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Chapter 1 - general okasama

zuko needs a trainer and they got him one but what happens when their feelings towrd each other start to grow.i tried to fix it but i don't know if it worked but i still suck at stories and sumeries

Chapter 1 - general okasama

Chapter 1 - general okasama

Come on prince zuko were going to be late. I’m not going in don’t care what you say I won’t go.why? You need a trainer and they need a trainee.i have a trainer…. you.i’m tired and so are the gaurds and lutenet.also I need some of my own time that doesn’t include training you….. and I’m sure that I speak for everyone on this ship when I say that.fine.you win, I’ll go but I don’t need it I’m telling you I can teach myself If no one else will.good.besides I’m sure you’ll like them(uncle iroh gets a secretive simrky smile)*zuko, uncle iroh, and some guards walk down a road and a girl zuko’s age and a bunch of guards come towards them*hello you must be prince zuko.yes and you are? General okasama.your new trainer.*zuko looks surprised*uh…uh…uh…….yes? So okasama? Call me sheena.*uncle iroh leans in*he likes you.*sheena laughs and kinda blushes while zuko blushes madly*UNCLE! come on the ship sheena and have some tea I have left over. Be lucky he has some left over the big pig. HAHAHAHA! That was HALARIOUS! Hahahaha! *gasping for breath*I’m….sorry…..but…that…was…just…so..funny. Haha! Your right it was funny!*uncle iroh staring at both of them falling on the ground laughing so hard* o…ok I think I’m done.me too.let’s go on the ship and I’ll show you around.ok.this is my room, and that is uncle iroh’s room,and this right here is your room.thanks.i’ll probably need that later.ok…well it’s getting late and we need to rest if were going to get a good start at training tomorrow.ok goodnight zuko.goodnight.*the next day*you really need to work on that move some more.i know.i’m not that great at it yet, uncle iroh tried to teach me but I never really got it.well…..so far for me I think that your doing great,a lot better than some commanders and generals that I tought. YOU TOUGHT COMMANDERS AND GENERALS! Yep,not to brag but I’m pretty good.i’ve been training since I was able to walk,my dad was pretty competitive and wanted my to be to ‘cause my sister just wanted to be good at everything she did or else she didn’t like it. So what made you leave home and come here? Uh….It’s a long story,you probably wouldn’t want to hear…I’ve got time. We need to train that’s what I’m here for right? Yeah I guess but I thought that shirly you…hey…don’t call me Shirley. Let’s go train.ok.*night time*

Flashback

Hey that’s my doll you can’t have it liv! I wanna play with it and you weren’t using it so gimmie it sheena! Mom!dad! liv won’t gimmie my doll and I wanna…..*earthbenders bust down the door and everyone screams*AHHH! Mommy!go hide in the closet hurry! Liv we’ve got to help mommy come on!*they come out of the closet and their parents are both lying there dead*MOMMY!DADDY!NO!sheena we’ve got to get out of here.but what about mommy and daddy?there’s nothing we can do now hurry run!ahh!get away from me you stinky earthbenders!*shoots flames at them*we lost ‘em sheena it’s ok you can get of now.sheena get off of my back,rides over…were safe.why are you crying were ok.i’m ok.yea…but mommy and daddy aren’t.liv,we should split up,it’s time we go our separate ways now.what! your nuts!your only seven you can’t off alone I promised mom that If anything happened I’d take care of you.think about it liv…..if we split up then it will be harder for the earthbenders to find us.ok you got me there. we’ll split up from here on but you have you have to promise me something.what? You’ll take care of your self, stay out of trouble, be safe, and keep in touch with me so I’ll know that your safe, ok? Ok.goodbye, I love you.bye sheena. *a few years later when sheena’s about ten*err….let me go! Not until we get there.where is there exactly?facing your fears.duh!but could you be a little more specific….wow.why are we here?it..it…it’s general zhao.well what a surprise.sheena okasama.what do you want monkey-man? You know what I want. I do? I want your powers! What! Why! You can already firebend why do you need my firebending? I don’t want your firebending, I want your telekinesis. What!? You know what. My power’s that my mom had? It’s genetics. You know you have and now I’m going to get them. Get the device! *gets this little device necklace thing*NO! *black beams shoot out of her hands and her eyes turn white*ahh! It’s her powers! LEAVE ME ALONE! RUN! Ah, my head hurts, I’ve got to get out of here……

End Flashback

Ahh! Sheena? Are you ok, I heard you scream? I’m fine just a bad dream. Ok. If you need anything I’m right here. Ok, thanks.

Well that’s the end of chapter one pretty crappy story I know but I can’t help It I just wasn’t meant to right stories but it will become more of a love story srry bout the cruddy- ness but like I said I wasn’t meant to write stories

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jesslovesbilly82 on August 6, 2005, 3:43:13 AM

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jesslovesbilly82i love zuko and so dose mangacheese1818. hahahaaha were dighting over zuko so i picked sokka so can have him. ^.^

mangacheese1818 on August 2, 2005, 10:30:57 AM

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mangacheese1818Yu know, there is a way to update it. (just add to the file and click edit story.)

mangacheese1818 on July 31, 2005, 5:25:30 AM

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mangacheese1818It doesn't suck! Zuko's personality has changed a little in this story, but it's still good!

zuko_the_hottie_rocks on July 24, 2005, 10:31:11 AM

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zuko_the_hottie_rocksyeah i know but i didn't really think about it at the time(i still think it sucks)

mangacheese1818 on July 23, 2005, 10:21:23 PM

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mangacheese1818The story is cool, but you should specify who's talking.

jesslovesbilly82 on July 18, 2005, 6:16:33 PM

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jesslovesbilly82that was sooo good and cool.

zuko_the_hottie_rocks on July 14, 2005, 10:36:56 PM

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zuko_the_hottie_rocksi new it was crappy but people plz!!!