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Chapter 1 - Untitled

basically how i feel every day of my life.....rather quite sad....

i dont care if u comment or not but at least read it :p
*THIS IS A POEM

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


Pain



The sorrow of a million restless souls

True unhappiness tearing at the seams

Death is waiting at its poles

Love is impossible---wake up from that dream!

The helping hand, the caring face

Flushed out into the depths of rain

I took you in, and my heart raced

Now I'm trapped in my own pain

Never ending anguish, o the horrid I feel

You can never guess what pain I can deal…….



Angela LaMorgese

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lemony_chan on December 30, 2008, 1:01:27 AM

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lemony_chanI really like the tearing at the seams of death. ._. Sounds cool. And the wake up from that dream!! Its just like . . . WHOAH! Holy crap. -_- Sorry I'm terrible at giving feedback. Nice poem! :D

lemony_chan on December 30, 2008, 1:02:22 AM

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lemony_chanWait, How is this a tutorial? ._.

wolverinedeathmaster14 on July 20, 2006, 4:41:58 PM

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wolverinedeathmaster14tony/seta:love cant be impossible ... :|