Chapter 5 - Demons

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Dig Deep

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zerotimberwolf

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October 2, 2007
Updated
December 13, 2008
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I write some poetry but not often, this is some of my work.

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Chapter 5 - Demons

Demons

I have no horns
But they are there
We all have demons
That we all share

Their from the past
Their from the present
The bodies inner cast
I'm this monsters peasant

His puppet on a string
I always do its bidding
Forced to bow to this king
I wish I was only dreaming

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crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:55:20 AM

this sounds like someone was being used and they were crying out for help

FreezingRain on November 4, 2007, 10:11:11 AM

Yeah this is one of my faves too

aeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:46:51 AM

ya we ALL hav demons somewhere...hey u dont hav 2 make it rhyme, ya kno.

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 9:07:48 AM

i know

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:21:24 AM

now this one is probably one of my favorites they are all my faves but this sounds somewhat like someone i knew a long time ago before he died.....=[

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:28:06 AM

he died at 14...... demons remind me of him because he had such a bad past his name was Kevin Willow Daniels i knew him since 1st grade to 6th his past was so horrible because his father and mother both died in fact i am tryin to make a story about him...... then his foster parents abused him and he died from his foster father shooting him with a shotgun and he ran and was blinded by it and he almost survived but ..... you will find out in the story..... it makes me so sad because he was soo nice and smart and he was really really good looking and cute!!!=[

FreezingRain on October 21, 2007, 2:07:17 AM

Kaitlyn what is your problem, you say every boy you used to know is cute

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:34:54 AM

he didn't have any other family both his mother and father were only childs and his granpa and grandma an great aunt and uncle hadc already died..... he was alone but he was one of my best friends.....

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:32:41 AM

thats something nobody should go through =(

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:23:11 AM

who?

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:31:40 AM

kevin daniels {yes his middle name is willow it was originally adam but he didn't like and changed it for his parents....}

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:33:39 AM

dealing with someones death is not easy

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:35:33 AM

ya..... especially since he was so kind and caring of others...

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:36:39 AM

my father was like that

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:38:15 AM

thats nice to here you seemed to be like that nice and all

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:39:51 AM

yeah he was my best friend

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:46:36 AM

was...? i am sorry did something.... happen??? sorry if i am bringing something you don't want to talk about.... you don't have to!...=[

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:56:44 AM

he died a few years ago but I'm fine now. I understand death

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 5:03:12 AM

o i am so sorry....
how old are you now???

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 5:03:43 AM

xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 5:06:40 AM

oooooooooo just wonderin just cause... i still feel sad for you though...

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 11:37:38 AM

cause what?

zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 5:36:05 AM

no its ok dont be