i feel bad for Sakura and Sasuke, meanie Itachi. -___- good chapter though. ^___^winxgirl21 on March 17, 2008, 5:29:55 AM
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yes, but torturing your siblings can be fun. *evil grin* Thanks! =)
kogalover2013 on March 16, 2008, 4:35:17 AM
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lol i luv da part in da car lol he-lar-i-ous p.s. thanx 4 da comment but the check was getting on my nerves so i turnd it off dats why theres so many mistakes k lolwinxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 5:02:52 AM
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I had fun wiritng that part. =)And no problem. But if it gets on you nerves, maybe turn it on again at the end? i know it gets stuff wrong sometimes (I have to ignore a lot of thigns with spellcheck to get the story the way i want to) but it also catches the little things, too. But you're story is really good.
kogalover2013 on March 16, 2008, 5:28:45 AM
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thanxs but mine is no match 2 yourswinxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 9:34:43 AM
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lol, with a little work, it very well could be. the more you write, the better at it you get. =) that's what happened to me.kogalover2013 on March 16, 2008, 10:44:46 AM
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its hard imm not sure how to continue the storywinxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 10:51:15 AM
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writer's block? you just have to think of different ways you could, maybe type up a few of them, and see which one you think sounds best when put to paper. It's what I.kogalover2013 on March 16, 2008, 11:12:47 AM
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i know what i want 2 do but i dont know how to do it in a way where its still intresetingwinxgirl21 on March 17, 2008, 5:28:58 AM
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hmm..I don't know. may be give it some attempts, and choose the best one?kogalover2013 on March 17, 2008, 9:43:29 AM
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ya ill tryzerotimberwolf on March 16, 2008, 12:10:21 AM
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That was awesome i cant wait for the next updatewinxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 12:24:50 AM
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Thanks! =) I have no clue when i'm going to update again, but I'm going to try to start the next chapter today.puppydog2 on March 15, 2008, 11:16:57 PM
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wow!winxgirl21 on March 16, 2008, 12:22:11 AM
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=)erandor3 on March 15, 2008, 11:02:50 PM
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OMG FINALLY A NEW CHAPTER YAY!I WAITED SO LONG!winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 11:16:16 PM
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=) sorry about the wait.eelchic on March 15, 2008, 10:59:47 PM
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Lol funny funny funny brother banter!! I hear alot of that have two brothers and of course I participate,hehe... Great Chappe!!! Loved it!!
Of course itachi would want to take place in a shocking suprise! Can't wait for it!! ^^
Awsome Chapter Again!!
winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 11:15:47 PM
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lol, I get sister banter over here, and i participate in that as well...hehe.Thanks so much! =)
Of course he would be. Anything for his little brother. lol.
kagome99 on March 12, 2008, 4:45:01 AM
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AWWWWW!!POOR NARUTO!!! I really thought something serious had happened.But at least he's o.k.
winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:29:54 AM
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ya, i thought haivng him in a full body cast would be too awful. lol. Thanks so much for reviewing!nextguardian on March 11, 2008, 2:57:25 PM
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lol, Itachi. Throughout your series, you've made Itachi absolutely hilarious! I can't wait to see how he torments Sasuke!winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:23:28 AM
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I love having him torment him. =) It's how I am with my little sisters, although they don't always appreciate it...lol.puppydog2 on March 9, 2008, 12:15:11 AM
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great as alwayswinxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:18:06 AM
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thanks! =)kogalover2013 on March 8, 2008, 11:39:49 AM
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omg so exciting poor naruto lolwinxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:16:44 AM
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ya, i know, but at least he's ok.kogalover2013 on March 12, 2008, 8:32:35 AM
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yeperandor3 on March 8, 2008, 11:38:26 AM
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OMFG NARUTO IF A FREAKIN HERO!i cant wait till next chapter
winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:14:48 AM
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yes, he is! =)GreyPichu on March 8, 2008, 11:08:23 AM
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whoa, Naruto doesn't sound like hes gonna be alright, but i guess he will be. well i cant wait for the next update, that was an awesome chapter! ^___^winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 7:14:17 AM
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He'll be better than some thigns that could've happened, lol.=)eelchic on March 8, 2008, 10:29:12 AM
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I'm just glad its not tooo serious,but I've had many trips to the ER with broken bones,very painful trips I must say! >-< Great Chappe!!! Loved how Itachi bugged Sakura about being sasukes gf,also loved how Hinata was relly relly worried & Neji pointed out that he did need to go to the ER with a poke!!lol great chapter again!!!^^
winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 6:11:03 AM
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Thanks! =) Haha, ya, Sakura and Sasuke are in for a lovely car ride. But ya, Naruto just has a few broken bones.kagome99 on March 7, 2008, 12:21:56 PM
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I Luved It!Srry I haven't been on lately.I keep forgetting to look on here.
This is an awesome story.
GO NARUTO!!!He's the hero!!
kagome99 on March 8, 2008, 11:26:43 AM
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OF COURSE!!!The cape makes a regilar hero, a superhero!!!
winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 9:09:17 AM
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yes! Super Naruto! lol.winxgirl21 on March 8, 2008, 6:46:43 AM
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It's ok. I totally understand that. =) Yes, naruto is now a hero! He needs a superhero cape!cloudaeris on March 8, 2008, 9:46:28 AM
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OMG Im sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter I've been busy. But anyway WOW leave it to Naruto to get hurt.Poor Sasuke and Sakura.winxgirl21 on March 8, 2008, 9:50:21 AM
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I understand being busy. =)Ya, i know. Theyr'e in for it with Itachi. lol.Kohakucrazy on March 8, 2008, 9:38:33 AM
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OMG!!! At least Naruto's ok!!!! O___O Give me a heart attack why dontcha!!!Mikuro
winxgirl21 on March 8, 2008, 9:49:04 AM
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hehe, that's what i do! =) But yes, he is ok. Cept for his arm and leg.zerotimberwolf on March 11, 2008, 9:05:50 AM
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yikes I thought it was just his leg but his ARM too!winxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 9:08:04 AM
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yup. He's a mess. lol.zerotimberwolf on March 12, 2008, 10:44:56 AM
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I'll say lmaowinxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 10:52:30 AM
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=)zerotimberwolf on March 8, 2008, 6:42:45 AM
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Naruto probably broke something when he did that but thankfully thats it judging from the size of that tree...haha Itachi is gonna bug the crap out of his brother.winxgirl21 on March 8, 2008, 6:48:25 AM
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Ya he is lucky. And yea, that's itachi's favorite thing to do! =)zerotimberwolf on March 9, 2008, 1:41:54 AM
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haha then this should be interestingwinxgirl21 on March 12, 2008, 9:08:42 AM
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yes, it should be. =)QuestionMarks109 on March 6, 2008, 7:27:40 AM
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Geezus Her Family is Organized. Awesome Chapter. At Least Naruto is doing good...SO FAR!
ON TO THE NEXT CHAPATAH!!!!
winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 7:41:47 AM
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haha, ya, they are organized. So far, yes. =)nextguardian on March 5, 2008, 1:53:03 PM
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That's just Naruto's luck. Something like that HAD to happen. Still, it shows his heart's in the right place. Great chapter!winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 6:44:12 AM
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ya, it is Naruto's luck. But surprisingly it wasn't him who caused the accident. lol.nextguardian on March 5, 2008, 1:48:50 PM
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This sounds like one side of my family. That's why I make darn sure I eat BEFORE we go to the party. You can't drop your silverware if you don't touch it, lolwinxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 6:43:29 AM
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exactly! lol.nextguardian on March 5, 2008, 1:38:41 PM
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lol, Hinata's Grandfather sounds cool! I can see that happening to some poor kid in real life!winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 6:43:01 AM
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haha, I can see some kid being terror stricken. XDnextguardian on March 5, 2008, 1:35:32 PM
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lol, I've got to try Ino's method of getting people to tell me what they got me!winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 6:41:16 AM
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It can really work. I've done it many a times. And my one friend is still none the wiser. =) lol.nextguardian on March 5, 2008, 1:33:19 PM
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I like how Tenten handled the situation. lol, I did stuff like that all the time to get what I wanted.winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 6:39:56 AM
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I normally give the puppy dog pout, or write out some kind of proposal. then i have my backup arguments ready. haha, my mom told me i should consider being a lawyer, but i don't really want to do that kind of thing...nextguardian on March 5, 2008, 12:45:21 PM
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Awesome start, as always! I hate to repeat myself, but I can only say "awesome" so many ways, lol. I like how Sakura covered for Shikamaru, lol, that's orib my fave part.winxgirl21 on March 6, 2008, 6:35:31 AM
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Thanks! lol. ya, i know what you mean.Kohakucrazy on March 4, 2008, 11:04:52 AM
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HURRY UP!!!! I CAN'T WAIT IN SUSPENCE ANY LONGER!!!! Mikura
winxgirl21 on March 5, 2008, 5:44:50 AM
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I'm already half way through the next chapter. =)kogalover2013 on March 2, 2008, 5:50:32 AM
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omgomgomgomgomgomg its so exciting i think u did goodwinxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 8:17:26 AM
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I'm glad that you think so! =)kogalover2013 on March 2, 2008, 5:50:31 AM
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omgomgomgomgomgomg its so exciting i think u did gooderandor3 on March 1, 2008, 8:11:27 PM
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OMG U DEFINTELY NEED TO CONTINUE THIS!O_O NARUTO IS PROBABLY GOING TO BE THANKED FOR HIS GOOD DEEDwinxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 4:25:17 AM
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I'm hoping to update again friday if I get the typing time i'm hoping for,and if i get enough comments. =) I left it at a cliffie because i haven't been getting a lot of comments lately.erandor3 on March 3, 2008, 7:05:11 AM
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oh good idea and i cant wait until the next chapter ^^winxgirl21 on March 4, 2008, 5:23:58 AM
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ya, hopefulyl people will leave a few more comments. lol. =)GreyPichu on March 1, 2008, 11:30:51 AM
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whoa that was so good, i cant wait til its updated!^_^winxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 4:22:59 AM
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I'm hoping to update next friday if I get the typing time I'm planning on having. =)zerotimberwolf on March 1, 2008, 11:03:40 AM
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I love it! Naruto's a HERO! I know everyone else will feel the same. =Dwinxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 4:21:59 AM
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hopefully they will. =)puppydog2 on March 1, 2008, 10:29:03 AM
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MORE MORE MORE!!!winxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 4:21:35 AM
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lol. =) soon! I actually started the next chapter all ready!puppydog2 on March 3, 2008, 7:40:30 AM
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one word for that sweeeeeeeeeeeeeetwinxgirl21 on March 4, 2008, 5:26:24 AM
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ya, I'm hoping that I'll be able to finish it a little bit early. I was goign to work on the chapter tonight, but i have 3 tests tomorrow that I need to study for.puppydog2 on March 5, 2008, 6:22:54 AM
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bummereelchic on March 1, 2008, 10:27:58 AM
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omgomgomg im like scared,Naruto is like tote a HERO they have to respect him now!!!^^ Great chappe luv it!!!Im a little nervous though!!hehe
poor kid!!:( yeah naruto hero!!great chappe!!!
winxgirl21 on March 2, 2008, 4:20:10 AM
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Yes, he is a hero....maybe. lol. Who knows what's going to happen? i feel kinda bad leaving it at a cliffie, but I'm trying to get more people to comment it.eelchic on February 29, 2008, 7:20:19 AM
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Very very nerve wracking chappe I thought Naruto would do worse but the night is still young...which just makes me worry o.O Great great great chapter can't wait for next one!!!! XD
Glad Hinata's Father decided not to kill Naruto!:)
winxgirl21 on February 29, 2008, 9:06:48 AM
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lol. yes, the night is still young. But mayhaps Naruto's caution will rise. then again...lol.erandor3 on February 25, 2008, 7:51:13 PM
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uh oh naruto already messed up O.O........u need to make mor chappies i need to know what happens next!winxgirl21 on February 27, 2008, 4:53:13 AM
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I'm going to try to update soon. ^-^erandor3 on February 25, 2008, 7:44:42 PM
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hopefully naruto can make it through the nightwinxgirl21 on February 27, 2008, 4:52:29 AM
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haha, hopefully is the key word.erandor3 on February 25, 2008, 7:29:22 PM
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wow this is gonna be just as good as your other konoha high stories^^winxgirl21 on February 27, 2008, 4:51:53 AM
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thanks! ^-^puppydog2 on February 25, 2008, 8:54:40 AM
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wow great chapter and as for naruto it sucks for himwinxgirl21 on February 27, 2008, 4:51:09 AM
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yes, it does.kogalover2013 on February 24, 2008, 11:49:38 AM
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omg girl this book is off the chainÂ
winxgirl21 on February 25, 2008, 8:23:43 AM
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I'm glad that you think so. =)cloudaeris on February 24, 2008, 10:01:52 AM
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poor dudewinxgirl21 on February 25, 2008, 8:18:17 AM
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ya, i know...AlleyCat17 on February 24, 2008, 9:25:46 AM
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ahhh poor naruto he's so going to mess up.and i hope her family don't hate him anyway i hope you update soon this timewinxgirl21 on February 25, 2008, 8:17:52 AM
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I'm hoping to be able to update soon. it all depends on my schoolwork. i'm hopeing not to have much this weekend, so hopefulyl I'll get the chapter finished by Friday night. =)I'd be more worried about her family's reaction to him..lol.
zerotimberwolf on February 24, 2008, 9:11:08 AM
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Oh god I feel so sorry for Hinata and Naruto. I just hope he doesn't screw up TOO bad. 0_0;winxgirl21 on February 25, 2008, 8:16:06 AM
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it's more being worried about Hinata's family...lol. =) He shouldn't screw up, too badly...GreyPichu on February 24, 2008, 9:00:14 AM
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oh noez, he's already messing up! I'm scared to read the next chapter when u update, he's probably gonna mess up a lot.^_^winxgirl21 on February 25, 2008, 8:14:44 AM
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he shouldn't do anything too, too bad...lol. It's just what people will say...Kohakucrazy on February 24, 2008, 8:26:35 AM
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I can't read any more!!!! Just skip this and go onto something else! Please !!!!! Mikura
winxgirl21 on February 25, 2008, 8:13:51 AM
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lol, he shouldn't screw up majorly...the dinner was the most important part of the night...we'll have to see what everyone says. =)Kohakucrazy on February 23, 2008, 10:46:47 AM
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Poor Naruto...This is gonna be fun.
Mikura
winxgirl21 on February 23, 2008, 11:28:22 AM
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ya, it should be. lol. =)kogalover2013 on February 21, 2008, 6:36:45 AM
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omg omg omg omg omg omg omg dat was awsome dudewinxgirl21 on February 21, 2008, 11:36:10 PM
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=) i'm glad taht you think so. *is trying to stray away from the 'thank yous'lol*QuestionMarks109 on February 18, 2008, 11:50:20 PM
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Omg That is a MEGA SIGN Naruto's gonna screw it upxD
Believe it! -Ninja Dies-
OMG!
winxgirl21 on February 20, 2008, 5:29:52 AM
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haha, he can't do anything too bad...i think...GreyPichu on February 17, 2008, 1:49:31 PM
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wow, he seems so proper, its almost creepy. lol great chapter! ^_^winxgirl21 on February 18, 2008, 9:53:33 AM
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He seems proper as of right now. =) lol.puppydog2 on February 17, 2008, 8:34:54 AM
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Awesome chapter! they are great like the rest of your storyswinxgirl21 on February 18, 2008, 9:51:55 AM
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aw, thanks! *hugs you*puppydog2 on February 18, 2008, 10:45:49 AM
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you welcome wish but could write storys like you(in details at least) but im just too lazywinxgirl21 on February 20, 2008, 5:31:32 AM
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it's not that hard, really. You just have to get into the right mood, and then start writing. =)puppydog2 on February 20, 2008, 6:20:02 AM
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hmmm thanks for the tipwinxgirl21 on February 20, 2008, 6:26:34 AM
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np. =)eelchic on February 17, 2008, 4:15:23 AM
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Omg that was such a great chappe!!! i was smiling and giggling the whole time!!! I'm like so exited for Naruto to meet Hinata's Father that will be an event!! XD
winxgirl21 on February 17, 2008, 5:13:02 AM
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Ya, it will be an event. XDcloudaeris on February 17, 2008, 12:44:06 AM
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omg i can already tell naruto is gonna screw something up..poor kidwinxgirl21 on February 17, 2008, 5:11:49 AM
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Ya, but hopefully for him it won't be too bad. lol.GreyPichu on February 9, 2008, 9:26:34 PM
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lol, Tenten can really slip up i guess. awesome chapter!winxgirl21 on February 10, 2008, 7:52:55 AM
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haha, that's actually something taht i did to one of my friends...and again, and again. Although she's started catching herself now, especially after the time we were no where near the topic of gifts and i said, so what'd you get Meghan for her birthday? XD Thanks so much for commenting!
kogalover2013 on February 9, 2008, 11:48:07 AM
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o come on u cut me off still it was awsomewinxgirl21 on February 10, 2008, 7:46:07 AM
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Thanks! ^-^kogalover2013 on February 11, 2008, 6:25:42 AM
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u deserve it stop thanking me lolwinxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 6:30:21 AM
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lol, but I feel like I don't, and you feel like I do.kogalover2013 on February 11, 2008, 6:33:26 AM
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wat do all ur comments say ur awsome p.s. i read dem before i read da story so i can tell if its good and urs is awsome lolwinxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 6:37:43 AM
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thanks, then. ^-^kogalover2013 on February 11, 2008, 6:39:41 AM
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lol stop tanking me allready gosh lolwinxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 6:43:47 AM
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lol, sorry, old habbit.kogalover2013 on February 11, 2008, 6:48:04 AM
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lol at least u hav mannerswinxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 7:02:11 AM
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lol, ya.kogalover2013 on February 11, 2008, 7:03:38 AM
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lolcloudaeris on February 9, 2008, 11:47:53 AM
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Good Chapter.Twilight series are the best ever.i've read them all.
Happy late b-day & sry u r sick
winxgirl21 on February 10, 2008, 7:44:31 AM
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Thanks! I know. I just want to read the series like a million more times. lol.
eelchic on February 9, 2008, 7:51:50 AM
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! sucks ur still sick,sorry!
My moms getting me Twilight,it looks super good!!
Omg I just know there will be Drama at Hinata's house wit Naruto there,just guessing tho!
Great Chappe interesting!
i do that at my cousins tell people their preswents r awsome and then dnt tell em what it is tho i get that done to me alot my Bros just telll me what im getting once i ask lolz,i shake my prensents then my cousin flicks me! not fun but worth it lolz!!
well great chappe!!!
winxgirl21 on February 10, 2008, 7:41:05 AM
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Thanks!! ^-^ Twilight is super good. it's like addicting. i want to read it like a million more times! XD
Haha, i do that too. And I always end up getting my friends to slip. The thing with tenten and ino happened with my friend and i. And then she caught herself. She did it again for my birthday, too. Although i haven't had my party yet. (I'm just having two friends go to the mall with me to shop, haha.) she says she's determined to nt slip up until then. The problem is she almost told me at lunch. and on the bus, and a lot of otehr places. she'll break eventually. >=)
eelchic on February 10, 2008, 8:00:29 AM
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Most of my friends break very soon! Can't wait to read twilight Im like so exited to get it!!
I know for My B-day next weekend I'm having long sleepover with my bffl,like she sleeping over night of our skool dance and then she going back to her house Monday Prez's day so i get a long weekend.We'll do like a movie er somein. Well enjoy your B-day parte!!! ^^
winxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 6:35:37 AM
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mine used to...lol.Hopefully you'll get to read it soon!
That sounds like fun! I don't even know when my party will be..my mom just tols me that I have to clean my room before I can have it. XD
eelchic on February 11, 2008, 8:03:08 AM
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thats what my daddy told me my room has to be clean to have friends over lol!! and thanks!!winxgirl21 on February 13, 2008, 8:40:15 PM
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lol, I can understand where my mom comes from sometimes...my room looks like a tornado hit it...*sigh* lol.eelchic on February 13, 2008, 8:56:48 PM
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Yah my room has clothes all over the floor i 4got what color my rug is!!*sweatdrops* but i understand 2 i dont think my friend wants to sleep on clothes!! hehe lolwinxgirl21 on February 16, 2008, 5:39:39 AM
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my friend's and i usually sleep in the family room or the playroom...my one friend comes over and sits in my doorway as i try to find the clothes that I need and stuffs. lol.zerotimberwolf on February 9, 2008, 6:44:22 AM
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Naruto may not be the sharpest arrow in the quiver but he'll keep his promise and behave, I'm sure of itwinxgirl21 on February 10, 2008, 7:37:08 AM
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try to behave is more like it, lol.zerotimberwolf on February 10, 2008, 10:57:53 AM
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point taken lolwinxgirl21 on February 11, 2008, 6:39:36 AM
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^-^AnimeAngel87 on February 9, 2008, 6:34:41 AM
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Yea...Hinata's Plan was Better.THIS CHAPPIE IS AWESOME!
winxgirl21 on February 10, 2008, 7:36:12 AM
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lol, ya, it was. thanks for commenting! ^-^AnimeAngel87 on February 13, 2008, 9:28:33 AM
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Yw<3kagome99 on February 4, 2008, 3:47:10 AM
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ooooooo!i sooo cant wait for the next chappie!!!!
YAY!!!!
winxgirl21 on February 4, 2008, 5:48:24 AM
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^-^ Hopefully it'll be up by friday!AlleyCat17 on February 4, 2008, 3:46:38 AM
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yeah awesome chapter and sweet story anyways i can't wait to see what the trip is like.so add a new chappy soon please.winxgirl21 on February 4, 2008, 5:47:56 AM
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Thanks! I'm hoping to update friday. ^-^AnimeAngel87 on February 2, 2008, 9:55:12 AM
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Awww I h8 colds. But this is an awesome chappie. Go TenTen!winxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 9:41:03 PM
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Thanks! And actually, the colds starting to go away, which is awesome! ^-^AnimeAngel87 on February 2, 2008, 11:08:15 PM
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YAY!winxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 11:17:56 PM
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^-^AnimeAngel87 on February 2, 2008, 9:53:15 AM
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OMG AWESOME BEGINNING! CANT WAIT FOR MORE!(goes to next chappie)winxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 9:40:15 PM
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thanks! ^-^GreyPichu on February 2, 2008, 2:11:09 AM
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awesome chapter, and i hope u r feeling better from ur cold!winxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 9:39:41 PM
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thanks! Actually, i'm already starting to feel better, which is great! ^-^kogalover2013 on February 1, 2008, 1:21:06 PM
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soooo cooolll keep it up u should e-mail dis 2 da writter of narutowinxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 12:12:08 AM
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lol, thanks, but this story isn't as good as half the stuff out there, i know that. >.< tehre are a lot more that he would probably rather read than this one.kogalover2013 on February 7, 2008, 1:34:44 PM
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y not ur stuffs awsomewinxgirl21 on February 9, 2008, 12:17:07 AM
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maybe, but there are some fanfictions out there that are just...wow. lol.kogalover2013 on February 1, 2008, 1:14:19 PM
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MY INNER PEPS R SOOOOO INwinxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 12:10:41 AM
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^-^NightWing101 on February 1, 2008, 11:35:46 AM
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I feel sorry..wait... thats right! My parents are like that too! TT-TTOh and I hope you feel better winx
*gives you hot soup*
winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 11:42:27 AM
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parents can be a pain like that. \Thanks, hopefully I'll be better by tuesday. *crosses fingers* right now I just have a runny nose and a cough, everything else is gone...Hot soup! yummy!
cloudaeris on February 1, 2008, 10:41:02 AM
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YAY TENTEN!Her mom sounds like my mom.
winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 10:57:36 AM
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I think her mom is like quite a few moms that I know, although I can't see the ones I know actually giving in..lol.Kohakucrazy on February 1, 2008, 10:03:07 AM
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teen life can suck... Eh Tenten?Great Chapter..
Zakuro
winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 10:56:17 AM
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ya, it can..Thanks! ^-^eelchic on February 1, 2008, 9:14:11 AM
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Yeahness Tenten gets to go!!! Awsome chapter!!!That is so freaky I was relly sick with avirus which turned into asinus infection I hav to get more meds 2marrow!! I hate getting sick you fall so far behind & i was out the week b4 the grading period was over so i didnt have as high grades i would have liked!!
Well I hope you catch up and feeel better!!!^^ Again great chappe cant wait 4 next!!
winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 9:43:41 AM
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yes, she does! Thanks! Actually, my mom made me go to school. She said I wasn't sick enough to stay home. >.< Although everyone in my all my classes have been in and out with the same thing. I hope that you get better, too, and that you catch up with your work!
eelchic on February 1, 2008, 10:02:25 AM
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thanx I ve just finnished taking my last test 2day! Aw I hate it when my dad tells me i have to go to skool :( and I just feel like sleeping and I just end up getting sent home anyways lol Well brite side no catch up work!^^
winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 11:00:46 AM
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that's good, then. ^-^ My teachers don't send us home, but i wasn't even paying attention in most of my classes. when i'm sick, I get tired, and for some other reason, I draw a lot...>.< lol. so my notebooks are filled with sketches instead of notes.zerotimberwolf on February 1, 2008, 8:01:29 AM
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Cool so everyone is going. I cant wait for the chapter where Naruto meets Hinatas family >:Dwinxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 9:40:00 AM
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lol, I'm not sure when that'll be yet. lol. I already have a few ideas for it, though XDzerotimberwolf on February 2, 2008, 1:20:31 AM
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sweet!!winxgirl21 on February 2, 2008, 9:41:43 PM
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^-^kagome99 on February 1, 2008, 5:26:19 AM
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YAY!!!!!CANT WAIT!
winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 6:53:13 AM
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hopefully the next chapter will be done later tonight or early tomorrow. ^-^kagome99 on February 1, 2008, 6:56:32 AM
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YAY!!!^^winxgirl21 on February 1, 2008, 6:59:48 AM
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^-^GreyPichu on January 27, 2008, 8:44:47 PM
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yay!winxgirl21 on January 28, 2008, 5:25:29 AM
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^-^Kohakucrazy on January 27, 2008, 8:57:16 AM
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Ino's dad owns a ski lodge? Hey can I come? I love skiing. It's fun.. Although I can only do cross country... When I did downhill my back side was my break and I couldn't sit for almost two weeks... Great so far.. Plz continue.
Zakuro
winxgirl21 on January 28, 2008, 5:24:59 AM
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Of course he owns a ski lodge! lol. I've never actually skied before..hehe, the story is going to be based on what my friends have told me, which is a nice amount. ^-^eelchic on January 26, 2008, 8:24:21 AM
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OMG I so love this story!!!Im like so exited!!
Yeah Naruto gets to meet Hinata's fam Omg its gonna be so great!!!
I can't wait 4 this story 2 continue!!!
Yeahness!!!
winxgirl21 on January 26, 2008, 11:32:29 PM
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lol, thanks! Ya, he does...It should be interesting...lol.hflp on January 26, 2008, 7:01:17 AM
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This story sounds good.winxgirl21 on January 26, 2008, 11:29:32 PM
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I'm glad that you think so. ^-^puppydog2 on January 25, 2008, 9:37:53 PM
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sweet!winxgirl21 on January 26, 2008, 12:24:20 AM
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thanks! ^-^cloudaeris on January 25, 2008, 9:14:30 AM
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Sounds Good.I can't wait to see what your ideas are.winxgirl21 on January 26, 2008, 12:22:49 AM
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thanks! ^-^ Hopefully you'll like them. most of them involve a lot of drama...zerotimberwolf on January 25, 2008, 8:56:22 AM
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This is going to be great I can tell ;Dwinxgirl21 on January 26, 2008, 12:21:59 AM
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thanks, hopefully it will be great...^-^