Chapter 1 - pain
Submitted December 20, 2004 Updated December 20, 2004 Status Incomplete | i wrote this while i was in cross countey if no one knows what it is it hurts okay i mean you feel as if your legs will fall off.
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Chapter 1 - pain
Chapter 1 - pain
Pain
Silent, hurtful, swift
As it tears through your body hitting every nerve it can.
While you wince and it smiles and laughs.
But you look at it as it looks at you and you push through while you push your muscles harder and harder to finish a race. Pain looks at you in disbelief and goes without a word
Leaving you to only feel the numbness after you finish. But you know that Pain will be back the next time you run.
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babywolfkitten on January 22, 2005, 12:51:34 AM
wow cool poemy thingy, i ran in a 26.2 mile marathon(in l.a.) before and it is exactly like that...except im really happy when i run and finish AND THEN RUN AGAIN! lolRandomobssesedeasilyentertaine on January 10, 2005, 2:58:31 PM
OMG STILL LOVEN IT I REREAD IT AND IT ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!U R THE BESTEST!!!!!
LOVE YA
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Randomobssesedeasilyentertaine on January 10, 2005, 2:57:50 PM
OMG OMG OMG OMG THIS ROCKS!!!!! DUDE RUNNING IN A RACE HAS TONS OF ADRENILINE AND IT DOES HURT!!!!! U R THE BEST WRITER EVER!!!!!!!WOOT YAY GO WOLFCHICK!!!!!!!!!!!!
U ROCK OUT LOUD!!!!!!!!!
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