heartbroken and shatterd
Submitted May 31, 2007 Updated July 15, 2007 Status Complete | These are a bunch of poems I write to get everything off my mind. They're pretty easy to understand for the most part. But they're all about my 1 true love.
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - doesn't matter
Submitted: May 31, 2007 • Updated: May 31, 2007
Word count: 83 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 149
Chapter 2 - too good to be true
Submitted: May 31, 2007 • Updated: May 31, 2007
Word count: 173 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 155
Chapter 3 - My star
Submitted: May 31, 2007 • Updated: May 31, 2007
Word count: 159 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 169
Chapter 4 - Trapped
Submitted: July 15, 2007 • Updated: July 15, 2007
Word count: 388 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 171
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zerotimberwolf on October 4, 2007, 8:30:22 PM
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I'm typing a few of my poemszerotimberwolf on October 2, 2007, 8:39:05 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 4)
O.O this is incrediblezerotimberwolf on October 2, 2007, 8:36:43 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 3)
Sounds like something i would writezerotimberwolf on October 2, 2007, 8:34:34 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 2)
wowzerotimberwolf on October 2, 2007, 8:33:28 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 1)
Thats deep. Makes me think I should type my poems.hayly125 on September 26, 2007, 4:00:40 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 3)
oh celeste *sniff* im so sorry! Its a beautiful peom!!! WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! sorry being a little emeotional right now... just giv me a sec... *cries* ok im done!!xheartxbrokenx13 on September 26, 2007, 10:32:44 AM
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lol u dorkhayly125 on September 26, 2007, 3:57:51 AM
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its so filled with passion! i luv it celeste... i sometimes feel that way too.xheartxbrokenx13 on September 26, 2007, 10:32:33 AM
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really when??hayly125 on September 27, 2007, 1:54:05 AM
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well i dont really remeber when but i know i felt that way some point in my life...hayly125 on September 26, 2007, 3:55:18 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 1)
wow.. lots of feeling in this i say. its a very nice peom.xheartxbrokenx13 on September 26, 2007, 10:32:18 AM
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thanks......XxAnarKissedxX on September 1, 2007, 5:42:09 AM
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Very powerfully written....really sad however....
Amazing job either way!
xheartxbrokenx13 on September 1, 2007, 6:21:45 AM
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Thanks!!XxAnarKissedxX on September 1, 2007, 5:43:26 AM
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I've had experiences where I felt like that....This is really amazing, really...
<3
xheartxbrokenx13 on September 1, 2007, 6:21:31 AM
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I actually worte this one about 2 peoplemy grandma who passed away
and if u read any other things like about me and heidi....I worte it about Heidi
XxAnarKissedxX on September 1, 2007, 5:44:43 AM
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-cries-Omg...I can't even think of a word to describe this....
xheartxbrokenx13 on September 1, 2007, 6:20:41 AM
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lol ty!!XxAnarKissedxX on September 1, 2007, 5:45:34 AM
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Wow....just....wow....Depressing perfection....
xheartxbrokenx13 on September 1, 2007, 6:20:24 AM
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actually this one was about getting raped or molested....not heart broken but tygaaralover1 on July 16, 2007, 1:06:24 PM
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*sniff* OMG * Cries* We're the same..xheartxbrokenx13 on July 31, 2007, 11:24:48 AM
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i doubt it...but which poem did u like best?gaaralover1 on July 31, 2007, 11:28:55 AM
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All of them.. And no problem about the song writing thing... Gives me an excuse to write one. ^^ I gots nothing better to do during the summer break and also I dun have to baby sit so this gives me something to do... If you want my MSN or E-mail it's on my file.. But let me know if ur adding and also send an E-mail letting me know who you are... I'll let you know when the songs are done.xheartxbrokenx13 on August 1, 2007, 1:02:17 AM
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lol kk!! thanks so much!! and I'm glad you liked them!! *hugz* [[♥Celeste♥]]gaaralover1 on July 16, 2007, 1:04:03 PM
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ok.. *sniff* That was a great poem * Sniffle* Makes me think about my personal life.. * Sob* * Cries*xheartxbrokenx13 on July 31, 2007, 11:24:32 AM
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lol wat poem?gaaralover1 on July 16, 2007, 1:01:38 PM
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Question... I write songs... Do you want me to make a song for your poems?? I can do it if you want... Just ask me on my profile. If you don't want me too then it's ok.xheartxbrokenx13 on July 31, 2007, 11:24:15 AM
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lol aww!! thatd be great!! thanks!!gaaralover1 on August 8, 2007, 12:53:09 PM
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Two songs are writen and edited onto my com... One is writen waiting to be edited one still to write...xheartxbrokenx13 on August 8, 2007, 1:53:06 PM
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ok cool!! just send them to me in an e mail if you want.abcd123inuyasha on July 15, 2007, 10:17:21 AM
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wow! this is a really horrible experience!!! thats sooo sad!! im sorry!!! this is a very unveiling story though!!! nioe job!