Tachzaruu
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Username | Tachzaruu | Gender | Female |
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i love drawing and writing about xiaolin showdown. it has completely taken over my soul. chase young is my favourite character, but i also love jack spicer. i wish he was real because it is one of my dreams to have him as a boyfriend.
If you want to read my stories then look up Tachzaruu on fanfiction.net
This is a poem i wrote about why chase young traded his soul and emotions. its called 'Dark Emotions'. i hope you like.
p.s: I am perfectly aware that the rhyming pattern is constantly changing, but that is how i wanted to write it.
p.p.s:I'd really appreciate some feedback so please, please comment...
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DARK EMOTIONS
She was gone. Gone.
Vanished without a trace.
She promised that it wouldn’t be long
Before I once again saw her face.
But she lied to me
Bade goodbye to me
And walked into the night.
I cried to her
Whispered goodbye to her
And so vanished the light.
I waited for her promised return
But it soon began to dawn
That no matter how much I yearn
She would be forever gone.
My heart began to blacken
And in anger my fists clenched
My mind began to slacken
Something inside me was wrenched.
The years passed and my strength grew
But even as I battled
My heart still ached right down to
The core and my emotions prattled.
No matter how much I fought
I couldn’t escape even as I sought
Release from the all these writhing feelings
And the rage that dwelled within me.
Emotions pricked and tore at me
Revelling in my red fury
It was unbearable to be like this
This was my ultimate weakness.
When I could bear the pain no longer
I summoned the services of the demon
I did not even sit to ponder
I rashly demanded my freedom
From these emotions which tore inside
The compassion in me I could no longer abide.
I traded my feelings and my soul
For a potion that would grant me eternal life
Without emotions I am an empty hole
Now my pleasure is gained from other’s strife.
My mind is calm, my emotions dead
And now my heart is bound to evil
My enemies my presence dread
The worms, so helpless and so feeble.
When I have no potion, I
Become a fearsome form
For centuries this I have borne
With empty, golden eyes.
Sometimes I still sit and ponder
Why she left, where did she wonder?
Perhaps because she had already seen
The monster that has become me.
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There. I hope you like! :)
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Requests:
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If you want to read my stories then look up Tachzaruu on fanfiction.net
This is a poem i wrote about why chase young traded his soul and emotions. its called 'Dark Emotions'. i hope you like.
p.s: I am perfectly aware that the rhyming pattern is constantly changing, but that is how i wanted to write it.
p.p.s:I'd really appreciate some feedback so please, please comment...
_______________________________________________________
DARK EMOTIONS
She was gone. Gone.
Vanished without a trace.
She promised that it wouldn’t be long
Before I once again saw her face.
But she lied to me
Bade goodbye to me
And walked into the night.
I cried to her
Whispered goodbye to her
And so vanished the light.
I waited for her promised return
But it soon began to dawn
That no matter how much I yearn
She would be forever gone.
My heart began to blacken
And in anger my fists clenched
My mind began to slacken
Something inside me was wrenched.
The years passed and my strength grew
But even as I battled
My heart still ached right down to
The core and my emotions prattled.
No matter how much I fought
I couldn’t escape even as I sought
Release from the all these writhing feelings
And the rage that dwelled within me.
Emotions pricked and tore at me
Revelling in my red fury
It was unbearable to be like this
This was my ultimate weakness.
When I could bear the pain no longer
I summoned the services of the demon
I did not even sit to ponder
I rashly demanded my freedom
From these emotions which tore inside
The compassion in me I could no longer abide.
I traded my feelings and my soul
For a potion that would grant me eternal life
Without emotions I am an empty hole
Now my pleasure is gained from other’s strife.
My mind is calm, my emotions dead
And now my heart is bound to evil
My enemies my presence dread
The worms, so helpless and so feeble.
When I have no potion, I
Become a fearsome form
For centuries this I have borne
With empty, golden eyes.
Sometimes I still sit and ponder
Why she left, where did she wonder?
Perhaps because she had already seen
The monster that has become me.
__________________________________________
There. I hope you like! :)
__________________________________________
Requests:
I_AM_OPEN_FOR_REQUESTS_._
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ooh, yesh please, that sounds awsome! i also wanted to ask you something. I'm in this stage where i'm trying to adapt characters to this new style i'm working on, and i was wondering which of your characters you'd like me to draw - i don't mind either if you want me to do more than one of your characters (i do really need to work on my group pics XD).
how are you by the way?
:D
how are you by the way?
:D
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hey thanks for the comments, i really appreciate them. Also i may get to a jack spicer and kimiko pic. After watching the movie army of darkness(evil dead 3), the image of how to pose it just popped up, and now for the love of that movie i must do this pic.
P.S. if you love comedy movies, army of d. is a great classic. SO GET OUT THERE AND WATCH IT.
P.S. if you love comedy movies, army of d. is a great classic. SO GET OUT THERE AND WATCH IT.
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Study Hall is like a class period when you can do homework or sleep or basically whatever you want as long as you stay in your seat (unless you need to ask someone else something) and don't talk constantly (unless you're discussing what you asked). It's pretty boring if you don't have anything to do, but I always have a drawing pad with me and do the homework there, so I like it. Study Hall's probably the only reason why I'm passing. ^_^
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I'm going to try to hold a contest. It's my first one
I think Jack Spicer really needs some friends, in the show everyone doesn't like him.
so for my contest you'de need to make up an OC. a friend for Jack. ^^ should also have some info about the OC ^^
I know i stink at comming up with contests but whould you like to enter?
I think Jack Spicer really needs some friends, in the show everyone doesn't like him.
so for my contest you'de need to make up an OC. a friend for Jack. ^^ should also have some info about the OC ^^
I know i stink at comming up with contests but whould you like to enter?
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zukosavatarofthesunandmoon on November 12, 2006, 1:32:50 AM
hey there about your question yes but that was years ago. about 3 years ago exactly. I lived in florida where I used to take lessons then I moved to cayman. then I saw the episode "screams of a siren" and it made me think about how I used to be able to ride the ice. Now all I have are skates full of memories
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this will make you cry...
Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.
READ AND PASS ON TO AT LEAST 10 PEOPLE
Please listen to this angel's request......
If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you.
Please....do it for Jenny.
Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.
Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.................................
Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.
READ AND PASS ON TO AT LEAST 10 PEOPLE
Please listen to this angel's request......
If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you.
Please....do it for Jenny.
Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.
Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.................................
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Umm, you know how Wuya phases through his head and gives him that, ooky feeling?
Well, in a story I never managed to write, she get's stuck and can't leave his body for a day. However, Wuay's emotions mix with Jacks and make him Haelyn-Jack...where he actually starts to act like Chase, all sly and such...
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Anyhoo, needler makes no sence! XD Oh and yay, requests, I should do some!
Well, in a story I never managed to write, she get's stuck and can't leave his body for a day. However, Wuay's emotions mix with Jacks and make him Haelyn-Jack...where he actually starts to act like Chase, all sly and such...
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Anyhoo, needler makes no sence! XD Oh and yay, requests, I should do some!
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Thank you for your many comments. Regarding the winter goddess picture, it seemed like you thought I drew it on Paint but really I drew it by hand. I could NOT do something like that on Paint that's for sure! lol No problem though. Her neck is a little fat isn't it? Usually I don't have trouble with that. Thanx for saying I'm good at drawing hands but I'm really not that great at them! You're sweet though! Thanx again!
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Aw heck **blushes** I don't mind blathering! Thank you so much for every single one of your comments- you are definitely the best commenter I know! **Hugs tight**
I just don't know how to show you how much gratitude I feel- I know it's just comments, but to me, when people tell me why they like what I do it makes it all worthwhile ^__^
Oh- check out my profile page, I'm starting a project and am wondering whether you'd like to join in. It's noting that involves work for anybody but me, though, so it's not like a commitment or anything :)
I just don't know how to show you how much gratitude I feel- I know it's just comments, but to me, when people tell me why they like what I do it makes it all worthwhile ^__^
Oh- check out my profile page, I'm starting a project and am wondering whether you'd like to join in. It's noting that involves work for anybody but me, though, so it's not like a commitment or anything :)
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